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July 28, 2025

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I’m so proud of myself

I’ve been making small steps to achieve my goal.

Which is defining the next action step whenever I find myself procrastination.

And I take some simple experiments according to Ali’s book.

I’m grateful that even when I’m feeling bad bout life, I’m still keep going.

I know that I’ll never give up. I’m David Goggins, no one could stop me, don’t f**k with me.

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I’m sSo pProud of mMyself

title case

I’ve been mtaking small steps to achieve my goal, which is defining the next action step whenever I find myself procrastinating.

"taking" sounds a bit more natural

I combined this with the next sentence, because that is how sentences starting with "which is..." usually are connected to independent clauses

Which is defining the next action step whenever I find myself procrastination.

And I takedo some simple experiments according to Ali’s book.

we often say that we "do" or "perform" or "run" experiments

I’m grateful that even when I’m feeling bad bout life, I’m still keep going.

I'm means "I am" so you could say "I am still not giving up" or something like that, but here "I still" sounds clear and smooth

I know that I’ll never give up.

I’m David Goggins, no one could stop me, don’t f**k with me.

this is understandable, but maybe consider the difference between

I'm David Goggins...(sounds even more intense perhaps)

and

I'm like David Goggins (sounds lighter and more casual)

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Nice job making this paragraph easily understandable. Another idea for future writing could be to tell about other people who inspire you. Cheers.

I’ve been mtaking small steps to achieve my goal.

Which is defining the next action step whenever I find myself procrastinationg.

And I takedo some simple experiments according to Ali’s book.

I’m grateful that even when I’m feeling bad about life, I’m still keep going.

I’m so proud of myself

I’ve been mtaking small steps to achieve my goal.,

(1) The more appropriate word to use with "step" would be "take".
(2) I'd suggest merging this sentence with the one below. I have changed the period into a comma to allow for this.

Wwhich is definciding on the next course of action step whenever I find myself procrastinationg.

And II also take some simple experimentmeasures according to Ali’s book.

This flows more nicely from the previous sentence.

I’m grateful that even when I’m feeling bad about life, I’mll still keep going.

"Bout" is actually a real word in and of itself. If you want to use the slang contraction of "about", I'd suggest using an apostrophe to indicate this: "even when I'm feeling bad 'bout life". In very very casual situations like texting, however, you can omit the apostrophe.

I know that I’ll never give up.

I’m David Goggins, no one couldan stop me, don’t f**k with me.

I’m so proud of myself


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I’m sSo pProud of mMyself

title case

I’ve been making small steps to achieve my goal.


I’ve been mtaking small steps to achieve my goal.,

(1) The more appropriate word to use with "step" would be "take". (2) I'd suggest merging this sentence with the one below. I have changed the period into a comma to allow for this.

I’ve been mtaking small steps to achieve my goal.

I’ve been mtaking small steps to achieve my goal, which is defining the next action step whenever I find myself procrastinating.

"taking" sounds a bit more natural I combined this with the next sentence, because that is how sentences starting with "which is..." usually are connected to independent clauses

Which is defining the next action step whenever I find myself procrastination.


Wwhich is definciding on the next course of action step whenever I find myself procrastinationg.

Which is defining the next action step whenever I find myself procrastinationg.

Which is defining the next action step whenever I find myself procrastination.

And I take some simple experiments according to Ali’s book.


And II also take some simple experimentmeasures according to Ali’s book.

This flows more nicely from the previous sentence.

And I takedo some simple experiments according to Ali’s book.

And I takedo some simple experiments according to Ali’s book.

we often say that we "do" or "perform" or "run" experiments

I’m grateful that even when I’m feeling bad bout life, I’m still keep going.


I’m grateful that even when I’m feeling bad about life, I’mll still keep going.

"Bout" is actually a real word in and of itself. If you want to use the slang contraction of "about", I'd suggest using an apostrophe to indicate this: "even when I'm feeling bad 'bout life". In very very casual situations like texting, however, you can omit the apostrophe.

I’m grateful that even when I’m feeling bad about life, I’m still keep going.

I’m grateful that even when I’m feeling bad bout life, I’m still keep going.

I'm means "I am" so you could say "I am still not giving up" or something like that, but here "I still" sounds clear and smooth

I know that I’ll never give up.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I’m David Goggins, no one could stop me, don’t f**k with me.


I’m David Goggins, no one couldan stop me, don’t f**k with me.

I’m David Goggins, no one could stop me, don’t f**k with me.

this is understandable, but maybe consider the difference between I'm David Goggins...(sounds even more intense perhaps) and I'm like David Goggins (sounds lighter and more casual)

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