June 30, 2021
In My Free Time
When I have free time, I usually do my hobbies.
First of all, I usually read books.
I really love to read them, so I used to take a book on my bag.
These days, I prefer to read e-books rather than paper books, because it is more convenient.
Only I need a smart phone to read books, and I can read anywhere and anytime.
Drinking tea is my second hobby.
Around my seat in my office, there are many teas not only black tea but also oorong tea, green tea and special white tea.
For steeping my tea, my seat is close to a place where I can get hot water.
With tea, I can reduce my stress and find peace of my mind.
These are my two hobbies in my free time. I really love them.
In My Free Time
When I have free time, I usually do my hobbies.
First of all, I usually read books.
I really love to read them, so I used to takeually bring a book oin my bag.
OI only I need a smart phone to read books, and I can read anywhere and anytime.
"Only I need" means - "However, I need" or "But, I need".
"I only need" means "all I need"
Drinking tea is my second hobby.
AroundNear my seat in my office, there are many teas, not only black tea but also oorlong tea, green tea and special white tea.
These are my two hobbies infor my free time.
July 1, 2021
Thank for your advices.
July 1, 2021
Thank for your advices.
"advice" - in English advice cannot be pluralized (unlike many other languages!)
In My Free Time
When I have free time, I usually do my hobbies.
First of all, I usually read books.
I really love to read them, so I used to take a book oin my bag.
These days, I prefer to read e-books rather than paper books, because it is more convenient.
OI only I need a smart phone to read books, and I can read anywhere and anytime.
Drinking tea is my second hobby.
Around my seat in my office, there are many teas n. Not only black tea, but also oorlong tea, green tea, and special white tea.
I am not sure what you mean by "around my seat in my office." If you mean in your work area, it would be more common to say something like "around my desk," "around my office," or "around my workspace."
For steeping my tea, my seat is close to a place where I can get hot water.
With tea, I can reduce my stress and find my peace of my mind.
You can omit "my" here if you want to. Without it, "finding peace of mind" implies that you are calm. With it, it implies that you are in a situation that is specifically calm and peaceful to you.
These are my two hobbies in my free time.
I really love them.
Feedback
Those sound like great hobbies, I'm glad you enjoy them! :D
June 30, 2021
Thank you very much.
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Only I need a smart phone to read books, and I can read anywhere and anytime.
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Around my seat in my office, there are many teas not only black tea but also oorong tea, green tea and special white tea. Around my seat in my office, there are many teas I am not sure what you mean by "around my seat in my office." If you mean in your work area, it would be more common to say something like "around my desk," "around my office," or "around my workspace."
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With tea, I can reduce my stress and find peace of my mind. With tea, I can reduce my stress and find my peace of You can omit "my" here if you want to. Without it, "finding peace of mind" implies that you are calm. With it, it implies that you are in a situation that is specifically calm and peaceful to you. |
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