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RomanOstap126

Nov. 19, 2023

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In bus

Today at 3:18, I took the bus, I needed go to the city, because I've been in college since Monday. But my 34th seat in the bus was already taken, the girl, who sitting on my seat, say: "my seat is 2nd, can you sit there please. I answered " Ok" And and sat on the 2nd seat .


Сегодня в 3:18 я сел на автобус, мне нужно было уехать в город, потому что я учусь в колледже с понедельника. Но мое 34 место в автобусе было уже занято, девушка, которая сидела на моем месте, сказала: "мое место второе, можешь сесть туда пожалуйста?", я ответил: " Ок" и сел на 2 место.

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IOn bthe Bus

Or "In the Bus"

Today at 3:18, I took the bus,. I needed to go to the city, because I've been inhad college classes since Monday.

Do you mean you just entered college? If so "because I just entered/started college Monday".

But mythe 34th seat ion the bus(, which I had reserved,) was already taken, t. The girl, who was sitting oin my seat, say:id, "mMy seat is 2nd, cthe 2nd seat. Can you sit there, please.?"

If there are no seat numbers on your ticket, then this is fine. But if we have a seat number, we usually say something about having a "reserved seat."

I answered " Ok" Aand and sat oin the 2nd seat .

Better: I said sure/okay, and sat in the 2nd seat.

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We go "on" the bus, and sit "in" a seat.

Also, when you report what someone else said, do like this:

(She) said, "(words here)".

You can put regular sentences with punctuation, capitalization, etc. inside the " " :)

Today at 3:18, I took the bus,. I needed go to the city, because I've been in college since Monday.

But my 34th seatseat (number 34) in the bus was already taken, t. The girl, who was sitting on / in my seat, sayid: "mMy seat is 2nd, c. Can you sit there please.?”

But my seat (number 34) in the bus was already taken. The girl who was sitting on / in my seat said: "My seat is 2. Can you sit there please?”

Sitting “on” my seat isn’t wrong, but sitting “in” my seat is more natural.

I answered " Ok" Aand and sat on the 2nd/ in seat 2.

In bus


IOn bthe Bus

Or "In the Bus"

Today at 3:18, I took the bus, I needed go to the city, because I've been in college since Monday.


Today at 3:18, I took the bus,. I needed go to the city, because I've been in college since Monday.

Today at 3:18, I took the bus,. I needed to go to the city, because I've been inhad college classes since Monday.

Do you mean you just entered college? If so "because I just entered/started college Monday".

But my 34th seat in the bus was already taken, the girl, who sitting on my seat, say: "my seat is 2nd, can you sit there please.


But my 34th seatseat (number 34) in the bus was already taken, t. The girl, who was sitting on / in my seat, sayid: "mMy seat is 2nd, c. Can you sit there please.?”

But my seat (number 34) in the bus was already taken. The girl who was sitting on / in my seat said: "My seat is 2. Can you sit there please?” Sitting “on” my seat isn’t wrong, but sitting “in” my seat is more natural.

But mythe 34th seat ion the bus(, which I had reserved,) was already taken, t. The girl, who was sitting oin my seat, say:id, "mMy seat is 2nd, cthe 2nd seat. Can you sit there, please.?"

If there are no seat numbers on your ticket, then this is fine. But if we have a seat number, we usually say something about having a "reserved seat."

I answered " Ok" And and sat on the 2nd seat .


I answered " Ok" Aand and sat on the 2nd/ in seat 2.

I answered " Ok" Aand and sat oin the 2nd seat .

Better: I said sure/okay, and sat in the 2nd seat.

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