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haribop5738

Aug. 28, 2022

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Indoor Playground

We are in a Indoor playground, which has many toys, costumes, and games. It's suitable for children to play during the summer daytime hours. My daughter is impaitient. She plays with different toys one after another.

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Indoor Playground

We are in a Iat an indoor playground, which has many toys, costumes, and games.

It's suitable for children to play in during the summer daytime hours.

My daughter is impaitient.

SOne after another, she plays with a different toys one after another.

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かわいい!上手に書けています!

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haribop5738

Aug. 29, 2022

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いつも励ましていただきありがとうございます。

Indoor Playground.

We a're in a In indoor playground, which has manylots of toys, costumes, and games.

It's suitableideal for children to play in during the summer daytime hoursday in summer.

My daughter is impaitient.

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Great work!

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haribop5738

Aug. 29, 2022

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Thank you for your comment.

Indoor Playground

We are in a In indoor playground, which has many toys, costumes, and games.

It's suitable for children to play in during the summer daytime hours.

I don't think "daytime hours" is really necessary here. If you did want to use it, it would sound more natural to say, "It's suitable for children to play in during the day in the summer"

My daughter is impaitient.

She likes playsing with different toys one after another.

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haribop5738

Aug. 29, 2022

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修正いただきありがとうございます。

We are in a In indoor playground, which has many toys, costumes, and games.

It'During the summer daytime hours, it is suitable for children to play during the summer daytime hoursin/on it.

My daughter is impaitient.

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haribop5738

Aug. 29, 2022

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Thank you.

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We are in a Indoor playground, which has many toys, costumes, and games.


We are in a In indoor playground, which has many toys, costumes, and games.

We are in a In indoor playground, which has many toys, costumes, and games.

We a're in a In indoor playground, which has manylots of toys, costumes, and games.

We are in a Iat an indoor playground, which has many toys, costumes, and games.

It's suitable for children to play during the summer daytime hours.


It'During the summer daytime hours, it is suitable for children to play during the summer daytime hoursin/on it.

It's suitable for children to play in during the summer daytime hours.

I don't think "daytime hours" is really necessary here. If you did want to use it, it would sound more natural to say, "It's suitable for children to play in during the day in the summer"

It's suitableideal for children to play in during the summer daytime hoursday in summer.

It's suitable for children to play in during the summer daytime hours.

My daughter is impaitient.


My daughter is impaitient.

My daughter is impaitient.

My daughter is impaitient.

My daughter is impaitient.

She plays with different toys one after another.


She likes playsing with different toys one after another.

SOne after another, she plays with a different toys one after another.

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