Aug. 4, 2025
I'm very nervous
I had done Home Office until my next new job. I'm going to work to L'OREAL and I'll start in two weeks. It's very excited and new to me becouse I want to be more social. Since my dog dies (3 months ago) I have felt so alone and sad. So this could be a new begginig to me, I feel that my life is going to have a very hugh change.
Yo hacia Home Office hasta mi nuevo trabajo. Voy a trabajar para L'OREAL y empiezo en dos semanas. Es muy emocionante para mi por que quiero ser mas social. Desde que mi perro murio (Hace 3 meses) me he sentido muy solo y triste. Este podria ser un nuevo inicio para mi, siento que mi vida va a tener un cambio muy grande
I'm very nervous
I had done Home Office until my nextworked from home before getting a new job.
I'm going to work ato L'OREAL, and I'll start in two weeks.
It's very exciteding and new to me becoause I want to be more social.
Since my dog dies (d 3 months ago), I have felt so alone and sad.
So this could be a new begginning tofor me, I feel that my life is going to have a very hughe change.
I had done Home Officeve only worked from home, until my next new job.
This sounds more natural, people don’t really use the term ‘home office’. It is implied already that you work from home, when you say you work from home.
I'm going to work ato L'OREAL and I'll start in two weeks.
It's very exciteding and new to me becoause I want to be more social.
Since my dog diesd (3 months ago) I have felt so alone and sad.
So this could be a new begginning tofor me, I feel that my life is going to have a very hughe change.
Saying ‘for me’ is more natural.
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I tried to make some of your sentences sound more natural. But your writing is good! I’m sorry to hear about your dog, but keep up the good work with the writing!
I had done Home Officly worked from home until my next new job.
I'm going to work to at L'OREAL and I'll start in two weeks.
It's very exciteding and new to me becoause I want to be more social.
Since my dog diesd (3 months ago) I have felt so alone and sad.
So this could be a new begginning tofor me, I feel that my life is going to have a very hughe change.
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Awesome job! Your English is really great :)
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