I‘m new to this website,. I like it a lot.

I wrote a little entry ton my day,. I finished it and sent it, but then "Oh no!"

I dindn't have enough points to upload it,. It said I needed to correct other user's entries so I could gain more points , h. Haha, so that's what I did,. I thought my entry was going to saved, but painfulunfortunately it disappeared h. Haha, or perhaps as, since I'm new here , I don't know where to find it an. Anyways, I doidn't want to write it again, so I decided just to tell the story of what happened instead.

I'm new to this website, I like it

I wrote a little entry ton my day, I finished it and sent it, but then O, oh no!

I dindn't have enough points to upload it,. It said I needed to correct other's entries so I could gain more points , haha, so that's what I did,. I thought my entry was going to be saved but painfulunfortunately it disappeared haha,o. Or perhaps, as I'm new here , I don't know where to find it an. Anyways I don't want to write it again so I decided to just to tellalk about what happened instead.

I'm new to this website, but I like it.

There's some punctuation needed here. We use apostrophes (') in words that are contractions, meaning they are two words put together, as is the case with "I'm", which represents "I am". You should also add a period (.) at the end of each sentence. Commas (,) can't be used to separate two independent clauses (two parts of a sentence that could work as complete sentences on their own), so we need to add a conjunction word (like "but", "and", "so", etc) or some other type of connecting word.

I wrote a little entry onabout my day, I finished it and sent it, but then I thought, "Oh no!"

With the "I" before "finished" included, this is another example of separating two independent clauses with a comma (which is not grammatically correct in English). If you remove the "I", each of the verbs can be a part of a list, all connected to the first subject of "I". You should also put exclamations like "Oh no!" in quotations ("").

I dindn't have enough points to upload it,. It said I needed to correct other's' entries so I could gain more points , haha, t. That's what I did, and I thought my entry was going to be saved, but painfully it disappeared haha,or. Or, perhaps as I'm new here , I don't know where to find it anyways. I don't want to write it again, so I decided just to tell what happened instead.

Remember to check over punctuation and spelling, as well as separate complete thoughts with a period. I changed the position of the comma in "others" since you are indicating a plural amount of people as a possessive word, which means the comma moves to the end of the word (for example: "I have three dogs. My dogs' toys are scattered all over the living room." This indicates multiple dogs are possessing multiple toys.)