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pastille

Dec. 15, 2025

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I'm coming back to study english with you

Hello everybody,

After a few months without practicing english, i'm back here !

I listened and read a news article in English on Newsinlevels. It helps me practice listening and reading skills.

The article speaks about Trump's new plan.

Trump wants to help Europe and some leaders approve this idea, because US its like friend. However, others consider it like a bad idea because the plan can make OTA weak. Garmany believes that the US should not attack business.

For me, the US is far right, so i'm not interesting.

And you, what is your opinion about topic ?

Corrections

Hello everybody,!

A full stop / period works too, but not a comma.

After a few months without practicing eEnglish, iI'm back here !

I listened to and read a news article in English on Newsinlevels.

"I read and listened to" might be better.

When you use two words/verbs where one takes an extra preposition (listen *to*) and one doesn't (read), then usually the one which takes the preposition comes next.

Trump wants to help Europe, and some leaders approve of this idea, because the US its like a friend to them.

1) When you join two sentences with "and", if they're completely separate, there's a comma.
If they have the same subject, there's no comma.

e.g:

"I am walking to school and talking to my friend." ("I" is doing both, no comma)
"I'm walking to school, and my friend is talking to me." (Different subjects, comma)


2) USA/US takes "the".

However, others consider it like a bad idea because the plan canould make OTA weak.

It's a hypothetical, so you use "could", not "can" :)

Gaermany believes that the US should not attack businesses.

ForTo me, the US is far -right, so iI'm not interestinged.

interesting = something which causes interest
e.g "This book is interesting to me = I have interest in this book"

interested = the person/group who has interest
e.g "I am interested in this book = I have interest in this book"

AndWhat about you, what is your opinion abouton this topic ?

opinion *on* a topic

Feedback

Easy to understand what you meant! Just some wording mistakes :>

I'm coming back to study english with you

Hello everybody,

After a few months without practicing english, i'm back here !

I listened and read a news article in English on Newsinlevels.

It helps me practice listening and reading skills.

The article speaks about Trump's new plan.

Trump wants to help Europe and some leaders approve this idea, because US its like friend.

However, others consider it like a bad idea because the plan can make OTA weak.

Garmany believes that the US should not attack business.

For me, the US is far right, so i'm not interesting.

And you, what is your opinion about topic ?

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RoombaUnit

yesterday

1

I feel like there are clear mistakes that you should correct...

I'm coming back to study english with you

Hello everybody,

After a few months without practicing eEnglish, i'm back here !

I listened and read a news article in English on Newsinlevels.

It helpsed me practice (my) listening and reading skills.

For past tense consistency since you used "listened and read" above.

The article speakstalked about Trump's new plan.

It is not common to use "speaks" or "spoke" for things mentioned in writings.

Trump wantsed to help Europe and some leaders approvewelcomed this idea, because the US itwas like a friend.

However, others considered it like a bad idea because the plan canould make OTA weak.

Not too sure what is OTA myself.

Gaermany believesd that the US should not attacktarget businesses.

For me, the US is far right, so i'm not interestinged.

AndHow about you, w? What is your opinion abouton this topic ?

After a few months without practicing eEnglish, i'm back here I have returned!

I have listened and read a news articles in English onusing the website Newsinlevels.

It helps me to practice listening and reading skills.

Theks article speaks about Trump's new plan.

Trump wants to help Europe and some leaders approve this idea, because USthe United States its like a friend.

However, others consider it like a bad idea because the plan can make OTA(?) weak.

Gaermany believes that the US should not attack businesses.

For me, the US is far right in its politics, so i'I’m not interesting.ed.

And for you, what is your opinion about the topic ?

I'm coming back to study eEnglish with you!

Add punctuation to the end of sentences.

Hello everybody,.

Commas should not be used at the end of a sentence.

After a few months without practicing eEnglish, i'm back here !

You do not need a space before "!"

I listened to and read a news article in English on News inl Levels.

It helps me practice my listening and reading skills.

Is "it" the app or the news article?

The article speatalks about Trump's new plan.

"Talks" is a better word to use here. Can you elaborate on what Trump's new plan does?

Trump wants to help Europe and s. Some leaders approve of this idea, because the US its like friendan ally.

"Ally" (pronounced al-LIE) is a better word to use when talking about countries.

However, others consider it like a bad idea because the plan can make OTANATO weak.

« OTAN » is translated as "NATO" in English. Very technical, but helpful to know.

Gaermany believes that the US should not attack businesses.

