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dannymleone

July 29, 2020

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Impact of Interstellar War

I randomly choose words, expressions, phrasal verbs etc. from my flash cards and my task is to incorporate them into meaningful sentence/s or a short story.

Random words; HUGELY CONFLICTED, GET UP AND GO

When I visited her couple months ago I was hugely conflicted by chatting with her. I’d known her for many years as a get-up-and-go person, but since the end of The Third Interstellar War she’s hardly ever left her bristled with weapons bunker on Zitron IV.

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When I visited her couple months ago I was hugefelt greatly conflicted bywhen chatting with her.

I’d known her for many years as a get-up-and-go person, but since the end of Tthe Third Interstellar War she’s hardly ever left her bunker bristleding with weapons bunker on Zitron IV.

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dannymleone

July 30, 2020

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When I visited her couple months ago I was hugefelt greatly conflicted bywhen chatting with her.

So, 'hugely conflicted' doesn't make sense at all or just in this sentence?

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noon

July 30, 2020

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So, 'hugely conflicted' doesn't make sense at all or just in this sentence?

Just a style change, hugely is grammatically correct but a lot less common than greatly. I looked up the frequency at https://books.google.com/ngrams/graph?content=hugely%2C+greatly&year_start=1900 and it looks like hugely is becoming more popular so maybe I'm just old school.

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duncan140

Aug. 9, 2020

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I’d known her for many years as a get-up-and-go person, but since the end of Tthe Third Interstellar War she’s hardly ever left her bunker bristleding with weapons bunker on Zitron IV.

"She's hardly ever left her bunker bristling with weapons" could mean that she often leaves with no weapons. The initial word oder by OP makes it easier to tell that the BUNKER is bristling with weapons, rather than HER

Impact of Interstellar War

When I visited her couple months ago I was hugely conflicted by chatting withwhen talking to her.

I’d known her for many years as a get-up-and-go person, but since the end of The Third Interstellar War she’s hardly ever left her bristled with weapons bunker on Zitron IV.

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duncan140

Aug. 9, 2020

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"She's hardly ever left her bunker bristling with weapons" could mean that she often leaves with no weapons. The initial word oder by OP makes it easier to tell that the BUNKER is bristling with weapons, rather than HER

Impact of Interstellar War


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I randomly choose words, expressions, phrasal verbs etc.


from my flash cards and my task is to incorporate them into meaningful sentence/s or a short story.


Random words; HUGELY CONFLICTED, GET UP AND GO


When I visited her couple months ago I was hugely conflicted by chatting with her.


When I visited her couple months ago I was hugely conflicted by chatting withwhen talking to her.

When I visited her couple months ago I was hugefelt greatly conflicted bywhen chatting with her.

I’d known her for many years as a get-up-and-go person, but since the end of The Third Interstellar War she’s hardly ever left her bristled with weapons bunker on Zitron IV.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I’d known her for many years as a get-up-and-go person, but since the end of Tthe Third Interstellar War she’s hardly ever left her bunker bristleding with weapons bunker on Zitron IV.

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