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mirtul0712

Dec. 19, 2019

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In my free time

In my spare-time I try to do as much, as I can to charge myself. Anyway, I try to put energy into something what wholesome and fulfilling. I like walking in the forest and taking photos about the environment. That's help me focusing on the valuable things. I have a lot of photos about flowers, trees and their fruits. I took many pictures about the sky also, for example about the sunrise or sunset. I've started a new software program, with I can make montage from my photos.
I really like reading in my free time. Nowadays I read three books, about different subjects. One of them is dealing with the management of packaging. I'm interested in, how and why are packed products as they are. It's quite a big topic, has many aspects. This book contains a lot of picture too, but in black and white. It's not bad, but it could be more pleasure with colours.
The second book is about the expereince of the product. It grounded a lots of pshycological theory and survey. In this book I can read about the human behavior, that is always interesting topic to me.
The third book is about emotions, as I mentioned I like this theme so much.
What makes me really energetic is the workout. Sometimes I just walking an hour in our surrounding. I'm keen on yoga, because it's like a mixture of flexibility exercise and meditate. Not to speak of strenghtening, and I could mention the pilates as well. If I can do this things, I feel drastically different, implicitly in a positive sense.
What about the good, hot bath? Of course I love it too, but this is not the first thing, that comes into my mind.

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I've started a new software program, withcoding a new program so that I can make a montage from my photos.

I'm interested in, how and why products are packaged products ashow they are.

It's quite a big topic, has with many different aspects to it.

I'm keen on yoga, because it's like a mixture of flexibility exercise and meditate.ion.

What about thea good, hot bath?

Of course I love it too, but this is not the first thing, that comes into my mind.

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Hello! Can you please share the names of all three books? You have intrigued me! Thanks

In my spare- time I try to do as much, as I can to re-charge myself.

Anyway, I try to put energy into something what wholesome and fulfilling.

I like walking in the forest and taking photos aboutof the environment.

That's helps me to focusing on the valuable things.

I have taken a lot of photos aboutof flowers, trees and their fruits.

I tookhave also taken many pictures aboutof the sky also, for example aboutof the sunrise or sunset.

I've started using a new software program, with which I can make montages from my photos.

Nowadays I'm reading three books, about different subjects.

I'm interested in, how and why products are packed products as they are.

It's quite a big topic, which has many aspects.

It's not bad, but it could be more pleasureant with colours.

The second book is about the expereience of the product.

It is grounded in a lots of pshychological theory and survey results.

In this book I can read about the human behavior, t. That is always an interesting topic to me.

The third book is about emotions,; as I mentioned, I like this theme sovery much.

What makes me really energetic is the working out.

Sometimes I just walking for an hour in our surrounding area.

I'm keen on yoga, because it's like a mixture of flexibility exercise and meditateion.

Not to speakIn terms of strenghthening, and I could mention the pilates as well.

What about thea good, hot bath?

Of course I love it too, but this is not the first thing, that comes into my mind.

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This is really great! Most of my suggestions are pretty minor...

In my free time

In my spare- time, I try to do as much, as I can to recharge myself.

Anyway, I try to put my energy into something whatich is wholesome and fulfilling.

For example, I like walking in the forest and taking photos aboutof the environment.

That'sIt helps me to focusing on the on valuable things.

I took many pictures aboutof the sky also, f, too. For example about, photos of the sunrise or the sunset.

I've started using a new software program, w. With it, I can make a montage fromusing my photos.

I really like reading in my free time.

Nowadays II am concurrently reading three books, aboutll with different subjects.

One of them is dealing with the management of packaging.

I'm interested in, how and why are packed products are as they are.

It's quite a big topic, and has many aspects.

This book contains a lot of picture too, but they are in black and white.

It's not bad, but it could be more pleasureant to look at with colours.

The second book is about the expereience of owning the product.

It's grounded ain lots of pshychological theoryies and surveys.

In this book, I can read about the human behavior, thatwhich is always an interesting topic to me.

The third book is about emotions, a. As I have mentioned, I like this theme sovery much.

Whaorking out makes me reallfeel very energetic is the workout.

