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Phuocle2000

May 25, 2025

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Hello,
It has been a long time since the last time I wrote on this platform. Hope all you guys doing great!
I am 25 years old and honestly, I am thinking about changing my job recent time.
There are many reasons for this and the main one is that I want to expand my scope of work and get more useful experience to help me achieve my long-term goal which is becoming an entrepreneur.
However, I still wonder that Did I dedicate and work hard enough? or I just give up when I am still not absolutely excellent at this.
And I also afraid that AI can replace my job in the future if I am not an expert of any kind of field.

How about you guys? Are you okay right now

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Hope all you guysyou all are doing great!

I am 25 years old, and honestly, I am thinking about changing my job recent timely.

+ Added a comma since it's a combining sentence
+ recent time -> recently. This is a more natural flow and is an adverb.

There are many reasons for this and, but the main one is that I want to expand my scope of work and get more useful. Applicable and new experience tos will help me achieve my long-term goal which isof becoming an entrepreneur.

+ The sentence feels really long - it's a bit of a run on sentence. Try to split it up a bit more.
+ I used "but" since it feels like you are only talking about one experience and not all of them. However "and" also works.

However, I still wonder that Did I dedicate andif I worked hard enough?

orOr did I just give up when I am still not absolutely excellent at this.

And I also afraid that AI can replace my job in the futureI fear that if I am not an expert ofin any kind of field., AI may replace my job in the future.

How about you guysall?

+ consider changing "guys" again with "all" for more gender neutral tone

Are you okay right now?

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Overall looks good and very deep post. We all have this fear of AI in the future. I added some changes to make it flow better. There are some small grammatical issues, but overall I could get an understanding of what you were trying to convey. Nice work!

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Phuocle2000

May 26, 2025

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Thank you for all nice words & correcting!

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Hello,
I
it has been a long time since the last time I wrote on this platform.

Hope all you guys are doing great!

I am 25 years old and honestly, I amhave been thinking about changing my job recent timely.

There are many reasons for this andbut the main one is that I want to expand my scope of work and get more useful experience to help me achieve my long-term goal, which is becoming an entrepreneur.

However, I still wonder that Did Iif I have been dedicated and worked hard enough?

or do I just give up when I am still not absolutely excellent at this.it?

And I am also afraid that AI can replace my job in the future if I am not an expert of any kind of field.

How about you guys?

Are you okaydoing well right now?

Feedback

Good writing!

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Phuocle2000

May 26, 2025

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Thank you!

Hello,
It has been a long time since
the last time I wroI've written on this platform.

Your version makes sense as well. If I were to keep your wording, I might write: It has been a long time since I wrote on this platform. "Since the last time" is extra information but it's also kind of understood since you already said "it's been a long time."

Hope all you guys doing greatwell!

Your response is appropriate as well. I think it is more common to hear someone say I hope you are doing well (instead of I hope you're doing great).

I am 25 years old and honestly, I amhave recently begun thinking about changing my job recent time.

I think you would also be able to clearly express yourself leaving out the words "honestly" and "recently". Another alternative: I am 25 years old and have begun to think about changing my job.

There arI have many reasons for this and the main one is thatwanting to change my job. Mainly, I want to expand my scope of work and getain/obtain more useful experience tos. I believe these will help me achieve my long-term goal which isof becoming an entrepreneur.

This was a run on sentence, meaning it needed to be broken up. Several concepts could stand by themselves.

However, I still wonder that : "Did I dedicate myself completely and work hard enough?"

I added quotes because it seemed appropriate as you asking yourself a question with those specific words.

or "Will I just give up whenif I am still not absolutely excellent at this.?"

Andditionally, I alsom afraid that AI can replace my job in the future if I am not an expert of any kind ofin this field.

Another option: I worry that AI can replace....

How about you guys?

You all is implied.

Are you okay right now?

This seems like a strange conclusion. Unless you are asking, do others feel confident in their jobs? Do they have job security?

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Phuocle2000

May 26, 2025

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Thank you for correcting

How about you guys?


How about you guys?

You all is implied.

How about you guysall?

+ consider changing "guys" again with "all" for more gender neutral tone

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Are you okay right now


Are you okay right now?

This seems like a strange conclusion. Unless you are asking, do others feel confident in their jobs? Do they have job security?

Are you okaydoing well right now?

Are you okay right now?

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Hello, It has been a long time since the last time I wrote on this platform.


Hello,
It has been a long time since
the last time I wroI've written on this platform.

Your version makes sense as well. If I were to keep your wording, I might write: It has been a long time since I wrote on this platform. "Since the last time" is extra information but it's also kind of understood since you already said "it's been a long time."

Hello,
I
it has been a long time since the last time I wrote on this platform.

Hope all you guys doing great!


Hope all you guys doing greatwell!

Your response is appropriate as well. I think it is more common to hear someone say I hope you are doing well (instead of I hope you're doing great).

Hope all you guys are doing great!

Hope all you guysyou all are doing great!

I am 25 years old and honestly, I am thinking about changing my job recent time.


I am 25 years old and honestly, I amhave recently begun thinking about changing my job recent time.

I think you would also be able to clearly express yourself leaving out the words "honestly" and "recently". Another alternative: I am 25 years old and have begun to think about changing my job.

I am 25 years old and honestly, I amhave been thinking about changing my job recent timely.

I am 25 years old, and honestly, I am thinking about changing my job recent timely.

+ Added a comma since it's a combining sentence + recent time -> recently. This is a more natural flow and is an adverb.

There are many reasons for this and the main one is that I want to expand my scope of work and get more useful experience to help me achieve my long-term goal which is becoming an entrepreneur.


There arI have many reasons for this and the main one is thatwanting to change my job. Mainly, I want to expand my scope of work and getain/obtain more useful experience tos. I believe these will help me achieve my long-term goal which isof becoming an entrepreneur.

This was a run on sentence, meaning it needed to be broken up. Several concepts could stand by themselves.

There are many reasons for this andbut the main one is that I want to expand my scope of work and get more useful experience to help me achieve my long-term goal, which is becoming an entrepreneur.

There are many reasons for this and, but the main one is that I want to expand my scope of work and get more useful. Applicable and new experience tos will help me achieve my long-term goal which isof becoming an entrepreneur.

+ The sentence feels really long - it's a bit of a run on sentence. Try to split it up a bit more. + I used "but" since it feels like you are only talking about one experience and not all of them. However "and" also works.

However, I still wonder that Did I dedicate and work hard enough?


However, I still wonder that : "Did I dedicate myself completely and work hard enough?"

I added quotes because it seemed appropriate as you asking yourself a question with those specific words.

However, I still wonder that Did I dedicate andif I worked hard enough?

However, I still wonder that Did Iif I have been dedicated and worked hard enough?

or I just give up when I am still not absolutely excellent at this.


or "Will I just give up whenif I am still not absolutely excellent at this.?"

orOr did I just give up when I am still not absolutely excellent at this.

or do I just give up when I am still not absolutely excellent at this.it?

And I also afraid that AI can replace my job in the future if I am not an expert of any kind of field.


Andditionally, I alsom afraid that AI can replace my job in the future if I am not an expert of any kind ofin this field.

Another option: I worry that AI can replace....

And I also afraid that AI can replace my job in the futureI fear that if I am not an expert ofin any kind of field., AI may replace my job in the future.

And I am also afraid that AI can replace my job in the future if I am not an expert of any kind of field.

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