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kiwy

Sept. 27, 2021

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I went running tonight. My goal distance was 2.5 km, but I ran 3.8 km at last. If my stomach hadn't felt uncomfortable, I would have run more. I hope I can run 5 km next month.
When it was class break, there were two girls passed. I heard one of them answer another: she was a girl. It wasn't the first time that I heard people talk about my gender near me in the school, and I believe that it also won't be the last time.
There are ten female staff in the school, my hair is the shortest, which length is like boys'. I also like wearing shirt and casual trousers, and I seldom wear bra, which makes me look like a man. However, the point is that many students are rude. It is really impolite to talk about someone nearby. Today, Ms. Li said, "our students should be politer." Last week, she also said, "I have never had such naught students like these of this school." She had worked in her hometown a few years. This is her first term in this school.
I am quite agree with her. There are several boys, who are very troublesome, in her class. I feel quite sorry for her. I can't do nothing for her because my students also made a lot of trouble.

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Impolite

I went running tonight.

My goal distance was 2.5 km, but I ran 3.8 km at last.

If my stomach hadn't felt uncomfortablebeen upset, I would have run more.

I hope I can run 5 km next month.

When it was class break, there were two girls passedTwo girls passed me during break time.

I heard one of them answer another: , saying, "she wais a girl."

It wasn't the first time that I heard people talk about my gender near me in the school, and I believe that it alsoit won't be the last time.

"Wasn't the first time...and won't be the last" is the common phrase.

There are ten female staff in the school, and my hair is the shortest, whicith length is liksimilar to the boys'.

I also like wearing shirts and casual trousers, and I seldom wear a bra, which makes me look like a man.

Would be best to specify the type of shirt, as in general a teacher wearing a shirt (blouse, button-down, etc.) is not necessarily informal.

HoweverRegardless, the point is that many students are rude.

It is really impolite to talk about someone who's nearby.

Today, Ms. Li said, "our students should be more politer."

Last week, she also said, "I have never hadtaught such naughty students likeas these of this school."

She had worked in her hometown for a few years.

This is her first term in this school.

I am quite in agreement with her.

Or, "I quite agree with her."

There are several boys, who are very troublesome, in her class.

I feel quite sorry for her.

I can't do nothing for herThere's nothing I can do for her, unfortunately, because my students also madke a lot of trouble.

"Can't do nothing," while it actually means the same thing as "can do nothing," makes you sound like a hillbilly, hhh.

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kiwy

Sept. 28, 2021

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Thank you.

Impolite


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I went running tonight.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My goal distance was 2.5 km, but I ran 3.8 km at last.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If my stomach hadn't felt uncomfortable, I would have run more.


If my stomach hadn't felt uncomfortablebeen upset, I would have run more.

I hope I can run 5 km next month.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When it was class break, there were two girls passed.


When it was class break, there were two girls passedTwo girls passed me during break time.

I heard one of them answer another: she was a girl.


I heard one of them answer another: , saying, "she wais a girl."

It wasn't the first time that I heard people talk about my gender near me in the school, and I believe that it also won't be the last time.


It wasn't the first time that I heard people talk about my gender near me in the school, and I believe that it alsoit won't be the last time.

"Wasn't the first time...and won't be the last" is the common phrase.

There are ten female staff in the school, my hair is the shortest, which length is like boys'.


There are ten female staff in the school, and my hair is the shortest, whicith length is liksimilar to the boys'.

I also like wearing shirt and casual trousers, and I seldom wear bra, which makes me look like a man.


I also like wearing shirts and casual trousers, and I seldom wear a bra, which makes me look like a man.

Would be best to specify the type of shirt, as in general a teacher wearing a shirt (blouse, button-down, etc.) is not necessarily informal.

However, the point is that many students are rude.


HoweverRegardless, the point is that many students are rude.

It is really impolite to talk about someone nearby.


It is really impolite to talk about someone who's nearby.

Today, Ms. Li said, "our students should be politer."


Today, Ms. Li said, "our students should be more politer."

Last week, she also said, "I have never had such naught students like these of this school."


Last week, she also said, "I have never hadtaught such naughty students likeas these of this school."

She had worked in her hometown a few years.


She had worked in her hometown for a few years.

This is her first term in this school.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am quite agree with her.


I am quite in agreement with her.

Or, "I quite agree with her."

There are several boys, who are very troublesome, in her class.


There are several boys, who are very troublesome, in her class.

I feel quite sorry for her.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I can't do nothing for her because my students also made a lot of trouble.


I can't do nothing for herThere's nothing I can do for her, unfortunately, because my students also madke a lot of trouble.

"Can't do nothing," while it actually means the same thing as "can do nothing," makes you sound like a hillbilly, hhh.

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