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NotTomato

Sept. 10, 2025

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I'm thinking of...

I'm thinking of my future. What will I become? I'm worried that I am not good enough and will stay unemployed forever. I think will I ever take care of someone with my current status.
I'm thinking of my past. I'm used to be a bully in primary, and I was a game-addict in highschool so, I didn't pay attention to make new friends and stay in touch with my old friends. That problems catch up now because I don't know how to talk to person anymore.
I'm think of of my present. I'm still stucked. But come to think of it, if I'm still thinking regreting the past and worried about the future..., future me will probarly blame their problelms on me like I'm doing now with my past me. Moreover, I can't change the past and the past me doesn't know that friends are important, but I now I know it. I should do something with it.

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I'm thinking of...

I'm thinking of my future.

What will I become?

I'm worried that I am not good enough and will stay unemployed forever.

I thinkwonder if I will I ever be able to take care of someone within my current status.

I'm thinking of my past.

I'm used to be a bully in primary school, and I was a game-addict in high school, so, I didn't pay attentiontake the proper care to make new friends and stay in touch with my old friends.

Thatose problems are catch uping up with me now because I don't know how to talk to personople anymore.

I'm thinking of of my present.

I'm still stucked.

But come to think of it, if I'm still thinking, regretting the past and worriedying about the future..., future me will probarbly blame their problelms on the current me, like I'm doing now with mythe past me.

Moreover, I can't change the past and; the past me doesidn't know that friends are important, but I now I know it now.

I should do something with ithis knowledge.

I think w"Will I ever take care of someone with my current status.?"

Since you are writing about a specific thought, typically " " are used for that thought. And since you are voicing a question with that thought, using a question mark is appropriate. Another way you could write this sentence would be: I think about if I will ever take care of someone with my current status. In this case, you are not voicing a thought but talking about something you are thinking about.

I'm used to be a bully in primary school, and I was a game-addict in high school so. Because of that, I didn't pay attention to makeing new friends andor staying in touch with my old friendones.

The sentence works better broken up into two and the second sentence needs to have the verbs in the gerund form.

Thatese problems catch uphave caught up to me now because I don't know how to talk to personople anymore.

I'm think of of mythe present.

I'm still stucked.

But come to think of it, if I'm still thinking regretting the past and worried about the future..., future me will probarbly blame their problelms on me like I'm doing now with mythe past me.

Moreover, I can't change the past and the past me doesn't know that friends are important, but I now. That said, I know it now.

I should do something withabout it.

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NotTomato

Sept. 12, 2025

11

Thank you for your efforts! I apperciate that not only you explain what I did wrong but you also suggest alternative.

I'm thinking of...


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I'm thinking of my future.


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What will I become?


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I'm worried that I am not good enough and will stay unemployed forever.


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I think will I ever take care of someone with my current status.


I think w"Will I ever take care of someone with my current status.?"

Since you are writing about a specific thought, typically " " are used for that thought. And since you are voicing a question with that thought, using a question mark is appropriate. Another way you could write this sentence would be: I think about if I will ever take care of someone with my current status. In this case, you are not voicing a thought but talking about something you are thinking about.

I thinkwonder if I will I ever be able to take care of someone within my current status.

I'm thinking of my past.


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I'm used to be a bully in primary, and I was a game-addict in highschool so, I didn't pay attention to make new friends and stay in touch with my old friends.


I'm used to be a bully in primary school, and I was a game-addict in high school so. Because of that, I didn't pay attention to makeing new friends andor staying in touch with my old friendones.

The sentence works better broken up into two and the second sentence needs to have the verbs in the gerund form.

I'm used to be a bully in primary school, and I was a game-addict in high school, so, I didn't pay attentiontake the proper care to make new friends and stay in touch with my old friends.

That problems catch up now because I don't know how to talk to person anymore.


Thatese problems catch uphave caught up to me now because I don't know how to talk to personople anymore.

Thatose problems are catch uping up with me now because I don't know how to talk to personople anymore.

I'm think of of my present.


I'm think of of mythe present.

I'm thinking of of my present.

I'm still stucked.


I'm still stucked.

I'm still stucked.

But come to think of it, if I'm still thinking regreting the past and worried about the future..., future me will probarly blame their problelms on me like I'm doing now with my past me.


But come to think of it, if I'm still thinking regretting the past and worried about the future..., future me will probarbly blame their problelms on me like I'm doing now with mythe past me.

But come to think of it, if I'm still thinking, regretting the past and worriedying about the future..., future me will probarbly blame their problelms on the current me, like I'm doing now with mythe past me.

Moreover, I can't change the past and the past me doesn't know that friends are important, but I now I know it.


Moreover, I can't change the past and the past me doesn't know that friends are important, but I now. That said, I know it now.

Moreover, I can't change the past and; the past me doesidn't know that friends are important, but I now I know it now.

I should do something with it.


I should do something withabout it.

I should do something with ithis knowledge.

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