People say don't waste your precious time in your 20s since you have a sufficient energy to try everything, and, even if you failed, most of the mistakes are reversible.

I totally agree with thatthat being in one's 20s is a suitable age to learn from scratch, find a good partner, and build good habits.

However, wWe are likely, however, to be hesitante to take action even if there isare a bunch of options.

I'm ashamed to say that I want to go back to my parents' housme now.

I've lived on myself own ten minutes' walk from their house in order to become good at household chores and find a good partner.

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I've lived by myself ten minutes' walk from their house in order to become good at household chores and find a good partner.

Men over 30 who still livinge with their parents over 30s are thought to be childish guys but I'm already bored with my dishes and impatient with loneliness.

But, I'm already bored with my dishes and impatient with loneliness.

Furthermore, the cost of living in Tokyo is too expensive to pretend that it's easy to be an independent person living here.

to be an independent person.

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I totally agree with the idea that one's 20s is a suitable age to learn from scratch, find a good partner, and build good habits.

However, we are likely to be hesitante to take action even if there isdespite having a bunch of options.

I'm ashamed to say that I want to go back to my parents' house now.

I've lived onby myself, located only ten minutes' walking away from the house in order to be good at household chores and find a good partner.

This logic is very confusing, however I tried my best to correct it.

Men in their 30s still living with their parents over 30s are thought be childish guys.

But, I'm already bored with my dishes and impatient with loneliness.