Feb. 13, 2025
I'm healthy and have a beautiful family.
I'm willing to improve my career without giving up on my quality time with the ones that I love.
But there's always the feeling that I'm not doing the best that I could.
The presion from what society dictates is that I should spend and spend, in things that most of the time we don't truly need.Thetefore I always take more time before buying something.
But deep inside me I have projects that I would love to do like building a cabin in the woods and travel more without hassle ,instead of living paycheck to paycheck.
Although I'm young, I think that the people from poorer countries can have an advantage because, here in Latam there is always something to be done and this proves for an opportunity for those who strive for the better.
The presionsure from what society dictates is that I should spend and spend, ion things that most of the time we don't truly need. Thetrefore I always take more time before buying something.
The pressure from society dictates that I should spend and spend, on things that most of the time we don't truly need. Therefore I always take more time before buying something.
But deep inside me I have projects that I would love to do like building a cabin in the woods and traveling more without hassle , instead of living paycheck to paycheck.
But deep inside me I have projects that I would love to do like building a cabin in the woods and traveling more without hassle, instead of living paycheck to paycheck.
Although I'm young, I think that the people from poorer countries can have an advantage because, here in Latam there is always something to be done and this provides for an opportunity for those who strive for the betterto improve.
Although I'm young, I think that people from poorer countries can have an advantage because here in Latam there is always something to be done and this provides an opportunity for those who strive to improve.
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The pressure from society dictates that I should spend and spend, but usually on things that most of the time I don't truly need. Therefore, I always take time to think before buying something.
But deep inside me I have projectthings that I would love to do, like building a cabin in the woods andor travel more without hassle , instead of living paycheck to paycheck.
But deep inside me I have things that I would love to do, like build a cabin in the woods or travel more, instead of living paycheck to paycheck.
Although I'm young, I think that the people from poorer countries can have an advantage because, here in Latam, there is always something to be done a. And this proves foris an opportunity for those who strive for the betterto better themselves.
Although I'm young, I think that people from poorer countries have an advantage because, here in Latam, there is always something to be done. And this is an opportunity for those who strive to better themselves.
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Great work!
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But I always feel like I'm not doing the best I can.
his would be a more natural phrasing
The presion from whatsure dictated by society dictatpushes ius that I shouldo spend and spend, ion things that most of the time we don't truly need. Thetrefore, I always take more time before buying something.
The pressure dictated by society pushes us to spend and spend, on things that most of the time we don't truly need. Therefore, I always take more time before buying something.
But deep inside medown, I have projects that I would love to do like building a cabin in the woods and traveling more without hassle ,instead of living paycheck to paycheck.
But deep down, I have projects that I would love to do like building a cabin in the woods and traveling more without hassle ,instead of living paycheck to paycheck.
"without hassle" -- not exactly sure what you mean, but we usually say "without all the hassle" or "the hassle." Usually we include an article, like 'It's such a hassle"
we would say "deep down" instead of "deep inside me"
"traveling" is a grammatical correction to mimic "building"
Although I'm young, I think that the people from poorer countries can have an advantage because, here in Latam there is always something to be done and this provides for an opportunity for those who strive for the better.
Although I'm young, I think that the people from poorer countries can have an advantage because, here in Latam there is always something to be done and this provides an opportunity for those who strive for the better.
or "can provide opportunities"
strive for the better- it's not very clear what you mean. Self-improvement or life improvement? If so, "for those who strive/are striving to better themselves/their situation/their lives"
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You have an outstanding level of English! Bravo!
I'm happy but want to enjoy life as much as possible.
I'm healthy and have a beautiful family.
I'm willing to improve my career without giving up on my quality time with the ones that I love.
But there's always the feeling that I'm not doing the best that I could.
The presionsure from what society dictates is that I should spend and spend, imore and more money on things that most of the time we don't truly need. Thetrefore, I always take morey time before buying something.
The pressure from what society dictates is that I should spend more and more money on things that most of the time we don't truly need. Therefore, I always take my time before buying something.
Can also say: "...is that I should keep spending money on things..."
But deep (down) inside me, I have projects that I would love to do like building a cabin in the woods and travel more without hassle , instead of living paycheck to paycheck.
But deep (down) inside, I have projects that I would love to do like build a cabin in the woods and travel more without hassle, instead of living paycheck to paycheck.
"...build...and travel..." or "...building...and traveling..." sound better
Although I'm young, I think that the people from poorer countries can have an advantage, because, here in LatamATAM, there is always something to be done and this provides for an opportunity for those who strive for the bestter.
Although I'm young, I think that people from poorer countries can have an advantage, because, here in LATAM, there is always something to be done and this provides an opportunity for those who strive for the best.
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Very well written! Only minor mistakes.
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The presion from what society dictates is that I should spend and spend, in things that most of the time we don't truly need.Thetefore I always take more time before buying something.
The pres Can also say: "...is that I should keep spending money on things..."
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But deep inside me I have projects that I would love to do like building a cabin in the woods and travel more without hassle ,instead of living paycheck to paycheck.
But deep (down) inside "...build...and travel..." or "...building...and traveling..." sound better
But deep "without hassle" -- not exactly sure what you mean, but we usually say "without all the hassle" or "the hassle." Usually we include an article, like 'It's such a hassle" we would say "deep down" instead of "deep inside me" "traveling" is a grammatical correction to mimic "building"
But deep inside me I have
But deep inside me I have projects that I would love to do like building a cabin in the woods and traveling more without hassle |
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Although I'm young, I think that the people from poorer countries can have an advantage because, here in Latam there is always something to be done and this proves for an opportunity for those who strive for the better.
Although I'm young, I think that
Although I'm young, I think that the people from poorer countries can have an advantage because, here in Latam there is always something to be done and this provides or "can provide opportunities" strive for the better- it's not very clear what you mean. Self-improvement or life improvement? If so, "for those who strive/are striving to better themselves/their situation/their lives"
Although I'm young, I think that
Although I'm young, I think that |
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