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tak

Dec. 6, 2019

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i'm gonna eat Okonomiyaki

i've already orderd pork Okonomiyaki few minutes ago.
actually, my wife won pachinko(it is japanese gamble)
so, it's my wife's treat today.yeah!

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iI'm gonna eat Ookonomiyaki

i've alreadyI ordered pork Ookonomiyaki a few minutes ago.

aActually, my wife won pachinko (it is ja Japanese gambling game)

sSo, it's my wife's treat today.

yYeah!

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Very nicely written! In English, we always capitalize the start of sentences. Words like okonomiyaki don't really need to be capitalized, but I suppose you can if you would like to.

aActually, my wife won pachinko (it is j's a type of Japanese gamble) ing).

Just an alternate translation

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Congrats. I would like to try okonomiyaki one day.

iI'm gonna eat Okonomiyaki

Personal pronouns "I" "I am" & "I'm are always capitalized. ✌️🐵

i've already ordered pork Okonomiyaki few minutes ago.

aActually, my wife won at pachinko (it is a japanese gamble) e of chance.)

sSo, it's my wife's treat today.

yYeah!

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Let's always remember to capitalize every new sentence.

iI'm gonna eat Okonomiyaki

i've alreadyI ordered pork Okonomiyaki a few minutes ago.

Either "I've already ordered" or "I ordered [...] a few minutes ago", but you can't say "I've ordered a few minutes ago", as a definite moment in the past (like "a few minutes ago") requires the simple past

aActually, my wife won at pachinko (it is ja Japanese gambling game)

sSo, it's my wife's treat today.

yYeah!

Don't forget capital letters after dots ;-)

iI'm gonna eat Ookonomiyaki.

The names of food don't need to be capitalized.

i've alreadyI ordered pork Ookonomiyaki a few minutes ago.

aActually, my wife won at pachinko(it is j, a Japanese gamble) ing game.

sSo, it's my wife's treat today.

yYeah!

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iI'm gonna eat Okonomiyaki

iI've already ordered pork Okonomiyaki a few minutes ago.

aActually, my wife won pachinko (it is japanese gamble) ing game),

so, it's my wife's treat today.

yYeah!

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tak

Dec. 6, 2019

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yYeah!

Thank you for your correct!
I always confuse which I have to use "few" or "a few" XD

i'm gonna eat Okonomiyaki


iI'm gonna eat Okonomiyaki

iI'm gonna eat Ookonomiyaki.

The names of food don't need to be capitalized.

iI'm gonna eat Okonomiyaki

iI'm gonna eat Okonomiyaki

Personal pronouns "I" "I am" & "I'm are always capitalized. ✌️🐵

iI'm gonna eat Ookonomiyaki

i've already orders pork Okonomiyaki few minutes ago.


actually, my wife won pachinko(it is japanese gamble)


aActually, my wife won pachinko (it is japanese gamble) ing game),

aActually, my wife won at pachinko(it is j, a Japanese gamble) ing game.

aActually, my wife won at pachinko (it is ja Japanese gambling game)

aActually, my wife won at pachinko (it is a japanese gamble) e of chance.)

aActually, my wife won pachinko (it is j's a type of Japanese gamble) ing).

Just an alternate translation

aActually, my wife won pachinko (it is ja Japanese gambling game)

so, it's my wife's treat today.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

sSo, it's my wife's treat today.

sSo, it's my wife's treat today.

sSo, it's my wife's treat today.

sSo, it's my wife's treat today.

yeah!


yYeah!

yYeah!

yYeah!

Don't forget capital letters after dots ;-)

yYeah!

yYeah!

i've already orderd pork Okonomiyaki few minutes ago.


iI've already ordered pork Okonomiyaki a few minutes ago.

i've alreadyI ordered pork Ookonomiyaki a few minutes ago.

i've alreadyI ordered pork Okonomiyaki a few minutes ago.

Either "I've already ordered" or "I ordered [...] a few minutes ago", but you can't say "I've ordered a few minutes ago", as a definite moment in the past (like "a few minutes ago") requires the simple past

i've already ordered pork Okonomiyaki few minutes ago.

i've alreadyI ordered pork Ookonomiyaki a few minutes ago.

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