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Tri

Oct. 17, 2024

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Im On Diet

I want to lose weight, for once I was at the ideal body figurations. In all my lives, I dream off being that skinny white boy, asain good looking dude, type of a guy, that you look at, you would fall in love. Their body is tanted, skinny fat, slim I guess. Being one is not easy. Im now overweight. I can do anything now for that. Look at my boobs, the pac is gone. It look like women's boobs, it drowned down the head. I have to lose the fat, I'm embarrassed. I'll do anything to lose weight. I'm on my journey now. Cross my fingers.

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I am Oon Da diet

I want to lose weight, for once, I was athad the ideal body figurationcontours.

In aAll my livesfe, I dreamt off being that skinny white boy, asain Asian good looking dude, the type of a guy, that you look at, and you would fall in love with.

Their body is tantedut, skinny fat,and slim I guess.

Being onelike that is not easy.

I am now overweight.

I canwould do anything now for that slim body.

Look at my boobs, the pactautness is gone.

It look like women's boobs, it drowned down the head.they are drooping.

I have to lose theis fat, and I'm embarrassed.

I'll do anything to lose weight.

I'm on my journey now.

Cross my fingers.

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Tri

Oct. 18, 2024

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thanks you so much for correcting me

Im On A Diet

I want to lose weight, for. At once I was at the ideal body figurationspoint; I had an Ideal body.

instead of saying for once. its better to say "at one point."
this is a contraction of "at one point in time"

In aAll my lives, Ife I've dreamed off being thata skinny white boy, asain, good looking dude,Asian dude. The type of a guy, that you look at, you and would fall in love with.

Their body isa tantned, skinny fat,; slim I guess.

not sure what you meant by tanted

I canwould do anything now for that.

Look at my boobs, the paceck is gone.

i assume you meant peck as in your chest muscle

It look like women's boobs, it drowned down the head.

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good luck on your weight loss journey. you've got this!! The most important thing to focus on is tracking your calories to lose weight. you have to make sure that you eat less than your maintenance levels. Don't force yourself to follow a strict diet. you can eat pizza and lose weight as long as you track your calories and make sure you eat less than your maintenance calorie. Download an app called "my fitness pal" it will help you figure out where your maintenance calories are at and it will help you keep track of your calories so you can loose weight.

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Tri

Oct. 18, 2024

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thanks you so much, I love you W corrector

Im On Diet


Im On A Diet

I am Oon Da diet

I want to lose weight, for once I was at the ideal body figurations.


I want to lose weight, for. At once I was at the ideal body figurationspoint; I had an Ideal body.

instead of saying for once. its better to say "at one point." this is a contraction of "at one point in time"

I want to lose weight, for once, I was athad the ideal body figurationcontours.

In all my lives, I dream off being that skinny white boy, asain good looking dude, type of a guy, that you look at, you would fall in love.


In aAll my lives, Ife I've dreamed off being thata skinny white boy, asain, good looking dude,Asian dude. The type of a guy, that you look at, you and would fall in love with.

In aAll my livesfe, I dreamt off being that skinny white boy, asain Asian good looking dude, the type of a guy, that you look at, and you would fall in love with.

Their body is tanted, skinny fat, slim I guess.


Their body isa tantned, skinny fat,; slim I guess.

not sure what you meant by tanted

Their body is tantedut, skinny fat,and slim I guess.

Being one is not easy.


Being onelike that is not easy.

Im now overweight.


I am now overweight.

I can do anything now for that.


I canwould do anything now for that.

I canwould do anything now for that slim body.

Look at my boobs, the pac is gone.


Look at my boobs, the paceck is gone.

i assume you meant peck as in your chest muscle

Look at my boobs, the pactautness is gone.

I'm on my journey now.


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Cross my fingers.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It look like women's boobs, it drowned down the head.


It look like women's boobs, it drowned down the head.

It look like women's boobs, it drowned down the head.they are drooping.

I have to lose the fat, I'm embarrassed.


I have to lose theis fat, and I'm embarrassed.

I'll do anything to lose weight.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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