For me,I think the US is far -right, so iI'm not interestinged.

Can you elaborate more on how you feel and why?

And you, wWhat is your opinion about this topic ?

Feedback

Il y a quelques petites choses à améliorer, mais c'est un excellent début pour recommencer l'anglais. Continuez à vous entraîner et vous y arriverez !

RoombaUnit's avatar
RoombaUnit

yesterday

1

Oh, interesting! I didn't know about the OTAN / NATO thing in my correction 😭 I don't speak French so...

pastille's avatar
pastille

yesterday

0

Merci beaucoup 🙏🙏🙏🙏. Top votre correction 😀 !

I'm coming back to study english with you


I'm coming back to study eEnglish with you!

Add punctuation to the end of sentences.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Hello everybody,


Hello everybody,.

Commas should not be used at the end of a sentence.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Hello everybody,!

A full stop / period works too, but not a comma.

After a few months without practicing english, i'm back here !


After a few months without practicing eEnglish, i'm back here !

You do not need a space before "!"

After a few months without practicing eEnglish, i'm back here I have returned!

After a few months without practicing eEnglish, i'm back here !

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After a few months without practicing eEnglish, iI'm back here !

I listened and read a news article in English on Newsinlevels.


I listened to and read a news article in English on News inl Levels.

I have listened and read a news articles in English onusing the website Newsinlevels.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I listened to and read a news article in English on Newsinlevels.

"I read and listened to" might be better. When you use two words/verbs where one takes an extra preposition (listen *to*) and one doesn't (read), then usually the one which takes the preposition comes next.

It helps me practice listening and reading skills.


It helps me practice my listening and reading skills.

Is "it" the app or the news article?

It helps me to practice listening and reading skills.

It helpsed me practice (my) listening and reading skills.

For past tense consistency since you used "listened and read" above.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The article speaks about Trump's new plan.


The article speatalks about Trump's new plan.

"Talks" is a better word to use here. Can you elaborate on what Trump's new plan does?

Theks article speaks about Trump's new plan.

The article speakstalked about Trump's new plan.

It is not common to use "speaks" or "spoke" for things mentioned in writings.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Trump wants to help Europe and some leaders approve this idea, because US its like friend.


Trump wants to help Europe and s. Some leaders approve of this idea, because the US its like friendan ally.

"Ally" (pronounced al-LIE) is a better word to use when talking about countries.

Trump wants to help Europe and some leaders approve this idea, because USthe United States its like a friend.

Trump wantsed to help Europe and some leaders approvewelcomed this idea, because the US itwas like a friend.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Trump wants to help Europe, and some leaders approve of this idea, because the US its like a friend to them.

1) When you join two sentences with "and", if they're completely separate, there's a comma. If they have the same subject, there's no comma. e.g: "I am walking to school and talking to my friend." ("I" is doing both, no comma) "I'm walking to school, and my friend is talking to me." (Different subjects, comma) 2) USA/US takes "the".

However, others consider it like a bad idea because the plan can make OTA weak.


However, others consider it like a bad idea because the plan can make OTANATO weak.

« OTAN » is translated as "NATO" in English. Very technical, but helpful to know.

However, others consider it like a bad idea because the plan can make OTA(?) weak.

However, others considered it like a bad idea because the plan canould make OTA weak.

Not too sure what is OTA myself.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

However, others consider it like a bad idea because the plan canould make OTA weak.

It's a hypothetical, so you use "could", not "can" :)

Garmany believes that the US should not attack business.


Gaermany believes that the US should not attack businesses.

Gaermany believes that the US should not attack businesses.

Gaermany believesd that the US should not attacktarget businesses.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Gaermany believes that the US should not attack businesses.

For me, the US is far right, so i'm not interesting.


For me,I think the US is far -right, so iI'm not interestinged.

Can you elaborate more on how you feel and why?

For me, the US is far right in its politics, so i'I’m not interesting.ed.

For me, the US is far right, so i'm not interestinged.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

ForTo me, the US is far -right, so iI'm not interestinged.

interesting = something which causes interest e.g "This book is interesting to me = I have interest in this book" interested = the person/group who has interest e.g "I am interested in this book = I have interest in this book"

And you, what is your opinion about topic ?


And you, wWhat is your opinion about this topic ?

And for you, what is your opinion about the topic ?

AndHow about you, w? What is your opinion abouton this topic ?

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

AndWhat about you, what is your opinion abouton this topic ?

opinion *on* a topic

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