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SAManglai

Nov. 11, 2024

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In school

At school, I like a few subjects. Among them there are history and mathematics. In fact I enjoy learning some new historique date and understanding the reasons of wars and conflicts from our past. About mathematics I am enjoying to resolve equation. For me it's like a game you had to solve and win. In addition I find this subject intersting and really enjoyable when you are understanding something new.
I hope, like me you are interested in mathematics.
Thank you for reading.

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Among them theremy favorites, are history and mathematics.

In the USA we often just say math instead of mathematics.

In fact, I enjoy learning some new historiquec dates and understanding the reasons ofor past wars and conflicts from our past.

when talking about the "reason" we say the "reason for something" to describe why something happened.

About mathematicIn math class I am enjoying to re solveing equations.

More clear

ForTo me it' feels like a game you hadve to solve andto win.

"To me" or "For me" can both be used but "To me it feels like..." is a little more clear.

In aAdditionally, I find this subject interesting and really enjoyable when you are starting to understanding something new.

"Additionally" is kind of formal but feels better than "In addition". "when you are understanding something new" could also just say learning something new

I hope, like me you are interested in mathematics.

Thank you for reading.

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In school

Among them thereTwo of my favorites are history and mathematics.

In fact I enjoy learning some new historiquecal dates and understanding the reasons ofor wars and conflicts from ourin the past.

AboutIn mathematics, I am enjoying to re solveing equations.

For more casual phrasing, you can use "In math" (in the US) or "In maths" (elsewhere)

For me iIt's like a game you had tocan solve and win.

"For me" isn't wrong, but unnecessary, given that you're clearly giving your own opinion.

In addition, I find this subject interesting, and it's really enjoyable when you arestart to understanding something new.

I hope, like me, you are interested in mathematics.

Thank you for reading.

In schoolMy Favorite School Subjects

Among them there are history and mathematicHistory and Mathematics are some of my favorite subjects.

In fact, I enjoy learning some new historique dateabout historical events and understanding the reasons of wars and conflicts from ourthe past.

About mathematics, I am enjoying to re solveing equations.

It's more natural to say that you want to solve equations in math. This goes especially true for certain branches of mathematics, like statistics, algebra, and calculus.

For me it'Personally, solving equations feels like a game you hadve to solve and win.

In aAdditionally, I find this subject interesting and really enjoyable when you are understandlearning something new/a new topic.

I hope, like me that you are (also) interested in mathematics (like me).

I personally like mathematics.

Thank you for reading.

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SAManglai

Nov. 11, 2024

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marblemenow

Nov. 12, 2024

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You're welcome.

In school


In schoolMy Favorite School Subjects

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At school, I like a few subjects.


Among them there are history and mathematics.


Among them there are history and mathematicHistory and Mathematics are some of my favorite subjects.

Among them thereTwo of my favorites are history and mathematics.

Among them theremy favorites, are history and mathematics.

In the USA we often just say math instead of mathematics.

In fact I enjoy learning some new historique date and understanding the reasons of wars and conflicts from our past.


In fact, I enjoy learning some new historique dateabout historical events and understanding the reasons of wars and conflicts from ourthe past.

In fact I enjoy learning some new historiquecal dates and understanding the reasons ofor wars and conflicts from ourin the past.

In fact, I enjoy learning some new historiquec dates and understanding the reasons ofor past wars and conflicts from our past.

when talking about the "reason" we say the "reason for something" to describe why something happened.

About mathematics I am enjoying to resolve equation.


About mathematics, I am enjoying to re solveing equations.

It's more natural to say that you want to solve equations in math. This goes especially true for certain branches of mathematics, like statistics, algebra, and calculus.

AboutIn mathematics, I am enjoying to re solveing equations.

For more casual phrasing, you can use "In math" (in the US) or "In maths" (elsewhere)

About mathematicIn math class I am enjoying to re solveing equations.

More clear

For me it's like a game you had to solve and win.


For me it'Personally, solving equations feels like a game you hadve to solve and win.

For me iIt's like a game you had tocan solve and win.

"For me" isn't wrong, but unnecessary, given that you're clearly giving your own opinion.

ForTo me it' feels like a game you hadve to solve andto win.

"To me" or "For me" can both be used but "To me it feels like..." is a little more clear.

In addition I find this subject intersting and really enjoyable when you are understanding something new.


In aAdditionally, I find this subject interesting and really enjoyable when you are understandlearning something new/a new topic.

In addition, I find this subject interesting, and it's really enjoyable when you arestart to understanding something new.

In aAdditionally, I find this subject interesting and really enjoyable when you are starting to understanding something new.

"Additionally" is kind of formal but feels better than "In addition". "when you are understanding something new" could also just say learning something new

I hope, like me you are interested in mathematics.


I hope, like me that you are (also) interested in mathematics (like me).

I personally like mathematics.

I hope, like me, you are interested in mathematics.

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Thank you for reading.


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