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July 8, 2025

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In the Begining

In the Begining was the Word,
and the Word was the Verb,
and the Verb is the Action,
an this action is a done for every people and every nation.

What's the Begining...? It's a time? Or it's a missure of the time? Perhaps the Beginig a point on the time. But this point is big and enourmous like the Milky Way or it's tiny and short similar to the nucleus of an atom? "No, no, no! -you can say me- the time isn't a place!". Now, i speak you in a more correct language. Is the Begining a second? Or it's an hour? ... a year or a millenium? How we know that this exact moment isn't an extension of the same Begining?

In the Begining was the Word;
and in this Word -Beginig- everything was, is and will be...
Because the Begining is too the Finale. But the Finale will be not finished, since it's always more enourmes to be contained and understantood...


En el Principio fue la Palabra,
y la Palabra fue el Verbo,
y el Verbo es la Acción,
y esta acción es un don para cad pueblo y cada nación.

¿Qué es el Principio...? ¿Es eso un tiempo? ¿O es eso una medida del tiempo? Tal vez el Principio es un punto en el tiempo. Pero, ¿este punto es grande y enorme come la Via Láctea o eso es diminuto y corto similar al núcleo de un átomo? "¡No, no, no! -tú puedes decirme- el tiempo non es un lugar!". Entonces, te hablaré con un lenguaje más correcto. ¿Es el Principio un segundo? ¿O es eso una hora? ¿... un año o un milenio? ¿Como sabemos que éste preciso momento no es un extensión del Principio mismo?

En el Principio fue la Palabra;
y en esta Palabra - Principio- todo fue, es y será...
Pues el Principio es también el Final. Pero el Final no terminará, ya que este es siempre más grande como para ser contenido y entendido...

Corrections

In the Beginning was the Word,
and the Word was the Verb,

and the Verb is the Action,

an
d this action is a done for every peoplerson and every nation.

I'm assuming this is meant to sound a bit vague and poetic. In a poem you can sometimes capitalise things that aren't in regular speech, so I left the extra caps in here.

What's the Bbeginning...?

It'ss it a time?

"It's" is "It is", it can't be used as an abbreviation for "Is it"

Or it's a missures it a (measurement?) of the time?

Perhaps the Bbeginigning is a point on thef time.

But is this point is big and enourmous like the Milky Way or it'ss it tiny and short, similar to the nucleus of an atom?

-you can say me- thetell me- time isn't a place!".

"say X" requires X to be the thing that's said.
If you want to specify who it was said to, you need to say "tell X"

Now, iI will speak to you in a more correct language.

"Speak X" -> X is normally a language
"Speak to X" -> X is the person being spoken to

Is the Bbeginning a second?

Or it'ss it an hour?

How do we know that this exact moment isn't an extension of the same Bbeginning?

In the Beginning was the Word;
and in this Word -Begin
ining- everything was, is and will be...
Because the Begin
ning is too the Finale too.

Going back to poetic speech here, and as mentioned, poems etc. are more forgiving than standard grammar, but there are still some things that sound too strange for a poem even, so I corrected those.

But the Finale will be not be finished, since it's always moretoo enourmeous to be contained and understantood...

In the Begining

In the Bbeginning was the Wword,
and the
Wword was the Vverb,
and the
Vverb is the Aaction,
an this action is a done for every people and every nation.

What's the Beginning...?

It'ss it a time?

Or it'ss it a miseasure of the time?

Perhaps it is the Bbeginigning of a point on the time.

But is this point is big and enourmous like the Milky Way or it's tiny and short, similar to the nucleus of an atom?

"No, no, no!

-you can say me- the time isn't a place!".

Now, iI speak to you in a more correct language.

Is the Beginning a second?

Or it'ss it an hour?

... a year, or a millenium?

How we know that this exact moment isn't an extension of the same Bbeginning?

In the Bbeginning was the Wword; ,
and in this
Wword -Bbeginining- everything was, is and will be...
B

b
ecause the Beginning is toalso the Finale.

But the Ffinale will be not finished, since it's always more enourmeous to be contained and understantood...

In the Begining


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In the Begining was the Word, and the Word was the Verb, and the Verb is the Action, an this action is a done for every people and every nation.


In the Bbeginning was the Wword,
and the
Wword was the Vverb,
and the
Vverb is the Aaction,
an this action is a done for every people and every nation.

In the Beginning was the Word,
and the Word was the Verb,

and the Verb is the Action,

an
d this action is a done for every peoplerson and every nation.

I'm assuming this is meant to sound a bit vague and poetic. In a poem you can sometimes capitalise things that aren't in regular speech, so I left the extra caps in here.

What's the Begining...?


What's the Beginning...?

What's the Bbeginning...?

It's a time?


It'ss it a time?

It'ss it a time?

"It's" is "It is", it can't be used as an abbreviation for "Is it"

Or it's a missure of the time?


Or it'ss it a miseasure of the time?

Or it's a missures it a (measurement?) of the time?

Perhaps the Beginig a point on the time.


Perhaps it is the Bbeginigning of a point on the time.

Perhaps the Bbeginigning is a point on thef time.

But this point is big and enourmous like the Milky Way or it's tiny and short similar to the nucleus of an atom?


But is this point is big and enourmous like the Milky Way or it's tiny and short, similar to the nucleus of an atom?

But is this point is big and enourmous like the Milky Way or it'ss it tiny and short, similar to the nucleus of an atom?

"No, no, no!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

-you can say me- the time isn't a place!".


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

-you can say me- thetell me- time isn't a place!".

"say X" requires X to be the thing that's said. If you want to specify who it was said to, you need to say "tell X"

Now, i speak you in a more correct language.


Now, iI speak to you in a more correct language.

Now, iI will speak to you in a more correct language.

"Speak X" -> X is normally a language "Speak to X" -> X is the person being spoken to

Is the Begining a second?


Is the Beginning a second?

Is the Bbeginning a second?

Or it's an hour?


Or it'ss it an hour?

Or it'ss it an hour?

... a year or a millenium?


... a year, or a millenium?

How we know that this exact moment isn't an extension of the same Begining?


How we know that this exact moment isn't an extension of the same Bbeginning?

How do we know that this exact moment isn't an extension of the same Bbeginning?

In the Begining was the Word; and in this Word -Beginig- everything was, is and will be... Because the Begining is too the Finale.


In the Bbeginning was the Wword; ,
and in this
Wword -Bbeginining- everything was, is and will be...
B

b
ecause the Beginning is toalso the Finale.

In the Beginning was the Word;
and in this Word -Begin
ining- everything was, is and will be...
Because the Begin
ning is too the Finale too.

Going back to poetic speech here, and as mentioned, poems etc. are more forgiving than standard grammar, but there are still some things that sound too strange for a poem even, so I corrected those.

But the Finale will be not finished, since it's always more enourmes to be contained and understantood...


But the Ffinale will be not finished, since it's always more enourmeous to be contained and understantood...

But the Finale will be not be finished, since it's always moretoo enourmeous to be contained and understantood...

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