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sinbor

March 11, 2022

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I'm new here!

Hello everyone, nice to meet you! I'm David, a brazilian student in love with language learning. I'm addicted to learn a new language, it's a amazing feeling when I now something new in this new language. Yesterday I was surfing on Reddit I accidently found this website, and thanks God for this! I have been studying English (formally I mean) for about two years, all my knowledge was accquire by immersion on the language. I'm kind of good at reading and speaking, but my writing and listening is awful, and be able to write anything and be corrected by natives for free is just wonderful for me. I really hope that I can make some progress on my writing skills (including grammar, my nightmare haha). Thank you for reading this!

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I'm new here!

Hello everyone, nice to meet you!

I'm David, a brazilian student in love with language learning.

I'm addicted to learn aing new language, it's as! It's (just) an amazing feeling when I nowget to know/learn something new in this newfrom these languages.

YesterdayI found this yesterday by chance when I was surfing on Reddit I accidently found this website, and thanks God for this!

Or : I came upon this by accident when I was surfing Reddit yesterday.

Or: Yesterday while I was surfing on Reddit, I accidently found this website.

I have been studying English (formally I mean) for about two years, all my knowledge was accquire byd through immersion on the language.

I'm kind of good at reading and speaking, but my writing and listening is awful, and being able to write anything and be corrected by natives for free is just wonderful for me.

I really hope that I can make some progress on my writing skills (including grammar, my nightmare haha).

Thank you for reading this!

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Good luck! Rooting for you!

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sinbor

March 24, 2022

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Thank you, I really appreciate your corrections!

I'm new here!

Hello everyone, nice to meet you!

I'm David, a brazilian student in love with language learning.

I'm addicted to learning a new language, it's an amazing feeling when I nowlearn something new in this new language.

I would rewrite this sentence to say: "I'm addicted to learning new languages; it's an amazing feeling to learn something new in this language."

Yesterday I was surfing on Reddit and I accidentally found this website, and thanks God for thisat!

Changing "this" to "that" is a stylistic choice, I think it sounds more natural.

I have been studying English (formally I mean) for about two years, and all my knowledge was accquired by immersion on the language.

I'm kind of good at reading and speaking, but my writing and listening is awful, and to be able to write anything and be corrected by natives for free is just wonderful for me.

I really hope that I can make some progress on my writing skills (including grammar, my nightmare haha).

Thank you for reading this!

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This was good! Some spelling errors and grammatical mistakes but I think I understood what you were trying to say for the most part. Hope you keep participating here :)

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sinbor

March 24, 2022

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Thank you so much! I'll be writing more often here, it's because recently I have been really busy.

I'm new here!


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Hello everyone, nice to meet you!


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I'm David, a brazilian student in love with language learning.


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I'm addicted to learn a new language, it's a amazing feeling when I now something new in this new language.


I'm addicted to learning a new language, it's an amazing feeling when I nowlearn something new in this new language.

I would rewrite this sentence to say: "I'm addicted to learning new languages; it's an amazing feeling to learn something new in this language."

I'm addicted to learn aing new language, it's as! It's (just) an amazing feeling when I nowget to know/learn something new in this newfrom these languages.

Yesterday I was surfing on Reddit I accidently found this website, and thanks God for this!


Yesterday I was surfing on Reddit and I accidentally found this website, and thanks God for thisat!

Changing "this" to "that" is a stylistic choice, I think it sounds more natural.

YesterdayI found this yesterday by chance when I was surfing on Reddit I accidently found this website, and thanks God for this!

Or : I came upon this by accident when I was surfing Reddit yesterday. Or: Yesterday while I was surfing on Reddit, I accidently found this website.

I have been studying English (formally I mean) for about two years, all my knowledge was accquire by immersion on the language.


I have been studying English (formally I mean) for about two years, and all my knowledge was accquired by immersion on the language.

I have been studying English (formally I mean) for about two years, all my knowledge was accquire byd through immersion on the language.

I'm kind of good at reading and speaking, but my writing and listening is awful, and be able to write anything and be corrected by natives for free is just wonderful for me.


I'm kind of good at reading and speaking, but my writing and listening is awful, and to be able to write anything and be corrected by natives for free is just wonderful for me.

I'm kind of good at reading and speaking, but my writing and listening is awful, and being able to write anything and be corrected by natives for free is just wonderful for me.

I really hope that I can make some progress on my writing skills (including grammar, my nightmare haha).


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Thank you for reading this!


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