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myme

June 6, 2024

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I'm wondering if the text on the poster is correct.

I'm wondering if the text on the poster is correct.
I would like to see if the following sentences are correct.

・We have various prizes up for grabs.
・It is also recommended as a souvenir from Japan.
・Please feel free to stop by.


ポスターの文章が正しいか悩んでます。
下記の文章が正しいか見てほしいです。

・いろいろな賞品(景品)を置いています。
・日本のお土産としてもおすすめです。
・お気軽にお立ち寄りください。

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I'm wondering if the text on the poster is correct.

I'm wondering if the text on the poster is correct.

I would like to see if the following sentences are correct.

・We have various prizes up for grabs.

It is alsoWe recommended them as a souvenirs from Japan.

yours was correct (if you change "it is" to "they are"), but I made it more natural
I don't think the も meaning is important, but if you want it you can say "we also recommend"

・Please feel free to stop by.

I'm wondering if the text on the poster is correct.

I'm wondering if the text on the poster is correct.

I would like to see if the following sentences are correct.

・We have various prizes up for grabs.

・It is also recommended as a souvenir from Japan.

・Please feel free to stop by.

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I would like to see if the following sentences are correct.


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・We have various prizes up for grabs.


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I'm wondering if the text on the poster is correct.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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・It is also recommended as a souvenir from Japan.


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It is alsoWe recommended them as a souvenirs from Japan.

yours was correct (if you change "it is" to "they are"), but I made it more natural I don't think the も meaning is important, but if you want it you can say "we also recommend"

・Please feel free to stop by.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm wondering if the text on the poster is correct.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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