Dec. 7, 2023
Importance of sleep
My daily life has changed recently due to my health problem.
Currently, I'm very restricted in when I can be active and when I must be in bed.
However, this restriction seems to be improving the way I can work.
I used to work for long hours, 7 am to 10 pm at worst, with rather low productivity.
I should have realized the importance of sleep.
最近、健康上の問題で日常生活が変わりました。
現在、活動できる時間とベッドにいなければならない時間がかなり制限されています。
しかし、この制限のおかげで働き方が改善されつつあるようです。
以前は、最悪な場合朝7時から夜10時までという長時間労働で、生産性はかなり低いものでした。
睡眠の重要性に気づくべきでした。
The Importance of sSleep
My daily life has changed recently due to (my health problems / a health problem).
Currently, I'm very restricted in when I can be active and when I must be in bed.
However, this restriction seems to be improving the way I can work.
I used to work for long hours, even 7 am to 10 pm at the worst, with rather low productivity.
I should have realized the importance of sleep.
Dec. 8, 2023
Thank you for your helpful corrections!
Importance of sleep
My daily life has changed recently due to mya health problem.
"My" isn't incorrect, but it's sort of like using "the"—it is implied that you've mentioned the health problem before or that the readers are aware.
Currently, I'm very restricted in when I can be active and when I must be in bed.
However, this restriction seems to be improving the way I can work.
Your original sentence is also fine.
I used to work for long hours, 7 am to 10 pm at worst, with rather low productivity.
I should have realized the importance of sleep.
Feedback
Definitely! Sleep is how the body heals and how new things you learned and committed to memory. Take care!
Dec. 8, 2023
Thank you very much for your corrections and explanations! Although the use of articles is one of the hurdles for Japanese people to learn English, your explanation is very clear.
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My daily life has changed recently due to my health problem. My daily life has changed recently due to "My" isn't incorrect, but it's sort of like using "the"—it is implied that you've mentioned the health problem before or that the readers are aware. My daily life has changed recently due to (my health problems / a health problem). |
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Currently, I'm very restricted in when I can be active and when I must be in bed. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, this restriction seems to be improving the way I can work. However, this restriction seems to be improving the way I Your original sentence is also fine. However, this restriction seems to be improving the way I |
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I used to work for long hours, 7 am to 10 pm at worst, with rather low productivity. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I used to work for long hours, even 7 am to 10 pm at the worst, with rather low productivity. |
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I should have realized the importance of sleep. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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