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QIUJIN

June 7, 2023

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As the development of economical globalization, variety of imported products are available to customers all around the world. Trade among different countries is increasing in an astonished speed.

Imported products have brought a lot of benefits, especially they provide competitive prices because those export countries are enable to control the costs. The lower-end industries are switching to those countries where workers get paid extremely low. For example, many textile, shoes, household items are manufactured in Vietnam or Indonesia, in most of places in the world those products from Southeast Asia countries are cheaper than local. At the same time establishing factories in underdeveloped areas will create manufacture job opportunities for people living in poverty, improving their living standards.

On the other hand, household appliances and hi-tech products from abroad usually have advanced technologies or better design for use. International corporate would adopt a lot of approaches to occupy the market, including cutting price, extending the guarantee and providing extra services. Thereby customers have more choices than before and lead a better life. Although in a short period of time the challenge from imported products may impact domestic industries, the competition among companies enforces them to increase the quality of their products and additional services. Domestic companies who have completed a technology revolution will have their own commercial viability, otherwise they can not survive.

The downside is that if domestic industries were too weak to upgrade their technologies or be defeated completely by international corporate, the whole country have to rely on imported products, which is not good for national independent. And a number of factories close down will lead to an increasing unemployment rate, and to be more seriously, cause economic collapse.

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As the development of economical globalization, develops, a variety of imported products are available to custoonsumers all around the world.

Trade amongbetween different countries is increasing inat an astonisheding speed.

Imported products have brought a lot of benefits, especially the fact that they provide competitive prices because those exporting countries are enable to control the costs.

The lower-endess developed(?) industries are switching to those countries where workers get paid extremely low wages.

Unsure about this correction but I think this is what you meant

For example, many textile, shoes, and household items are manufactured in Vietnam or Indonesia, i. In most of places in the world, those products from Southeast Asian countries are cheaper than local products.

At the same time establish, developing factories in underdeveloped areas will create manufactureing job opportunities for people living in poverty, improving their living standards.

On the other hand, household appliances and hi-tech products from abroad usually have advanced technologies or better design for uses.

International corporate wouldions(?) have adopted a lot of approaches to occupy the market, including cutting prices, extending the guarantees and providing extra services.

Again, not sure about this correction but assuming you mean to say countries that sell their products across the world

Although in athe short period of time the challenge fromterm, imported products may impactchallenge domestic industries, negatively, the competition among companies enforccourages them to increase the quality of their products and additional services.

Domestic companies who have completedundergone a technologyical revolution will have theirdeveloped own commercial viability, otherwise they canwill not survive.

The downside is that if domestic industries weare too weak to upgrade their technologies or, they may be defeated completely by international corporate, the whole countryions. The country will then have to rely on imported products, which is not good for national independentce.

And aLarge numbers of factories closeing down will lead to an increasingthe unemployment rate to increase, and to bin the mwore seriouslyst case scenario, cause economic collapse.

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Well written and interesting to read!

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QIUJIN

June 7, 2023

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The lower-endess developed(?) industries are switching to those countries where workers get paid extremely low wages.

“lower-end industry” here in China means those without high tech industry such as textile, shoes, handcrafts... is it rare?

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QIUJIN

June 7, 2023

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Trade amongbetween different countries is increasing inat an astonisheding speed.

trade should be happen among many countries...am I wrong?

Import


As the development of economical globalization, variety of imported products are available to customers all around the world.


As the development of economical globalization, develops, a variety of imported products are available to custoonsumers all around the world.

Trade among different countries is increasing in an astonished speed.


Trade amongbetween different countries is increasing inat an astonisheding speed.

Imported products have brought a lot of benefits, especially they provide competitive prices because those export countries are enable to control the costs.


Imported products have brought a lot of benefits, especially the fact that they provide competitive prices because those exporting countries are enable to control the costs.

The lower-end industries are switching to those countries where workers get paid extremely low.


The lower-endess developed(?) industries are switching to those countries where workers get paid extremely low wages.

Unsure about this correction but I think this is what you meant

For example, many textile, shoes, household items are manufactured in Vietnam or Indonesia, in most of places in the world those products from Southeast Asia countries are cheaper than local.


For example, many textile, shoes, and household items are manufactured in Vietnam or Indonesia, i. In most of places in the world, those products from Southeast Asian countries are cheaper than local products.

At the same time establishing factories in underdeveloped areas will create manufacture job opportunities for people living in poverty, improving their living standards.


At the same time establish, developing factories in underdeveloped areas will create manufactureing job opportunities for people living in poverty, improving their living standards.

On the other hand, household appliances and hi-tech products from abroad usually have advanced technologies or better design for use.


On the other hand, household appliances and hi-tech products from abroad usually have advanced technologies or better design for uses.

International corporate would adopt a lot of approaches to occupy the market, including cutting price, extending the guarantee and providing extra services.


International corporate wouldions(?) have adopted a lot of approaches to occupy the market, including cutting prices, extending the guarantees and providing extra services.

Again, not sure about this correction but assuming you mean to say countries that sell their products across the world

Thereby customers have more choices than before and lead a better life.


Although in a short period of time the challenge from imported products may impact domestic industries, the competition among companies enforces them to increase the quality of their products and additional services.


Although in athe short period of time the challenge fromterm, imported products may impactchallenge domestic industries, negatively, the competition among companies enforccourages them to increase the quality of their products and additional services.

Domestic companies who have completed a technology revolution will have their own commercial viability, otherwise they can not survive.


Domestic companies who have completedundergone a technologyical revolution will have theirdeveloped own commercial viability, otherwise they canwill not survive.

The downside is that if domestic industries were too weak to upgrade their technologies or be defeated completely by international corporate, the whole country have to rely on imported products, which is not good for national independent.


The downside is that if domestic industries weare too weak to upgrade their technologies or, they may be defeated completely by international corporate, the whole countryions. The country will then have to rely on imported products, which is not good for national independentce.

And a number of factories close down will lead to an increasing unemployment rate, and to be more seriously, cause economic collapse.


And aLarge numbers of factories closeing down will lead to an increasingthe unemployment rate to increase, and to bin the mwore seriouslyst case scenario, cause economic collapse.

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