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April 29, 2023

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IN with you.

For 125 years,IN is always with you.

Leading with the light,Every shining you are an infinite interpretation of beauty

As time goes by,we meet after the light.

Beauty changes, but we never change.

The key to the world, the beauty to the light.

IN 125th anniversary


125年来 IN始终陪伴 ,逐光而行
每一位闪耀的你都是美的无限释义。
时光流转, 追光而遇
美有万变, 而我们从未改变
传世之钥,万美向光
IN 125周年

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IN with you.

For 125 years, IN ihas always been with you.

Leading with the light,Every shining light, you are an infinite interpretation of beauty.

As time goes by, we meet after the light.

Beauty changes, but we never change.

The key to the world, the beauty to the light.

IN 125th anniversary

IN with you.

For 125 years, IN is always with you.

Leading with the light,Every Each shining you areis an infinite interpretation of beauty.

As time goes by, we meet after the light.

Beauty changes, but we never change.

The key to the world, the beauty to the light.

IN 125th anniversary

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Leading with the light,Every shining you are an infinite interpretation of beauty

after the comma, it becomes unclear what is shining. Shining is a verb. So what is shining?

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Its unclear to me what "IN" is referring to. Most of the sentences are grammatically correct but I'm unsure what the topic of the journal entry is.

IN with you.


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For 125 years,IN is always with you.


For 125 years, IN is always with you.

For 125 years, IN ihas always been with you.

Leading with the light,Every shining you are an infinite interpretation of beauty


Leading with the light,Every shining you are an infinite interpretation of beauty

after the comma, it becomes unclear what is shining. Shining is a verb. So what is shining?

Leading with the light,Every Each shining you areis an infinite interpretation of beauty.

Leading with the light,Every shining light, you are an infinite interpretation of beauty.

As time goes by,we meet after the light.


As time goes by, we meet after the light.

As time goes by, we meet after the light.

Beauty changes, but we never change.


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The key to the world, the beauty to the light.


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IN 125th anniversary


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