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arccosinus

Feb. 4, 2020

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INFLATABLE SWIMMING POOL

Have a tough time taking an inflatable swimming pool back home having no fastening equipment? Not an issue until you have your children beside!
Today we are going to find out about Jennifer Yeager, 49. She is from Dixon, Illinois and she ran into some problem. She needed to inflate her swimming pool although she didn’t have any equipment to do that. That was when her friends came in handy since they had an air compressor to get the swimming pool inflated. She took off to visit her friends on Tuesday, July 9th in 2019 in the morning but was ultimately arrested in just a couple of hours. What was the reason you ask? Well, let’s just say she used something weird to hold the pool down to the car as she drove her way back home. Now, logic creatures as we are, one reasonable question would probably cross our mind. The question is: “Why the hell you need to take your swimming pool on the other side of the city, get it inflated and, being inflated, take it back home?” Can’t you just borrow an air compressor for a while? If you wondered this very question, great news! That wasn’t the worst thing she did that day. Because she used both of her children to hold the pool down as she was driving her way back home! The witnesses quickly called the cops and she was pulled over and arrested on two counts of endangering the health or life of a child and two counts of reckless conduct at 3 pm that day. During the investigation, it was also discovered that her two daughters were juveniles – one was of the age of 8 and the other was of the age of 16.
You had better think every side of your inflating swimming pool operation all the way through before using your children instead of a fastening mechanism!

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Have a tough time taking an inflatable swimming pool back home havingwith no fastening equipment?

Not an issue until you have your children beside you!

Today we are going to find outlearn about Jennifer Yeager, 49.

She is from Dixon, Illinois and she's raun into somea problem.

She needed to inflate her swimming pool although, but she didn’t have any equipment to do that.

That was when her friends came in handy since they had an air compressor to get the swimming pool inflatedgetting the swimming pool inflated since they had an air compressor.

She took offwent to visit her friends on Tuesday, July 9th in, 2019 in the morning but was ultimately arrested in just a couple of hours.

Well, let’s just say she used something weird to hold the pool down to the car as she drove her way backwas driving home.

Now, as logical creatures as we are, one reasonable question wshould probably cross our mind.

The question is: “Why the hell would you need to take your swimming pool ton the other side of the city, get it inflated, and, after being inflated, take it back home?” Can’t you just borrow an air compressor for a while? If you wondered? If you asked yourself this very question, great news! That wasn’t the worst thing she did that day. Because sShe used both of her children to hold the pool down as she was driving her way back home! The wWitnesses quickly called the cops and at 3pm that day, she was pulled over and arrested on two counts of endangering the health or life of a child and two counts of reckless conduct at 3 pm that day. During the investigation, it was also discovered that her two daughters were juveniles – one was of the age of 8 and the other was of the age of 16.

You had better think every side of your inflating swimming pool operation all the way through before using your children
instead ofas a fastening mechanism!

INFLATABLE SWIMMING POOLnflatable Swimming Pool

Have a tough time taking an inflatable swimming pool back home having no fastening equipmentwith no equipment to tie it down?

Not anThere's no issue untilif you have your children besidewith you!

Today we are going to find out about Jennifer Yeager, 49.

She is from Dixon, Illinois, and she ran into somea problem.

She needed to inflate her swimming pool although, but she didn't have anythe proper equipment to do thatso.

That was when her friends came in handy, since they had an air compressor that could be used to get the swimming pool inflated.

She took off to visit her friends on the morning of Tuesday, July 9th in, 2019 in the morning, but was ultimately arrested in just a couple of hours later.

What was the reason, you ask?

Well, let’s just say she used something weird to hold the pool down to the car as she drove her way back home.

Now, us being logic creatures as we are, one reasonable question would probably cross our mind.

The question is: “Why the hell ywou need told you take your swimming pool ton the other side of the city, get it inflated, and, being inflated, then take it back home? Can’ouldn't you just borrow an air compressor for a while?" If you wondered this very question, great news! That wasn’t the worst thing she did that day. Because sheJennifer Yeager used both of her children to hold the pool down as she was driving her way back home! The wWitnesses quickly called the cops, and sheYeager was pulled over and arrested on two counts of endangering the health or life of a child and, plus two counts of reckless conduct at 3 pm that day. During the investigation, it was also discovered that her two daughters were juveniles – one was of the age of 8 and the other was of the age of 16. nly eight years old, and the other was sixteen.
You had better think every side of your inflat
ingable swimming pool operation all the way through before using your children instead of a fastening mechanism!

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zinnia

Feb. 4, 2020

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Bees,
I enjoyed reading your revisions. Would you please tell me how you created that last set of revisions by clumping the whole paragraph together? I've only made a few reviews here but can only see the option to do them line by line.

