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jjorajj

May 26, 2020

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I'm a mess

Today was a hot day as usually, i did the laundry and nothing else. i'm struggling with procrastination, that stuff holds me back. I need to be more accountable.

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Today was a hot day as usually, i; I did the laundry and nothing else.

iI'm struggling with procrastination, that stuff holds me back.

I need to be more accountaresponsible.

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Hi! In English, we wouldn't really use accountable in this way. You could instead say, "I need to hold myself accountable," which means I need to be responsible. Muy bien!

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jjorajj

May 26, 2020

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thank you!!! xD

Today was a hot day as usually, i; I did the laundry and nothing else.

iI'm struggling with procrastination, - that stuffort of thing holds me back.

Using the word "stuff" here is fine, but it sounds ever-so-slightly unnatural. You could also say something like, "it always holds me back."

I need to be more accountable.

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Very good! I hope you can find some motivation in the hot weather.

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samushi

May 26, 2020

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I need to be more accountable.

As the other person commented, "responsible" is better than "accountable." "I need to be more accountable" would mean you're talking about being accountable to other people, not yourself.

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jjorajj

May 26, 2020

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thank you!!!

I need to be more accountable.


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I need to be more accountaresponsible.

i'm struggling with procrastination, that stuff holds me back.


iI'm struggling with procrastination, - that stuffort of thing holds me back.

Using the word "stuff" here is fine, but it sounds ever-so-slightly unnatural. You could also say something like, "it always holds me back."

iI'm struggling with procrastination, that stuff holds me back.

I'm a mess


Today was a hot day as usually, i did the laundry and nothing else.


Today was a hot day as usually, i; I did the laundry and nothing else.

Today was a hot day as usually, i; I did the laundry and nothing else.

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