yesterday
In a supermarket
The other day, I came across a friend of mine in a supermarket. It had been a while since I saw her last time. She said she would have to go to the administrative center within six months in order to renew her residency status. Among the documents required for submission was a linguistic certificate (Level A2). She said she would focus on studying French to pass the A2 examination this year. I hope she will succeed in it!
She said she would have to go to the administrative center within (the next) six months in order to renew her residency status.
"the next" is optional here, but I think it's more natural to include it.
I hope she will succeed in its!
The more concise expression sounds more natural in my opinion.
In a supermarket
The other day, I came across a friend of mine in a supermarket.
It had been a while since I last saw her last time.
More natural phrasing.
She said she would havehad to go to the administrative center within six months in order to renew her residency status.
Best to keep the tense simple here.
Among the documents required for submission was a linguistic certificate (Level A2).
She said she would focus on studying French to pass the A2 examination this year.
I hope she will succeed in it!
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Good writing! I hope your friend is successful.
yesterday
Thank you!
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The other day, I came across a friend of mine in a supermarket. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It had been a while since I saw her last time. It had been a while since I last saw her More natural phrasing. |
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She said she would have to go to the administrative center within six months in order to renew her residency status. She said she Best to keep the tense simple here. She said she would have to go to the administrative center within (the next) six months in order to renew her residency status. "the next" is optional here, but I think it's more natural to include it. |
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Among the documents required for submission was a linguistic certificate (Level A2). This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She said she would focus on studying French to pass the A2 examination this year. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I hope she will succeed in it! This sentence has been marked as perfect! I hope she The more concise expression sounds more natural in my opinion. |
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