Sometimes, I just walking for an hour in ourmy surrounding area.

I'm keen on yoga, because it's like a mixture of flexibility exercises and meditateion.

Not to speak ofmention it help in strenghthening, and oneself. I could also mention the pilates does the same thing as well.

If I can do thisese things, I feel drastically different, implicitly in a positive sense.

What about thea good, hot bath?

Of course I love it too, but this is not the first thing, that comes into my mind.

In my free time

In my spare- time, I try to do as much, as I can to recharge myself.

The other correction is fine. This is just another option.

Anyway, I try to put energy into something what wholesome and fulfilling.

I like walking in the forest and taking photos about the environment.

If you mean taking photos of the forest, I think this is implied.

That's helps me focusing on the valuableimportant things.

I have a lot of photos aboutof flowers, trees and their fruits.

I took've taken many pictures aboutof the sky alstoo, for example about theof sunrise or sunset.

I've started using a new software program, with which I can make montage froms of my photos.

"Ive started a new software" implies that you've made it.

I really like reading in my free time.

Nowadays ICurrently, I'm reading three books, about (three) different subjects.

One of them is dealing withabout the management of packaging.

I'm interested in, how and why products are packed products as they are.

Or: "why products are packages the way they are."

It's quite a big topic, has with many aspects.

Or: "broad topic"

This book contains a lot of pictures too, but in black and white.

It's not bad, but it could be more pleasuretter with colours.

The second book is about theproduct expereience of the product.

It's grounded ain lots of pshychological theory and surveytudies.

In this book I can read about the human behavior, thatwhich is always an interesting topic to me.

The third book is about emotions, a. As I mentioned, I like this theme sovery much.

What makes me really energetic is the working out.

Sometimes I just walking an hou for ian hour surarounding the neighbourhood.

Or: "around town"

I'm keen on yoga, because it's like a mixture of flexibility exercisetraining and meditateion.

Not to speak ofmention it helps with strenghtening, and I could mention the pilates as well.

If I canWhen I do this things, I feel drastically different, implicitly in a positive sense.

What about thea good, hot bath?

Of course I love it too, but this is not the first thing, that comes into my mind.

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You read so much nonfiction! You must learn a lot from all of the books. I want to endeavour to go for more walks in my free time as well!

In my free time


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In my spare-time I try to do as much, as I can to charge myself.


In my spare- time, I try to do as much, as I can to recharge myself.

The other correction is fine. This is just another option.

In my spare- time, I try to do as much, as I can to recharge myself.

In my spare- time I try to do as much, as I can to re-charge myself.

Anyway, I try to put energy into something what wholesome and fulfilling.


Anyway, I try to put energy into something what wholesome and fulfilling.

Anyway, I try to put my energy into something whatich is wholesome and fulfilling.

Anyway, I try to put energy into something what wholesome and fulfilling.

I like walking in the forest and taking photos about the environment.


I like walking in the forest and taking photos about the environment.

If you mean taking photos of the forest, I think this is implied.

For example, I like walking in the forest and taking photos aboutof the environment.

I like walking in the forest and taking photos aboutof the environment.

That's help me focusing on the valuable things.


That's helps me focusing on the valuableimportant things.

That'sIt helps me to focusing on the on valuable things.

That's helps me to focusing on the valuable things.

I have a lot of photos about flowers, trees and their fruits.


I have a lot of photos aboutof flowers, trees and their fruits.

I have taken a lot of photos aboutof flowers, trees and their fruits.

I took many pictures about the sky also, for example about the sunrise or sunset.


I took've taken many pictures aboutof the sky alstoo, for example about theof sunrise or sunset.

I took many pictures aboutof the sky also, f, too. For example about, photos of the sunrise or the sunset.

I tookhave also taken many pictures aboutof the sky also, for example aboutof the sunrise or sunset.

I've started a new software program, with I can make montage from my photos.


I've started using a new software program, with which I can make montage froms of my photos.

"Ive started a new software" implies that you've made it.

I've started using a new software program, w. With it, I can make a montage fromusing my photos.

I've started using a new software program, with which I can make montages from my photos.

