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adichira

Nov. 1, 2025

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I'm Going to a Concert of my Favorite Singer

I could go to a concert of my favorite singer soon. Her music reminded me my childhood, adolescence, and also now, her songs accompanies in my adult life. She's from my origin country, so I feel a huge connection with her music, her career and her life.

I still have some cassettes that my father recorded specially for me with her songs. I remember, when I was a child, everyone was obsessed with her; we wanted to sing and dance like she. Always, I put the cassette in the tape player, and when it finished, I would rewind it so it would star again. I believe I know the lyrics to ninety-nine percent of her songs.

Last year, when she announced the concert date, I even had tachycardia. My heart was beating very fast as I bought the tickets so I could go. Obviously, my husband will accompany me. I think I must to stay good hydrated so I can sing all her songs; I'll probably cry with emotion when I see her and hear her live.


Voy a ir al concierto de mi cantante favorita.

Pronto podré ir a un concierto de mi cantante favorita. Su música me recuerda a mi infancia, adolescencia, y ahora también me acompaña en mi vida adulta. Es de mi país de origen, así que siento una gran conexión con su música, su carrera y su vida.

Todavía conservo algunos casetes que mi padre grabó especialmente para mí con sus canciones. Recuerdo que, cuando era niña, todas estábamos obsesionadas con ella; queríamos cantar y bailar como ella. Siempre ponía el casete en la grabadora y, cuando terminaba, lo retrocedía para que empezara de nuevo. Creo que me sé la letra del noventa y nueve por ciento de sus canciones.

El año pasado, cuando anunció la fecha del concierto, hasta me dio taquicardia. Mi corazón latía muy deprisa mientras compraba las entradas para poder ir. Obviamente, mi esposo me acompañará. Creo que tengo que hidratarme muy bien para poder cantar todas sus canciones; probablemente lloraré de la emoción al verla y escucharla en directo.

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I'm Going to a CThe concert of my Ffavorite Ssinger

I could go to a concert of my favorite singer soon.

Her music remindeds me my childhood, adolescence, and also now, her songs that accompaniesy me in my adult life.

She's from my origin country, so I feel a huge connection with her music, her career and her life.

I still have some cassettes that my father recorded especially for me with her songs.

I remember, when I was a child, everyone was obsessed with her; we wanted to sing and dance like sher.

AI always, I put the cassette in the tape player, and when it finished, I would rewind it so that it would starplay again.

Last year, when she announced the concert date, I even hadit gave me tachycardia.

My heart was beating veryso fast as I bought the tickets so that I could go.

I think I must to stay good hydrated so I can sing all her songs;. I'll probably cry with emotion when I see her and hear her live.

I'm Ggoing to a Cconcert of my Ffavourite Ssinger

I couldmay go to a concert of my favorite singer soon.

Her music remindeds me my childhood, adolescence, and also now, her songs accompaniesy me in my adult life.

She's from my origin country, so I feel a huge connection with her music, her career and her life.

I still have some cassettes with her songs that my father recorded specially for me with her songs.

I remember, when I was a child, everyone was obsessed with her; we wanted to sing and dance like she.

Always, I put the cassette in the tape player, and when it finished, I would rewind it so it would start again.

I believe I know most of the lyrics to ninety-nine percent of her songs.

My heart was beating very fast as I bought the tickets so I could go.

Obviously, my husband will accompany me.

I think I must to stay goodwell hydrated so I can sing all her songs; I'll probably cry with emotion when I see her and hear her live.

I could go to a concert of my favorite singer soon.

Instead of fixing this (the sentence is syntactically correct, at least), I will just point out implications. "I could go" has the implication of you being able to go, but still allowing that you might not. ("I might go" is an even weaker version.) "I will go" (or more appropriately, "I will be going"), however, has more definiteness to it. I'm leaning towards the last one, but I will let you decide. (See what I did there? ;) )

Her music reminded me of my childhood, and adolescence, and also. Until now, her songs accompaniesy me in my adult life.

Split for better flow.

She's also from my origin country of origin, so I feel a huge connection with her music, her career and her life.

"also" helps convey your connection with this singer.

I still have some cassettes with her songs that my father recorded especially for me with her songs.

I remember, when I was a child, that everyone was obsessed with her; we wanted to sing and dance like sher.

AI always, I put the cassette in the tape player, and when it finished playing, I would rewind it sothe cassette so that it would start all over again.

I believe I know the lyrics to ninety-nine percent of her songs.

Last year, when she announced ther concert date, I even had tachycardia.

(A little bit overselling the excitement you had... ;) )

My heart was beating very fast as I bought the tickets so that I could go.

Obviously, my husband will accompany me.

I think I must to stay good well-hydrated so I can sing all of her songs; I'll probably cry with emotion when I see her and hear her live.

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The excitement you have over this lady really comes across what you wrote. Hope you have fun!

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adichira

Nov. 1, 2025

26

Hello! Thank you very much for your corrections and your time! I understand your first comment, so the correct phrase would be "I will be going to a concert of my favorite singer soon", because it's a fact and I already have my tickets.

I'll take advantage from each second at this concert, I'm so excited.

I'm Going to a Concert of my Favorite Singer

I could go to a concert of my favorite singer soon.

