In your opinion, could climate anxiety be considered prod

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Aug. 25, 2024

In your opinion, could climate anxiety be considered prod

Over the last few years, the climate issue has worsened and it has created a lot of uncertainty about the future. This uncertainty has made people, and especially the youth, anxious about global warming. We may wonder whether climate anxiety has great outcomes.
To start with, many young people are worried about the ecological situation right now. They feel like they will reap the bad seeds their elders sowed and they can’t do anything about it. In addition to that, most of those young people have little hope for their future and are afraid of what the future will look like. They may be thinking that they won’t live great lives because of natural disasters that would eventually crush everything they have done. This is why climate anxiety might deter them from putting efforts in for the future.
That uncertainty about the future might have an impact on the way people work at their jobs. Climate anxiety may discourage people from getting down to the work. They no longer see the point in working for some companies, for it would only contribute to pollution or it would fuel the system that is causing global warming. So, I assume that climate anxiety might bring about a slowdown. But I think that climate anxiety will generate actions from people.
Common wisdom has it that you should fight global warming and some people share this message with as many people as they can, in order to make the world a better place. They are activists, like Greta Thunberg who is a young and active person. She gives her best to bring a change in the world, because she wants the earth to be saved. She is a remarkable activist because she does not only talk the talk but she also walks the walk. For instance, instead of taking a plane to move from Sweden to the United States, she took a boat which produces no pollution. Many other activists on the Internet post on social media about ecology. I acknowledge how productive it is to spread that message about ecology, because it enables more people to do the right thing. Moreover those alerts did not only reach the peoples but also governments.
Governments have also implemented policies about ecology. For instance, in the USA in 2023 the government implemented IRA (Inflation Reduction Act) which subsidizes the production of electric cars on the territory. So, it is cheaper to build them and more electric cars can be sold, because they are cheaper, thanks to IRA. On a global scale, meetings have resulted in agreements between countries about ecological measures and goals have been set. For example, the United States has to be carbon neutral by the year 2060, and given the policies of the American government, the U.S.A is serious about it. Many other policies aim to curb pollution and greenhouses effect emissions.
All in all, I for one think that climate anxiety brings about a lot of productive things which outweigh the negative ones. Actually, it generates actions, even if there is still a long way to go to save the planet.

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In your opinion, could climate anxiety be considered ~~prod~~???

"Prod" n'est pas un mot, as-tu voulu dire "productive"?

Over the last few years, the climate issue has worsened and it has created a lot of uncertainty about the future.

This uncertainty has made people, and especially the youth, anxious about global warming.

We may wonder whether climate anxiety has ~~grea~~significant outcomes.

"Great" a des connotations positives, comme "génial". C'est vrai que ça peut signifier "grand" (en termes d'ampleur), mais en cette contexte c'est un peu ambigu et c'est mieux de choisir un autre mot.

To start with, many young people are worried about the ecological situation right now.

They feel like they will reap the bad seeds their elders sowed and they can’t do anything about it.

In addition to that, most of those young people have little hope for their future and are afraid of what the future will look like.

They may be thinking that they won’t live great lives because of natural disasters that would eventually crush everything they have done.

This is why climate anxiety might deter them from putting efforts in for the future.

That uncertainty about the future might have an impact on the way people work at their jobs.

Climate anxiety may discourage people from ~~getting down to the~~ working.

Cette expression n'existe pas "getting down to work". Il y'a "getting down to business", mais ça signifie faire ou parler des choses sérieuses, et ce n'est pas nécessairement liée avec le travail.

They no longer see the point in working for some companies, for it would only contribute to pollution or it would fuel the system that is causing global warming.

So, I assume that climate anxiety might bring about a ~~slowdow~~recession.

Si tu parles économiquement, la phrase "slowdown" sans specifier un "slowdown" de quoi est trop vague, mais le mot "recession" est souvent utilisé pour parler d'un "slowdown" de l'économie.

But I think that climate anxiety will generate actions from people.

Si tu fais référence à des actions spécifiques, "actions" est approprié. Mais si tu parles d'action en générale, juste "action" est suffisant comme un concept au lieu de quelque chose concrète. Les deux sont possibles, cela dépend de ton intention.

Common wisdom has it that you should fight global warming and some people share this message with as many people as they can, in order to make the world a better place.

They are activists, like Greta Thunberg who is a young and active person.

She ~~giv~~tries her best to bring a change in the world, because she wants the earth to be saved.

Il y'a 2 expressions: "to give your all" ou "to try your best" et tu as écrit une mélange des deux. On peut utiliser les 2 options "she gives her all" ou "she tries her best".

She is a remarkable activist because she does not only talk the talk but she also walks the walk.

For instance, instead of taking a plane to move from Sweden to the United States, she took a boat which produces no pollution.

Many other activists on the Internet post on social media about ecology.

I acknowledge how productive it is to spread that message about ecology, because it enables more people to do the right thing.

Moreover those alerts ~~did~~ not only reached the peoples, but also governments.

"People" est déjà la forme plurielle.

Governments have also implemented policies about ecology.

For instance, in the USA in 2023 the government implemented IRA (Inflation Reduction Act) which subsidizes the production of electric cars oin ~~the~~its territory.

Je suppose que tu parles de la production qui a lieu aux États Unis? C'est son propre pays, donc on dit "its territory" au lieu de "the territory".

So, it is cheaper to build them and more electric cars can be sold, because they are cheaper, thanks to IRA.

On a global scale, meetings have resulted in agreements between countries about ecological measures and goals have been set.

For example, the United States has to be carbon neutral by the year 2060, and given the policies of the American government, the U.S.A is serious about it.

Many other policies aim to curb pollution and greenhouses effect emissions.

All in all, I for one think that climate anxiety brings about a lot of productive things which outweigh the negative ones.

Actually, it generates actions, even if there is still a long way to go to save the planet.

Le même commentaire qu'avant, si tu parles d'action comme une notion générale, c'est juste "action", mais si tu parles des actions spécifiques que tu as déjà mentionné, "actions" est acceptable. Les deux peuvent être correctes, selon ce à quoi tu fais référence.

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Très bien écrit - et je suis complètement d'accord!! La sensibilisation est ce qui nous inspire à faire le changement nécessaire

(Désolé si il y'a des erreurs, le français n'est pas ma langue maternelle)

In your opinion, could climate anxiety be considered prod

In your opinion, could climate anxiety be considered ~~prod~~???

"Prod" n'est pas un mot, as-tu voulu dire "productive"?

Over the last few years, the climate issue has worsened and it has created a lot of uncertainty about the future.