I've started a new software program, withcoding a new program so that I can make a montage from my photos.

I really like reading in my free time.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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Nowadays I read three books, about different subjects.


Nowadays ICurrently, I'm reading three books, about (three) different subjects.

Nowadays II am concurrently reading three books, aboutll with different subjects.

Nowadays I'm reading three books, about different subjects.

One of them is dealing with the management of packaging.


One of them is dealing withabout the management of packaging.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm interested in, how and why are packed products as they are.


I'm interested in, how and why products are packed products as they are.

Or: "why products are packages the way they are."

I'm interested in, how and why are packed products are as they are.

I'm interested in, how and why products are packed products as they are.

I'm interested in, how and why products are packaged products ashow they are.

It's quite a big topic, has many aspects.


It's quite a big topic, has with many aspects.

Or: "broad topic"

It's quite a big topic, and has many aspects.

It's quite a big topic, which has many aspects.

It's quite a big topic, has with many different aspects to it.

This book contains a lot of picture too, but in black and white.


This book contains a lot of pictures too, but in black and white.

This book contains a lot of picture too, but they are in black and white.

It's not bad, but it could be more pleasure with colours.


It's not bad, but it could be more pleasuretter with colours.

It's not bad, but it could be more pleasureant to look at with colours.

It's not bad, but it could be more pleasureant with colours.

The second book is about the expereince of the product.


The second book is about theproduct expereience of the product.

The second book is about the expereience of owning the product.

The second book is about the expereience of the product.

It grounded a lots of pshycological theory and survey.


It's grounded ain lots of pshychological theory and surveytudies.

It's grounded ain lots of pshychological theoryies and surveys.

It is grounded in a lots of pshychological theory and survey results.

In this book I can read about the human behavior, that is always interesting topic to me.


In this book I can read about the human behavior, thatwhich is always an interesting topic to me.

In this book, I can read about the human behavior, thatwhich is always an interesting topic to me.

In this book I can read about the human behavior, t. That is always an interesting topic to me.

The third book is about emotions, as I mentioned I like this theme so much.


The third book is about emotions, a. As I mentioned, I like this theme sovery much.

The third book is about emotions, a. As I have mentioned, I like this theme sovery much.

The third book is about emotions,; as I mentioned, I like this theme sovery much.

What makes me really energetic is the workout.


What makes me really energetic is the working out.

Whaorking out makes me reallfeel very energetic is the workout.

What makes me really energetic is the working out.

Sometimes I just walking an hour in our surrounding.


Sometimes I just walking an hou for ian hour surarounding the neighbourhood.

Or: "around town"

Sometimes, I just walking for an hour in ourmy surrounding area.

Sometimes I just walking for an hour in our surrounding area.

I'm keen on yoga, because it's like a mixture of flexibility exercise and meditate.


I'm keen on yoga, because it's like a mixture of flexibility exercisetraining and meditateion.

I'm keen on yoga, because it's like a mixture of flexibility exercises and meditateion.

I'm keen on yoga, because it's like a mixture of flexibility exercise and meditateion.

I'm keen on yoga, because it's like a mixture of flexibility exercise and meditate.ion.

Not to speak of strenghtening, and I could mention the pilates as well.


Not to speak ofmention it helps with strenghtening, and I could mention the pilates as well.

Not to speak ofmention it help in strenghthening, and oneself. I could also mention the pilates does the same thing as well.

Not to speakIn terms of strenghthening, and I could mention the pilates as well.

If I can do this things, I feel drastically different, implicitly in a positive sense.


If I canWhen I do this things, I feel drastically different, implicitly in a positive sense.

If I can do thisese things, I feel drastically different, implicitly in a positive sense.

What about the good, hot bath?


What about thea good, hot bath?

What about thea good, hot bath?

What about thea good, hot bath?

What about thea good, hot bath?

Of course I love it too, but this is not the first thing, that comes into my mind.


Of course I love it too, but this is not the first thing, that comes into my mind.

Of course I love it too, but this is not the first thing, that comes into my mind.

Of course I love it too, but this is not the first thing, that comes into my mind.

Of course I love it too, but this is not the first thing, that comes into my mind.

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