Her music reminded me my childhood, adolescence, and also now, her songs accompaniesy me in my adult life.

She's from my origin country (or: country of origin), so I feel a huge connection with her music, her career and her life.

I still have some cassettes that my father recorded especially for me with her songs.

I remember, when I was a child, everyone was obsessed with her; we wanted to sing and dance like sher.

Always, I would put the cassette in the tape player, and when it finished, I would rewind it so it would star again.

I believe I know the lyrics to ninety-nine percent of her songs.

Last year, when she announced the concert date, I even had tachycardia.

Technically okay, but I would only use "tachycardia" for a legitimate medical issue. Better to say something like, "my heart was racing."

My heart was beating very fast as I bought the tickets so I could go.

Obviously, my husband will accompany me.

I think I must to stay goodwell hydrated so I can sing all her songs; I'll probably cry with emotion when I see her and hear her live.

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Wow, I'm so happy for you!! That sounds like so much fun! I hope you have the best time.

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adichira

Nov. 1, 2025

26

Hello! I'll have into account your recommendations, they're very useful to me.

Thank you!!! I'm so excited, I love her!!! hahahaha

I'm Going to a Concert of my Favorite Singer


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I'm Ggoing to a Cconcert of my Ffavourite Ssinger

I'm Going to a CThe concert of my Ffavorite Ssinger

I could go to a concert of my favorite singer soon.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I could go to a concert of my favorite singer soon.

Instead of fixing this (the sentence is syntactically correct, at least), I will just point out implications. "I could go" has the implication of you being able to go, but still allowing that you might not. ("I might go" is an even weaker version.) "I will go" (or more appropriately, "I will be going"), however, has more definiteness to it. I'm leaning towards the last one, but I will let you decide. (See what I did there? ;) )

I couldmay go to a concert of my favorite singer soon.

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I believe I know the lyrics to ninety-nine percent of her songs.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I believe I know most of the lyrics to ninety-nine percent of her songs.

Her music reminded me my childhood, adolescence, and also now, her songs accompanies in my adult life.


Her music reminded me my childhood, adolescence, and also now, her songs accompaniesy me in my adult life.

Her music reminded me of my childhood, and adolescence, and also. Until now, her songs accompaniesy me in my adult life.

Split for better flow.

Her music remindeds me my childhood, adolescence, and also now, her songs accompaniesy me in my adult life.

Her music remindeds me my childhood, adolescence, and also now, her songs that accompaniesy me in my adult life.

She's from my origin country, so I feel a huge connection with her music, her career and her life.


She's from my origin country (or: country of origin), so I feel a huge connection with her music, her career and her life.

She's also from my origin country of origin, so I feel a huge connection with her music, her career and her life.

"also" helps convey your connection with this singer.

She's from my origin country, so I feel a huge connection with her music, her career and her life.

She's from my origin country, so I feel a huge connection with her music, her career and her life.

I still have some cassettes that my father recorded specially for me with her songs.


I still have some cassettes that my father recorded especially for me with her songs.

I still have some cassettes with her songs that my father recorded especially for me with her songs.

I still have some cassettes with her songs that my father recorded specially for me with her songs.

I still have some cassettes that my father recorded especially for me with her songs.

I remember, when I was a child, everyone was obsessed with her; we wanted to sing and dance like she.


I remember, when I was a child, everyone was obsessed with her; we wanted to sing and dance like sher.

I remember, when I was a child, that everyone was obsessed with her; we wanted to sing and dance like sher.

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I remember, when I was a child, everyone was obsessed with her; we wanted to sing and dance like sher.

Always, I put the cassette in the tape player, and when it finished, I would rewind it so it would star again.


Always, I would put the cassette in the tape player, and when it finished, I would rewind it so it would star again.

AI always, I put the cassette in the tape player, and when it finished playing, I would rewind it sothe cassette so that it would start all over again.

Always, I put the cassette in the tape player, and when it finished, I would rewind it so it would start again.

AI always, I put the cassette in the tape player, and when it finished, I would rewind it so that it would starplay again.

Last year, when she announced the concert date, I even had tachycardia.


Last year, when she announced the concert date, I even had tachycardia.

Technically okay, but I would only use "tachycardia" for a legitimate medical issue. Better to say something like, "my heart was racing."

Last year, when she announced ther concert date, I even had tachycardia.

(A little bit overselling the excitement you had... ;) )

Last year, when she announced the concert date, I even hadit gave me tachycardia.

My heart was beating very fast as I bought the tickets so I could go.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My heart was beating very fast as I bought the tickets so that I could go.

My heart was beating very fast as I bought the tickets so I could go.

My heart was beating veryso fast as I bought the tickets so that I could go.

Obviously, my husband will accompany me.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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I think I must to stay good hydrated so I can sing all her songs; I'll probably cry with emotion when I see her and hear her live.


I think I must to stay goodwell hydrated so I can sing all her songs; I'll probably cry with emotion when I see her and hear her live.

I think I must to stay good well-hydrated so I can sing all of her songs; I'll probably cry with emotion when I see her and hear her live.

I think I must to stay goodwell hydrated so I can sing all her songs; I'll probably cry with emotion when I see her and hear her live.

I think I must to stay good hydrated so I can sing all her songs;. I'll probably cry with emotion when I see her and hear her live.

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