Dec. 2, 2021
Inequality And Violence.
Some people think that Inequality is enough reason to guarantee violence in families, but others think that there is none reason for violence family.
Experts believe that inequality increase hard feelings in human being. Frustration, hopelessness, anxiety are some of them. The worst is that many people exploit these feelings against their own families through violence.
On the other hand, specialists think that everyone is capable of taking decisions about who want to be or what kind of person will become. They support this idea with examples of people that grew up in violent families, but they took the decision to become a better person. These specialists believe that to accept this kind of behavior for any reason, it is a way to embrace violence.
In conclusion, some people justify violence because external factors that develops the violent situation and others do not, because every people has capacity of election.
Inequality Aand Violence.
Some people think that Iinequality is enough reason to guarantee violence in families, but others think that there is none reason for violence in the family.
Experts believe that inequality increase hard feelings negative emotions in human beings.
Frustration, hopelessness, anxiety are some of them.
The worst is that many people exploitress these feelings against their own families through violence.
Instead of 'express', you can use 'manifest'.
On the other hand, specialists think that everyone is capable of taking decisions about who they want to be or what kind of person they will become.
They support this idea with examples of people that grew up in violent families, but they took the decision to become a better personople.
These specialists believe that to accept this kind ofill behavior for any reason, it is a way to embrace violence.
For the reader to better understand your essay, you should expound on what 'this' behavior is.
In conclusion, some people justify violence because of external factors that develops the violent situation and others do not, because every peoplerson has the capacity of electionchoose.
Usage of the word 'election' is wrong in this context.
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Dec. 3, 2021
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Inequality And Violence. Inequality |
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Some people think that Inequality is enough reason to guarantee violence in families, but others think that there is none reason for violence family. Some people think that |
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Experts believe that inequality increase hard feelings in human being. Experts believe that inequality increase |
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Frustration, hopelessness, anxiety are some of them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The worst is that many people exploit these feelings against their own families through violence. The worst is that many people exp Instead of 'express', you can use 'manifest'. |
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On the other hand, specialists think that everyone is capable of taking decisions about who want to be or what kind of person will become. On the other hand, specialists think that everyone is capable of taking decisions about who they want to be or what kind of person they will become. |
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They support this idea with examples of people that grew up in violent families, but they took the decision to become a better person. They support this idea with examples of people that grew up in violent families, but |
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These specialists believe that to accept this kind of behavior for any reason, it is a way to embrace violence. These specialists believe that to accept For the reader to better understand your essay, you should expound on what 'this' behavior is. |
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In conclusion, some people justify violence because external factors that develops the violent situation and others do not, because every people has capacity of election. In conclusion, some people justify violence because of external factors that develop Usage of the word 'election' is wrong in this context. |
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