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RioDeMilo

Feb. 13, 2025

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I'm happy but want to enjoy life as much as possible.

I'm healthy and have a beautiful family.
I'm willing to improve my career without giving up on my quality time with the ones that I love.
But there's always the feeling that I'm not doing the best that I could.
The presion from what society dictates is that I should spend and spend, in things that most of the time we don't truly need.Thetefore I always take more time before buying something.
But deep inside me I have projects that I would love to do like building a cabin in the woods and travel more without hassle ,instead of living paycheck to paycheck.
Although I'm young, I think that the people from poorer countries can have an advantage because, here in Latam there is always something to be done and this proves for an opportunity for those who strive for the better.

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The presionsure from what society dictates is that I should spend and spend, ion things that most of the time we don't truly need. Thetrefore I always take more time before buying something.

But deep inside me I have projects that I would love to do like building a cabin in the woods and traveling more without hassle , instead of living paycheck to paycheck.

Although I'm young, I think that the people from poorer countries can have an advantage because, here in Latam there is always something to be done and this provides for an opportunity for those who strive for the betterto improve.

The presionsure from what society dictates is that I should spend and spend, ibut usually on things that most of the time weI don't truly need. Thetrefore, I always take more timetime to think before buying something.

But deep inside me I have projectthings that I would love to do, like building a cabin in the woods andor travel more without hassle , instead of living paycheck to paycheck.

Although I'm young, I think that the people from poorer countries can have an advantage because, here in Latam, there is always something to be done a. And this proves foris an opportunity for those who strive for the betterto better themselves.

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Great work!

But there'sI always the feeling thatfeel like I'm not doing the best that I couldI can.

his would be a more natural phrasing

The presion from whatsure dictated by society dictatpushes ius that I shouldo spend and spend, ion things that most of the time we don't truly need. Thetrefore, I always take more time before buying something.

But deep inside medown, I have projects that I would love to do like building a cabin in the woods and traveling more without hassle ,instead of living paycheck to paycheck.

"without hassle" -- not exactly sure what you mean, but we usually say "without all the hassle" or "the hassle." Usually we include an article, like 'It's such a hassle"

we would say "deep down" instead of "deep inside me"

"traveling" is a grammatical correction to mimic "building"

Although I'm young, I think that the people from poorer countries can have an advantage because, here in Latam there is always something to be done and this provides for an opportunity for those who strive for the better.

or "can provide opportunities"

strive for the better- it's not very clear what you mean. Self-improvement or life improvement? If so, "for those who strive/are striving to better themselves/their situation/their lives"

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You have an outstanding level of English! Bravo!

I'm happy but want to enjoy life as much as possible.

I'm healthy and have a beautiful family.

I'm willing to improve my career without giving up on my quality time with the ones that I love.

But there's always the feeling that I'm not doing the best that I could.

The presionsure from what society dictates is that I should spend and spend, imore and more money on things that most of the time we don't truly need. Thetrefore, I always take morey time before buying something.

Can also say: "...is that I should keep spending money on things..."

But deep (down) inside me, I have projects that I would love to do like building a cabin in the woods and travel more without hassle , instead of living paycheck to paycheck.

"...build...and travel..." or "...building...and traveling..." sound better

Although I'm young, I think that the people from poorer countries can have an advantage, because, here in LatamATAM, there is always something to be done and this provides for an opportunity for those who strive for the bestter.

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Very well written! Only minor mistakes.

I'm happy but want to enjoy life as much as possible.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm healthy and have a beautiful family.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm willing to improve my career without giving up on my quality time with the ones that I love.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But there's always the feeling that I'm not doing the best that I could.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But there'sI always the feeling thatfeel like I'm not doing the best that I couldI can.

his would be a more natural phrasing

The presion from what society dictates is that I should spend and spend, in things that most of the time we don't truly need.Thetefore I always take more time before buying something.


The presionsure from what society dictates is that I should spend and spend, imore and more money on things that most of the time we don't truly need. Thetrefore, I always take morey time before buying something.

Can also say: "...is that I should keep spending money on things..."

The presion from whatsure dictated by society dictatpushes ius that I shouldo spend and spend, ion things that most of the time we don't truly need. Thetrefore, I always take more time before buying something.

The presionsure from what society dictates is that I should spend and spend, ibut usually on things that most of the time weI don't truly need. Thetrefore, I always take more timetime to think before buying something.

The presionsure from what society dictates is that I should spend and spend, ion things that most of the time we don't truly need. Thetrefore I always take more time before buying something.

But deep inside me I have projects that I would love to do like building a cabin in the woods and travel more without hassle ,instead of living paycheck to paycheck.


But deep (down) inside me, I have projects that I would love to do like building a cabin in the woods and travel more without hassle , instead of living paycheck to paycheck.

"...build...and travel..." or "...building...and traveling..." sound better

But deep inside medown, I have projects that I would love to do like building a cabin in the woods and traveling more without hassle ,instead of living paycheck to paycheck.

"without hassle" -- not exactly sure what you mean, but we usually say "without all the hassle" or "the hassle." Usually we include an article, like 'It's such a hassle" we would say "deep down" instead of "deep inside me" "traveling" is a grammatical correction to mimic "building"

But deep inside me I have projectthings that I would love to do, like building a cabin in the woods andor travel more without hassle , instead of living paycheck to paycheck.

But deep inside me I have projects that I would love to do like building a cabin in the woods and traveling more without hassle , instead of living paycheck to paycheck.

Although I'm young, I think that the people from poorer countries can have an advantage because, here in Latam there is always something to be done and this proves for an opportunity for those who strive for the better.


Although I'm young, I think that the people from poorer countries can have an advantage, because, here in LatamATAM, there is always something to be done and this provides for an opportunity for those who strive for the bestter.

Although I'm young, I think that the people from poorer countries can have an advantage because, here in Latam there is always something to be done and this provides for an opportunity for those who strive for the better.

or "can provide opportunities" strive for the better- it's not very clear what you mean. Self-improvement or life improvement? If so, "for those who strive/are striving to better themselves/their situation/their lives"

Although I'm young, I think that the people from poorer countries can have an advantage because, here in Latam, there is always something to be done a. And this proves foris an opportunity for those who strive for the betterto better themselves.

Although I'm young, I think that the people from poorer countries can have an advantage because, here in Latam there is always something to be done and this provides for an opportunity for those who strive for the betterto improve.

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