July 8, 2023
Increment in International travelling
There is no doubt international travel is being suffering from some structural changes. We could say thar the aim of the travel-industry has been achieved. So that the precious treasure of reaching enormeous incomes has, all of a sudden, arrived. This is namely due to the increment in international travel.
Firstsly, globalization is here to stay. Not only are we able to work from home with a computer but the principal companies have offices abroad and their employees, as we are, must travel from one to another, from time to time, to be close to some project partners.
Although technology has facilitated the fact of globalization, it does not live up to the expectation focused on it. On the contrary, what would you do if it were easier, I mean cheaper and faster, to fly abroad than to take a train in a well-known area of your country?
Well, this is going to balance your choices and the winner side of your election will probably be travel abroad.
It would be a good exercise to bear in mind that some factors are furthering travel at the same time that supporting a non-ethical lifestyle thar put ahead of the benefits of the companies, in front of natural local development. Furthermore, they are getting a profit, in spite of the knowledge the have about the environment.
Just to add that perhaps these factors are not going to continue afforing the increment and fortunately, could be notice a decrease in this kind of travel in the coming years. It is my desire.
Incrementase in Iinternational travelling
I don't think I've ever heard "increment" used as a noun before.
There is no doubt international travel is being suffering from some structural changes.
We could say thart the aim of the travel- industry has been achieved.
So that the precious treasure of reaching enormeous incomes has, arrived all of a sudden, arrived.
I don't understand the meaning of this sentence.
This is namely due to the incrementase in international travel.
Firstsly, globalization is here to stay.
Not only are we able to work from home with a computer, but the principallarge companies have offices abroad and. Like us, their employees, as we are, must travel from one to another, from time to time, to be close to some project partners.
Although technology has facilitated the fact of globalization, it does not live up to the expectation focused on it.
On the contrary, what would you do if it were easier, I mean cheaper and faster, to fly abroad than to take a train in a well-known area of your country?
"I mean" doesn't sound natural written in the middle of a sentence. The only case I can see it happening is being used as a filler word in speech.
Well, this is going to balance your choices and the winner side of your electionyour choice will probably be to travel abroad.
It would be a good exercise to bear in mind that some factors are furthering travel at the same time that supporting a non-ethical lifestyle thart put ahead of the benefits of the companies, in front of natural local development.
I don't understand this sentence after "that put ahead"
Furthermore, they are gettmaking a profit, in spite of the knowledge they have about the environment.
Just to add that, perhaps these factors are not going to continue afforing the incrementase and fortunately, a decrease could be notice a decreased in this kind of travel in the coming years.
I don't understand "afforing." Even if it's a typo for "affording," it still doesn't make sense. Do you mean something like, "these factors are not going to make affording the increase easier?"
It is my desire.
July 10, 2023
Thanks!!! a lot !! for your corrections :)
Incrementase in International travelling
There is no doubt international travel is being suffering from some structural changes.
So that the precious treasureall-important goal of reachieving enormeous incomes has, all of a sudden, arrived.
This is namely due to the incrementase in international travel.
Firstsly, globalization is here to stay.
Not only are we able to work from home with a computer, but the principal companies have offices abroad, and their employees, as we aredo, must travel from one to another, from time to time, to be close to some project partners.
Although technology has facilitated the fact of globalization, it does not live up to the expectation focuss placed on it.
On the contrary, what would you do if it were easier, I mean cheaper and faster, to fly abroad, than to take a train in a well-known area of your country?
Well, this is going to balance your choices and the winner side of your electiontip the scales and you will probably bechoose to travel abroad.
It would be a good exercise to bear in mind that some factors are furtheracilitating travel at the same time that supporting a non-ethical lifestyle thar put ahead of the benefits of the companies, in frontand company goals is prioritized ahead of natural local development.
Furthermore, they are getting a profit, in spite of the knowledge they have about the environment.
Just to add thatFinally, perhaps these factors are not going to continue afforcausing the incrementase in travel, and fortunately, we could be notice a decrease in this kind of travel in the coming years.
IThat is my desire.
July 9, 2023
Thanks! I appreciate your corrections, thanks a lot.
Incrementases in International tTravelling
increment does not really fit it means small very gradual increases and sounds strange.
