Dec. 6, 2019
i've already orderd pork Okonomiyaki few minutes ago.
actually, my wife won pachinko(it is japanese gamble)
so, it's my wife's treat today.yeah!
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aActually, my wife won pachinko (it is ja Japanese gambling game)
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sSo, it's my wife's treat today.
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Very nicely written! In English, we always capitalize the start of sentences. Words like okonomiyaki don't really need to be capitalized, but I suppose you can if you would like to.
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Congrats. I would like to try okonomiyaki one day.
iI'm gonna eat Okonomiyaki
Personal pronouns "I" "I am" & "I'm are always capitalized. ✌️🐵
i've already ordered pork Okonomiyaki few minutes ago.
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sSo, it's my wife's treat today.
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Let's always remember to capitalize every new sentence.
iI'm gonna eat Okonomiyaki
i've alreadyI ordered pork Okonomiyaki a few minutes ago.
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Either "I've already ordered" or "I ordered [...] a few minutes ago", but you can't say "I've ordered a few minutes ago", as a definite moment in the past (like "a few minutes ago") requires the simple past
aActually, my wife won at pachinko (it is ja Japanese gambling game)
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sSo, it's my wife's treat today.
yYeah!
Don't forget capital letters after dots ;-)
iI'm gonna eat Ookonomiyaki.
The names of food don't need to be capitalized.
i've alreadyI ordered pork Ookonomiyaki a few minutes ago.
¶
aActually, my wife won at pachinko(it is j, a Japanese gamble)
ing game.¶
sSo, it's my wife's treat today.
yYeah!
iI'm gonna eat Okonomiyaki
iI've already ordered pork Okonomiyaki a few minutes ago.
¶
aActually, my wife won pachinko (it is japanese gamble)
ing game), ¶
so, it's my wife's treat today.
yYeah!
i'm gonna eat Okonomiyaki
The names of food don't need to be capitalized.
Personal pronouns "I" "I am" & "I'm are always capitalized. ✌️🐵
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i've already orders pork Okonomiyaki few minutes ago. |
actually, my wife won pachinko(it is japanese gamble)
Just an alternate translation
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so, it's my wife's treat today. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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yeah!
Don't forget capital letters after dots ;-)
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i've already orderd pork Okonomiyaki few minutes ago.
Either "I've already ordered" or "I ordered [...] a few minutes ago", but you can't say "I've ordered a few minutes ago", as a definite moment in the past (like "a few minutes ago") requires the simple past i've already ordered pork Okonomiyaki few minutes ago.
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