Jan. 30, 2024
I found out I'm intolerant with gluten these past six months.
I'm not sure what I am supposed to say it in Japanese, so basically, after I eat something including gluten, my stomach gets uncomfortable.
For example, after I eat bread, past or udon noodles made out of wheat flour my stomach gets gassy and rumbling.
I came across a video about gluten free food on YouTube, and I thought I would try it.
I found a bakery that they sell bread made out of rice flour, and I tried some.
Other than that, I tried to cook past made out of soybean flour.
My stomach has been quite comfortable, after I started having gluten free food.
I had had the problem for a long time, but now I'm glad I found out the reason.
I would be happy if you fixed whole the sentence to sound more natural.
ここ半年くらい前に、私は、グルテンに弱いことがわかりました。
Intolerantという言葉を日本語でどう言ったらいいかよくわかりませんが、つまり、グルテンを含んだ食べ物を食べると、お腹の調子が悪くなります。
例えば、パン、パスタ、うどんなどを食べると、その後でお腹にガスがたまり、ちょっと嫌な感じになります。
たまたま、YouTubeで、グルテンフリーについての動画を見て、それを試してみようと思いました。
近くに米粉で作ったパンを売っているお店を見つけたので、そこのパンを食べてみました。
その他に、大豆粉で作られたパスタを使って料理してみました。
グルテンフリーのものを食べるようになったら、お腹の調子が良くなりました。
今まで、長い間困っていましたが、解決できてよかったです。
文章全部を、自然に聞こえるように直してもらえたら嬉しいです。
I found out I'mthat I've been intolerant withto gluten for these past six months.
I'm not sure what I am supposedeven sure how to say it in Japanese, sobut basically, after I eat something including gluten, my stomach gets uncomfortable.
For example, after I eat bread, pasta or udon noodles made out of wheat flour my stomach gets gassy and rumbling.
I found a bakery that they sells bread made out of rice flour, and I tried some.
Other than that, I tried to cook pasta made out of soybean flour.
My stomach has been quite comfortable, afterfeeling quite good since I started haveating gluten free food.
(or "since I stopped eating gluten".)
I had hadbeen having the problem for a long time, butand now I'm glad I found out the reasonto know why.
I'm intolerant withto gluten
I found out I'm intolerant withto gluten these past six months.
I'm not sure whathow I am supposed to say it in Japanese, sobut basically, after I eat something including gluten, my stomach getfeels uncomfortable.
For example, after I eat bread, pasta or udon noodles made out of wheat flour, my stomach gets gassy and rumblinges.
I found a bakery that they sells bread made out of rice flour, and I tried some.
Other than that, I tried to cook pasta made out of soybean flour.
My stomach has been quite comfortable,feeling better after I started haveating gluten free food.
I had had the problem for a long time, but now I'm glad I found out the reason.
I would be happy if you fixedcould fix the whole the sentence to sound more natural.
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Nice job! I’m glad your stomach is feeling better now :)
I'm intolerant with gluten have a gluten intolerance.
I found out I'm had an intolerant withce to gluten within these plast six months.
I'm not sure whathow I am supposed to say ithis in Japanese, sobut basically, after I eat something including gluten, my stomach getfeels uncomfortable.
For example, after I eat bread, pasta or udon noodles made out of wheat flour, my stomach gets gassy and rumblingy.
I came across a video about gluten -free food on YouTube, and I thought I would try it.
I found a bakery that they sells bread made out of rice flour, and I tried some.
Other than that, I tried to cook pasta made out of soybean flour.
My stomach has been quite comfortable, after since I started haveating gluten -free food.
I hadve had theis problem for a long time, but now I'm glad I found outdiscovered the reason why.
I would be happy if you fixed whole the sentence to sound more natural.
I'm gluten intolerant with gluten
No logic to the change, "gluten intolerant" is just the term.
I found out I'm intolerant with gluten these pasgluten intolerant about six months ago.
My first suggestion was:
> I found out I'm gluten intolerant at some point in the past six months.
After reading ここ半年くらい前に, I thought that maybe "about six months ago" was more accurate?
I'm not sure what I am supposedhow to say it in Japanese, sobut basically, after I eat someanything includingwith gluten in it, my stomach gets uncomfortableirritated.
