Jan. 4, 2026
I'm still in the fitting room
- Well, just get something already and that's it... It is all nice and practical. This or that .. What a big deal? You are looking for a four-leaf clover.
- I just can't do this. I need something special - useful, practical and convenient. So I continue looking for a best way of using the langcorrect.
I know, it is just a text writing . But for me it should be fullfilled with a sense.
Today I prepared the same text but in two different versions. I think it is extremely important for anybody to show emotions through the text.
Of course you can say"I am sad today ", but it is not a natural way.
Today is raining all day long and rather cold outside as well as inside my apartments. Let's see on my examples how I describe it:
Bright version:
Today is a rainy day and the sky is full of grey clouds. Many people go on the street and smile enjoying the peaceful sound of raindrops. Even though it is wet outside, it’s a perfect day to relax indoors with a warm tea or a good book. The calm weather invites to take a moment for ourselves. There is something comforting about this rainy day.
Grey version:
Today the rain falls steadily under a heavy, grey sky. The dull weather matches the bad mood. The cold drops make the day feel slow and lonely. People walk with downcast faces. It’s a day that reminds us of sadness . The rain blurs the edges ofall thing around, it gives a strange feeling of irreality.
What a's the big deal?
It's a set phase.
I know, it is just a text writing .
But for me it should be fullfilled with a sense of purpose.
Just guessing at what you are trying to say.
"Fulfilled" is most often used when something is complete, done, or achieved. Fulfilled = satisfied.
"Filled" can be used for the experience.
Today I prepared the same text but in two different versions.
No "but" needed because it was part of the plan.
I think it is extremely important for anybody to show emotions through the text.
"Anybody" does not work here.
Options:
1."I think it is extremely important for everyone to show emotions through the text." (Probably not a good statement to make because some readers might stop reading right here.)
2."I think it is extremely important to show emotions through the text." (important for you and others but not necessarily everyone)
Of course you can say, "I am sad today "," but it is non't a natural way to express that emotion.
I'm guessing at what you mean.
Today ist has been raining all day long and rather cold outside as well as inside my apartments.
Let's see on my examples of how I describe it:
Today is a rainy day, and the sky is full of grey clouds.
Many people goare on the street and. They smile, enjoying the peaceful sound of raindrops.
This doesn't have a natural flow, but I didn't want to completely rewrite your sentence to make it better.
Even though it is wet outside, it’s a perfect day to relax indoors with a cup / mug of warm tea or a good book.
The calm weather invites us to take a moment for ourselves.
It’s a day that reminds us of sadness .
The rain blurs the edges of all thing around, it givs; it creates a strange feeling of irreality.
I don't think adding "around" adds any new information.
"Around us" would add new information because it would place the speaker among the people in the rain.
Feedback
Milano, your talent for writing is like a bag full of cats. They are playful, intriguing, beautiful, and hard to control. You did a really good job with the two versions of the rainy day. I think this structure allowed you to herd your cats and come out of the fitting room looking good.
So I continue looking for athe best way of using the langcorrect.
I know, it is just a text writing .
But for me it should be fullfilled with a sense of purpose.
I think it is extremely important for aneverybody to show emotions through the text.
Today it is raining all day long and rather cold outside as well as inside my apartments.
Many people go on the street and smile; enjoying the peaceful sound of raindrops.
Even though it is wet outside, it’s a perfect day to relax indoors with a warm tea or a good book.
The calm weather invites us to take a moment for ourselves.
There is something comforting about this rainy day.
Today the rain falls steadily under a heavy, grey sky.
The dull weather matches the bad mood.
The cold drops make the day feel slow and lonely.
People walk with downcast faces.
It’s a day that reminds us of sadness .
The rain blurs the edges of all surrounding things around, it gives a strange feeling of irreality.
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The cold drops make the day feel slow and lonely. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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People walk with downcast faces. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It’s a day that reminds us of sadness . This sentence has been marked as perfect! It’s a day that reminds us of sadness |
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The rain blurs the edges ofall thing around, it gives a strange feeling of irreality. The rain blurs the edges of all surrounding things a The rain blurs the edges of all thing I don't think adding "around" adds any new information. "Around us" would add new information because it would place the speaker among the people in the rain. |
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I'm still in the fitting room |
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- Well, just get something already and that's it... |
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It is all nice and practical. |
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This or that .. |
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What a big deal? What It's a set phase. |
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You are looking for a four-leaf clover. |
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- I just can't do this. |
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I know, it is just a text writing . I know I know, it is just |
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Even though it is wet outside, it’s a perfect day to relax indoors with a warm tea or a good book. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Even though it is wet outside, it’s a perfect day to relax indoors with a cup / mug of warm tea or a good book. |
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The calm weather invites to take a moment for ourselves. The calm weather invites us to take a moment for ourselves. The calm weather invites us to take a moment for ourselves. |
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There is something comforting about this rainy day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Grey version: |
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Today the rain falls steadily under a heavy, grey sky. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The dull weather matches the bad mood. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I need something special - useful, practical and convenient. |
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So I continue looking for a best way of using the langcorrect. So I continue looking for |
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But for me it should be fullfilled with a sense. But for me it should be ful But for me it should be Just guessing at what you are trying to say. "Fulfilled" is most often used when something is complete, done, or achieved. Fulfilled = satisfied. "Filled" can be used for the experience. |
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Today I prepared the same text but in two different versions. Today I prepared the same text No "but" needed because it was part of the plan. |
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I think it is extremely important for anybody to show emotions through the text. I think it is extremely important for I think it is extremely important "Anybody" does not work here. Options: 1."I think it is extremely important for everyone to show emotions through the text." (Probably not a good statement to make because some readers might stop reading right here.) 2."I think it is extremely important to show emotions through the text." (important for you and others but not necessarily everyone) |
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Of course you can say"I am sad today ", but it is not a natural way. Of course you can say, "I am sad today I'm guessing at what you mean. |
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Today is raining all day long and rather cold outside as well as inside my apartments. Today it is raining all day long and rather cold outside as well as inside my apartment Today i |
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Let's see on my examples how I describe it: Let's see |
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Bright version: |
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Today is a rainy day and the sky is full of grey clouds. Today is a rainy day, and the sky is full of grey clouds. |
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Many people go on the street and smile enjoying the peaceful sound of raindrops. Many people go on the street and smile; enjoying the peaceful sound of raindrops. Many people This doesn't have a natural flow, but I didn't want to completely rewrite your sentence to make it better. |
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