Oct. 7, 2020
Indian history
Operation Blue Star was the codename of an India military action carried out between 1 and 8 June 1984 to capture Sikh leader Sant Jarnail Singh Bhindranwale and his followers along with the demolition of the building of Harmandir Sahib ( Golden Temple) in Amritsar Punjab. It had been planned by President Gandhi for showing her ambition with unification and warning other religious tribes, which ally to Sikhs, and depressing Sikhs. On 6th June 1984, President Gandhi launched an order to invade the Golden Temple). After a 24 hours flight, the Indian army won. This war led to the death of 700 soldiers and the arrest of 1600 army Sikhs. Using violence to invade the Golden Temple was not a sensible option. This action severely damaged the religious feelings of Sikhs and intensified the antagonism between religion and the new government. President Gandhi’s non-rational decision had stimulated anger and hate in every Sikhs. On 31st October 1984, she was killed by her private Sikh bodyguard. And President Gandhi’s death plays as a symbol of the doomed failure of the Indian revolution in the path of India unification
Operation Blue Star was the codename of an Indian military action carried out between 1 and 8 JuneJune 1st to 8th in 1984 to capture Sikh leader Sant Jarnail Singh Bhindranwale and his followers, along with the demolition of the building of Harmandir Sahib ( Golden Temple) in Amritsar Punjab.
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If you can clarify "... ambition to unify (some group)" then I think that would sound better.
On the 6th of June, 1984, President Gandhi launched an order to invade the Golden Temple).
This war led to the deaths of 700 soldiers and the arrest of 1600 army Sikhs.
Using violence to invade the Golden Temple was not a sensible option.
This action severely damaged the religious feelings of Sikhs and intensified the antagonism between religion and the new government.
President Gandhi’s non-rational decision had stimulated anger and hate in every Sikhs.
On the 31st of October, 1984, she was killed by her private Sikh bodyguard.
And President Gandhi’s death plays as a symbol of the doomed failure of the Indian revolution in the path of India unification
Try not to start sentences with connecting words like "and" or "because". If you really want them, then connect them with the previous sentence. In this case, however, your two sentences are both quite long and sound better on their own.
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Operation Blue Star was the codename of an India military action carried out between 1 and 8 June 1984 to capture Sikh leader Sant Jarnail Singh Bhindranwale and his followers along with the demolition of the building of Harmandir Sahib ( Golden Temple) in Amritsar Punjab. Operation Blue Star was the codename of an Indian military action carried out between |
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It had been planned by President Gandhi for showing her ambition with unification and warning other religious tribes, which ally to Sikhs, and depressing Sikhs. It If you can clarify "... ambition to unify (some group)" then I think that would sound better. |
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On 6th June 1984, President Gandhi launched an order to invade the Golden Temple). On the 6th of June, 1984, President Gandhi launched an order to invade the Golden Temple |
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After a 24 hours flight, the Indian army won. |
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This war led to the death of 700 soldiers and the arrest of 1600 army Sikhs. This war led to the deaths of 700 soldiers and the arrest of 1600 army Sikhs. |
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Using violence to invade the Golden Temple was not a sensible option. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This action severely damaged the religious feelings of Sikhs and intensified the antagonism between religion and the new government. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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President Gandhi’s non-rational decision had stimulated anger and hate in every Sikhs. President Gandhi’s non-rational decision had stimulated anger and hate in every Sikh |
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On 31st October 1984, she was killed by her private Sikh bodyguard. On the 31st of October, 1984, she was killed by her private Sikh bodyguard. |
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And President Gandhi’s death plays as a symbol of the doomed failure of the Indian revolution in the path of India unification
Try not to start sentences with connecting words like "and" or "because". If you really want them, then connect them with the previous sentence. In this case, however, your two sentences are both quite long and sound better on their own. |
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