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I'm Someone Who Enjoys Walking
Personally, I love walking, especially in nature. I like breathing fresh air, and seeing all the colors. When I walk, I'm like a child, because I'm very interested in the details of the plants, flowers, lakes, and more. I don't like being close to animals, because I don't want them to bite me or to disturb them, hahaha.
Over time, I've been learning more about the sea, because now I've more opportunities to be there. So, I watch many documentaries about the ocean, and I even had the opportunity to see a whale jumping out of the sea. I'll never forget that memory. Also, I'm trying to practice snorkel, because I don't have glasses anymore (I'm very happy, I had surgery to correct my myopia). Before, I couldn't practice it, because without my glasses everything was blurry, like looking through a dirty window.
Soy alguien que disfruta caminar
Personalmente, amo caminar especialmente en la naturaleza. Me gusta respirar aire fresco y ver todos los colores. Cuando camino, soy como una niña porque estoy muy interesada en los detalles de las plantas, flores, lagos y más. No me gusta estar cerca de los animales porque no quiero que me muerdan o molestarlos, jajaja.
Con el tiempo, he estado aprendiendo más sobre el mar, porque ahora tengo más oportunidades para estar ahí. Entonces, veo muchos documentales sobre el mar y también tuve la oportunidad de ver una ballena saltando fuera del mar. Nunca olvidaré ese recuerdo. Además, estoy tratando de practicar snorkel porque ahora no tengo gafas (estoy muy feliz, tuve la cirugía para corregir mi miopía). Antes, no podía practicarlo, porque sin mis gafas todo era nublado, como viendo a travez de una ventana sucia.
I'm Someone Who Enjoys Walking
Personally, I love walking, especially in nature.
I like breathing fresh air, and seeing all the colors.
When I walk, I'm like a child, because I'm very interested in the details of the plants, flowers, lakes, and more.
I don't like being close to animals, because I don't want them to bite me or to disturb them, hahaha.
Over time, I've been learning more about the sea, because now I' have more opportunities to be there.
So, I watch many documentaries about the ocean, and I even had the opportunity to see a whale jumping out of the sea.
I'll never forget that memory.
Also, I'm trying to practice snorkeling, because I don't have glasses anymore (I'm very happy, I had surgery to correct my myopia).
Before, I couldn't practice it, because without my glasses everything was blurry, like looking through a dirty window.
I like breathing fresh air, and seeing all the colors.
When I walk, I'm like a child, because I'm very interested in the details of all the plants, flowers, lakes, and more.
I don't like being close tonear animals, because I don't want them to bite me or and I don't want to disturb them, hahaha.
Over time, I've been learning more about the sea, because I now I'have more opportunities to be there.
So, I watch many documentaries about the ocean, and. I even had the opportunity to see a whale jumping out of the sea.
Also, I'm trying to practice snorkel,ing because I don't havewear glasses anymore (I'm very happy, because I had surgery to correct my myopia).
Before, I couldn't practice it, because without my glasses everything was blurry,snorkeling, because everything was blurry without my glasses. It was like looking through a dirty window.
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Great job, I fixed a few things to sound more natural but your original writing is good!
When I walk, I'm like a child, because I'm veryso interested in the details of the plants, flowers, lakes, and more.
just sounds more native the sentence is perfect all my corrections will just make it sound more native.
I'll never forget ithat memory.
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all to sound more native your writing was amazing
yesterday
Hello! Thank you so much for your time. I appreciate your recommendations.
yesterday
of course youre doing sooo well!!!!
Over time, I've been learning more about the sea, because now I' have more opportunities to be there.
"I've" is only used for "I have" when you're talking about an action you've taken in the past. In writing it's usually not used for the "I have" that means possessing something.
https://ell.stackexchange.com/a/75528
Also, I'm trying to practice snorkeling, because I don't have glasses anymore (I'm very happy, I had surgery to correct my myopia).
"snorkel" - the piece of equipment
"snorkeling" - the action of swimming using the equipment
Before, I couldn't practice it before, because without my glasses everything was blurry, like looking through a dirty window.
Moved "before" around to reduce the amount of commas in the sentence - too many commas doesn't read well.
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This is very good - the corrections I wrote are not ones I'd normally point out on this site, except the level of English is already very good.
yesterday
Hello! Oh, thank you! I've been studying a lot, even tough I hated English in school, hahahaha.
I'll keep your recommendations in mind, I appreciate them very much.
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