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Bees

Feb. 6, 2020

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I didn't clump them together like that. The system that divides each sentence into its own element gets a little weird when quotations are involved. I hear that it will be fixed with the next site update, or at least sometime soon :)

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zinnia

Feb. 6, 2020

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OK.. Thank you. :D

INFLATABLE SWIMMING POOL


INFLATABLE SWIMMING POOLnflatable Swimming Pool

Have a tough time taking an inflatable swimming pool back home having no fastening equipment?


Have a tough time taking an inflatable swimming pool back home having no fastening equipmentwith no equipment to tie it down?

Have a tough time taking an inflatable swimming pool back home havingwith no fastening equipment?

Not an issue until you have your children beside!


Not anThere's no issue untilif you have your children besidewith you!

Not an issue until you have your children beside you!

Today we are going to find out about Jennifer Yeager, 49.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today we are going to find outlearn about Jennifer Yeager, 49.

She is from Dixon, Illinois and she ran into some problem.


She is from Dixon, Illinois, and she ran into somea problem.

She is from Dixon, Illinois and she's raun into somea problem.

She needed to inflate her swimming pool although she didn’t have any equipment to do that.


She needed to inflate her swimming pool although, but she didn't have anythe proper equipment to do thatso.

She needed to inflate her swimming pool although, but she didn’t have any equipment to do that.

That was when her friends came in handy since they had an air compressor to get the swimming pool inflated.


That was when her friends came in handy, since they had an air compressor that could be used to get the swimming pool inflated.

That was when her friends came in handy since they had an air compressor to get the swimming pool inflatedgetting the swimming pool inflated since they had an air compressor.

She took off to visit her friends on Tuesday, July 9th in 2019 in the morning but was ultimately arrested in just a couple of hours.


She took off to visit her friends on the morning of Tuesday, July 9th in, 2019 in the morning, but was ultimately arrested in just a couple of hours later.

She took offwent to visit her friends on Tuesday, July 9th in, 2019 in the morning but was ultimately arrested in just a couple of hours.

What was the reason you ask?


What was the reason, you ask?

Well, let’s just say she used something weird to hold the pool down to the car as she drove her way back home.


Well, let’s just say she used something weird to hold the pool down to the car as she drove her way back home.

Well, let’s just say she used something weird to hold the pool down to the car as she drove her way backwas driving home.

Now, logic creatures as we are, one reasonable question would probably cross our mind.


Now, us being logic creatures as we are, one reasonable question would probably cross our mind.

Now, as logical creatures as we are, one reasonable question wshould probably cross our mind.

The question is: “Why the hell you need to take your swimming pool on the other side of the city, get it inflated and, being inflated, take it back home?” Can’t you just borrow an air compressor for a while? If you wondered this very question, great news! That wasn’t the worst thing she did that day. Because she used both of her children to hold the pool down as she was driving her way back home! The witnesses quickly called the cops and she was pulled over and arrested on two counts of endangering the health or life of a child and two counts of reckless conduct at 3 pm that day. During the investigation, it was also discovered that her two daughters were juveniles – one was of the age of 8 and the other was of the age of 16. You had better think every side of your inflating swimming pool operation all the way through before using your children instead of a fastening mechanism!


The question is: “Why the hell ywou need told you take your swimming pool ton the other side of the city, get it inflated, and, being inflated, then take it back home? Can’ouldn't you just borrow an air compressor for a while?" If you wondered this very question, great news! That wasn’t the worst thing she did that day. Because sheJennifer Yeager used both of her children to hold the pool down as she was driving her way back home! The wWitnesses quickly called the cops, and sheYeager was pulled over and arrested on two counts of endangering the health or life of a child and, plus two counts of reckless conduct at 3 pm that day. During the investigation, it was also discovered that her two daughters were juveniles – one was of the age of 8 and the other was of the age of 16. nly eight years old, and the other was sixteen.
You had better think every side of your inflat
ingable swimming pool operation all the way through before using your children instead of a fastening mechanism!

The question is: “Why the hell would you need to take your swimming pool ton the other side of the city, get it inflated, and, after being inflated, take it back home?” Can’t you just borrow an air compressor for a while? If you wondered? If you asked yourself this very question, great news! That wasn’t the worst thing she did that day. Because sShe used both of her children to hold the pool down as she was driving her way back home! The wWitnesses quickly called the cops and at 3pm that day, she was pulled over and arrested on two counts of endangering the health or life of a child and two counts of reckless conduct at 3 pm that day. During the investigation, it was also discovered that her two daughters were juveniles – one was of the age of 8 and the other was of the age of 16.

You had better think every side of your inflating swimming pool operation all the way through before using your children
instead ofas a fastening mechanism!

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