"What I am supposed to say in Japanese"
"How I am supposed to say it in Japanese"
Either is fine, but "how to say" is more natural.
something -> anything: Normally I would let this slide, but I took a second look after seeing "I would be happy if you fixed whole the sentence to sound more natural." written at the bottom.
It's subtle because "Something" and "anything" both work here, but "anything" feels stronger. "Something" brings to mind more individual instances of a thing, like "I'm going to have something with eggs in it for lunch," whereas "anything" marks the whole category like in "I can't eat anything with eggs in it due to my allergies."
I think I remember this video on "some" vs "any" being pretty good: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IIip5DgiVyc
For example, after I eat bread, pasta, or udon noodles made out of wheat flour my stomach gets all gassy and rumblingupset.
The "all" here isn't needed, but I think English speakers tend to add it. Maybe it has a kind of しまう nuance because now you're in this situation and you're just sort of stuck with it.
I came across a video about gluten free food on YouTube, and I thought I woulddecided to try it out.
Slightly more decisive wording, especially considering you did make significant changes in your life.
I found a bakery that they sells bread made out of rice flour, and I tried some.
Other than thatThen, I tried to cook some pasta made out of soybean flour.
"Other than / aside from that" is fine, but "I tried to cook pasta" refers to a specific instance so "then", specifying the sequence of events, felt correct. If you use "other than that", I would've expected it to be phrased differently.
> Other than that, I've also tried cooking pasta made from soybean flour.
The "have" here makes it a little more abstract and doesn't imply a specific instance. You might've done it one or several times. It's a bit hard to explain though.
My stomach has been quite comfortable, after I started havingfelt a lot better since switching to gluten free food.
"comfortable" can refer to a chair, but not really a body part.
I had had the problem for abeen dealing with it for a really long time, but now I'm glad I found out the reasoninally know why.
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> My stomach has been quite comfortable, after I started having gluten free food.
This line was a bit abrupt. Since I don't know much about gluten free food, I wanted to hear how you felt after eating the rice flour bread vs the soy bean flour thread.
> I would be happy if you fixed whole the sentence to sound more natural.
You know, one of my anxieties about offering suggestions is that I worry that overcorrecting could lead to confidence issues where people don't think they're as good as they are. I know when it comes to my Japanese ability, sometimes I subconsciously rate myself on the ratio of lines people recommend I change vs how many are left as is, and I know there are some great English practicers on this site who maybe think that me making a lot of suggestions means they're not so great.
Helping others improve means pointing out their faults, but by doing so they might lose confidence. It's confounding.
Anyway, I normally try to give balanced suggestions, but here I tried to make these suggestions based on what felt natural to me. Overall it seemed mostly fine to me in the first place as a lot of those sentences, I could hear an English speaker saying. But please let me know it's not too much.
I'm intolerant withto gluten
I found out I'm intolerant withto gluten these past six months.
I'm not sure what I am supposedhow to say intolerant in Japanese, so basically, after I eat something that includinges gluten, my stomach gets uncomfortable.
For example, after I eat bread, pasta or udon noodles made out of wheat flour my stomach gets gassy and rumbling.
I came across a video about gluten free food on YouTube, and I thought I would try it.
I found a bakery thatwhere they sell bread made out of rice flour, and I tried some.
Other than that, I tried to cook pasta made out of soybean flour.
My stomach has been quite comfortable, after I started having gluten free food.
I had had the problem for a long time, but now I'm glad I found out the reason.
I would be happy if you fixed whole the sentence to sound more natural.
Feedback
Gluten intolerance is becoming more and more common. Thankfully there's lots of wheat alternatives nowadays. Red lentil pasta is one gluent free pasta I really like, but not everyone might like it haha.
I'm gluten intolerant with gluten.
I think the phrase “gluten intolerant” is more natural.
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I'm not sure what I am supposedhow to say it in Japanese, so but basically, after I eat something includingthat has gluten, my stomach gets uncomfortable.
For example, after I eat bread, pasta or udon noodles made out of wheat flour, my stomach gets gassy and rumblingy.
I found a bakery that they sells bread made out of rice flour, and I tried some.
Other than that, I tried to cookI also tried pasta made out of soybean flour.
My stomach has been quite comfortable, after I started having gluten free food.
I had had the problem for a long time, but now I'm glad I found out the reason why my stomach was feeling uncomfortable.
I would be happy if you fixed whole the sentence to sound more natural.
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Other than that, I tried to cook past made out of soybean flour.
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