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In Finland, Rovaniemi, Santa Claus's town become lively before Christmas, welcoming visitors from all around the world despite dark mornings.
In this season, Sun gets up late at around 11 am, but preparations for Christmas are progressing well. In the neighbour post office, thousands of letters keep coming, it's a reminder that traditional mail keep place for Christmas.
His list nearly over, Santa Claus considered, in a declaration at the AP agency, that most of the children were kind this year. He said that doing is best is better than being perfect.
Each year, more than 700 000 visitors from all around the world come to discover his town, attract by the snow, lights and unique atmosphere.
En Finlande, le village du Père Noël près de Rovaniemi s’anime avant Noël, accueillant des visiteurs du monde entier malgré les matinées sombres.
En cette saison, le soleil ne se lève que tard dans la matinée, autour de 11 h, mais les préparatifs du réveillon de Noël sont déjà bien avancés. Dans le bureau de poste voisin, des milliers de lettres continuent d’arriver, rappelant que le courrier traditionnel garde toute sa place à Noël.
Sa liste presque terminée, le Père Noël a estimé, dans une déclaration à l'agence AP, que la plupart des enfants ont été suffisamment sages cette année. Il ajoute que faire de son mieux compte davantage que d'être parfait.
Chaque année, plus de 700 000 visiteurs du monde entier viennent découvrir le site du village du Père Noël, attirés par la neige, les lumières et l’ambiance unique.
In Finland, Rovaniemi, Santa Claus's town, becomes lively before Christmas, welcoming visitors from all around the world despite dark mornings.
Subject-verb agreement makes "become" into "becomes." Additionally, a comma is needed after "Santa Claus's town" since it is an appositive phrase.
In this season, Sun gets up late atthe sun rises around 11 am, but preparations for Christmas are progressing well.
What you wrote is technically correct. You could argue that this was creativity, yet to sound more native, I went ahead and rewrote some of it. Sun is the proper noun version of our star, but in English, we typically speak about the sun in its improper noun form (we also do this with the moon). We also say the sun rises (gets up) or sets (goes down).
In the (neighbourhood or neighboring) post office, thousands of letters keep coming, i. It's a reminder that traditional mail keepstill has a place forduring Christmas.
neighborhood (within your area); neighboring (next to your area). The second part of your sentence reads a little strangely. Am I guessing it's a direct translation?
His list is nearly over,. Santa Claus considered,said in a declaration at the AP agency, that most of the children were kind this year.
When using the word "consider", it is used more for thinking about something. You typically don't use the word when speaking out loud. It is also used for uncertainty or thinking things over, which is the opposite of making a declaration. A declaration is a strong statement or opinion. You can consider and then make a declaration. You can even consider making a declaration, but it is unusual to declare your consideration.
He said that doing isyour best is better than being perfect.
It actually depends on who he is talking to. In this case, I thought you were having Santa Claus address a group. In that case, you would use the word "your."
Each year, more than 700 ,000 visitors from all around the world come to discover his town, attracted by the snow, lights, and unique atmosphere.
When using numbers, rather than a space, we put a comma. Also, we use "attracted" instead of "attract" since it's a past participle instead of a verb base.
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You are very understandable with some details that aren't quite right. Keep at it, and you'll be read like a native writer in no time. You're fantastic!
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In Finland, Rovaniemi, Santa Claus's town become lively before Christmas, welcoming visitors from all around the world despite dark mornings. In Finland, Rovaniemi, Santa Claus's hometown, becomes lively before Christmas, welcoming visitors from all around the world despite dark mornings. In Finland, Rovaniemi, Santa Claus's town, becomes lively before Christmas, welcoming visitors from all around the world despite dark mornings. Subject-verb agreement makes "become" into "becomes." Additionally, a comma is needed after "Santa Claus's town" since it is an appositive phrase. |
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In this season, Sun gets up late at around 11 am, but preparations for Christmas are progressing well.
In this season, What you wrote is technically correct. You could argue that this was creativity, yet to sound more native, I went ahead and rewrote some of it. Sun is the proper noun version of our star, but in English, we typically speak about the sun in its improper noun form (we also do this with the moon). We also say the sun rises (gets up) or sets (goes down). |
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In the neighbour post office, thousands of letters keep coming, it's a reminder that traditional mail keep place for Christmas. In the neighbo In the (neighbo neighborhood (within your area); neighboring (next to your area). The second part of your sentence reads a little strangely. Am I guessing it's a direct translation? |
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His list nearly over, Santa Claus considered, in a declaration at the AP agency, that most of the children were kind this year.
His list is nearly over When using the word "consider", it is used more for thinking about something. You typically don't use the word when speaking out loud. It is also used for uncertainty or thinking things over, which is the opposite of making a declaration. A declaration is a strong statement or opinion. You can consider and then make a declaration. You can even consider making a declaration, but it is unusual to declare your consideration. |
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He said that doing is best is better than being perfect. He He said that doing It actually depends on who he is talking to. In this case, I thought you were having Santa Claus address a group. In that case, you would use the word "your." |
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Each year, more than 700 000 visitors from all around the world come to discover his town, attract by the snow, lights and unique atmosphere. Each year, more than 700 000 visitors from Each year, more than 700 When using numbers, rather than a space, we put a comma. Also, we use "attracted" instead of "attract" since it's a past participle instead of a verb base. |
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