There is no doubt international travel is being suffering from some structural problems. / There is no doubt international travel has undergone some structural changes.
Not sure what you are trying to say so have put in two options.
We could say thart the aim of the travel-industry has been achieved.
So that the precious treasure of reachaim of generating enormeous incomeprofits has, all of a sudden, arrived.
This is namemainly due to the incrementase in international travel.
Firstsly, globalization is here to stay.
Not only are we able to work from home with a computer but the principmultinational companies have offices abroad and their employees, as we are, must travel from one to another, from time to time, to be close to some project partners.
Although technology has facilitated the factraise of globalization, it does not live up to the expectation focused on itmeet expectations.
On the contrary, what would you do if it were easier, by that I mean cheaper and faster, to fly abroad than to take a train into a well-known area of your country?
Well, this is going to balainfluence your choices and the winner side of your elecing option will probably be to travel abroad.
It would be a good exercise to bear in mind that some of the factors that are furthering travel are, at the same time, that supporting a non-ethical lifestyle thart put ahead of thes benefits of theto companies, in front ahead of natural local development.
Furthermore, they are getting a profit, in profiting, despite of their knowledge the have aboutof the environmental damage.
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I hope I haven't changed the meaning you were trying to convey. Unfortunately the meaning was a bit unclear sometimes from the English used.
July 9, 2023
No worries! thanks a lot! and sorry if it was a little boring to think about the meaning.. I appreciate your corrections!
July 9, 2023
It's not boring to think about. It's just a little bit difficult to understand what you wanted to say, and I don't want to change it so much when I correct it that I change what it was supposed to say into something else..
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Increment in International travelling Incre increment does not really fit it means small very gradual increases and sounds strange. Incre Incre I don't think I've ever heard "increment" used as a noun before. |
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We could say thar the aim of the travel-industry has been achieved. We could say tha We could say tha |
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So that the precious treasure of reaching enormeous incomes has, all of a sudden, arrived. So that the So that the So that the precious treasure of reaching enorm I don't understand the meaning of this sentence. |
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This is namely due to the increment in international travel. This is This is namely due to the incre This is namely due to the incre |
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Firstsly, globalization is here to stay. First First First |
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Not only are we able to work from home with a computer but the principal companies have offices abroad and their employees, as we are, must travel from one to another, from time to time, to be close to some project partners. Not only are we able to work from home with a computer but the Not only are we able to work from home with a computer, but the principal companies have offices abroad, and their employees, as we Not only are we able to work from home with a computer, but |
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Although technology has facilitated the fact of globalization, it does not live up to the expectation focused on it. Although technology has facilitated the Although technology has facilitated This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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On the contrary, what would you do if it were easier, I mean cheaper and faster, to fly abroad than to take a train in a well-known area of your country? On the contrary, what would you do if it were easier, by that I mean cheaper and faster, to fly abroad than to take a train On the contrary, what would you do if it were easier, I mean cheaper and faster, to fly abroad, than to take a train in a well-known area of your country? On the contrary, what would you do if it were easier, I mean cheaper and faster, to fly abroad than to take a train in a well-known area of your country "I mean" doesn't sound natural written in the middle of a sentence. The only case I can see it happening is being used as a filler word in speech. |
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Well, this is going to balance your choices and the winner side of your election will probably be travel abroad. Well, this is going to Well, this is going to Well, this is going to balance your choices and |
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It would be a good exercise to bear in mind that some factors are furthering travel at the same time that supporting a non-ethical lifestyle thar put ahead of the benefits of the companies, in front of natural local development. It would be It would be a good exercise to bear in mind that some factors are f It would be a good exercise to bear in mind that some factors are furthering travel at the same time that supporting a non-ethical lifestyle tha I don't understand this sentence after "that put ahead" |
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Furthermore, they are getting a profit, in spite of the knowledge the have about the environment. Furthermore, they are Furthermore, they are getting a profit, in spite of the knowledge they have about the environment. Furthermore, they are |
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Just to add that perhaps these factors are not going to continue afforing the increment and fortunately, could be notice a decrease in this kind of travel in the coming years.
Just to add I don't understand "afforing." Even if it's a typo for "affording," it still doesn't make sense. Do you mean something like, "these factors are not going to make affording the increase easier?" |
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It is my desire.
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