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Hi! My name is Natalia Silva, and I'm a sociologist and work like a public servant. I have more than ten years of labour experience in the public area. I have a thirteen-year-old. I live alone with my cat, Edipo. In that moment, I would like to learn English because I'm interested in travelling to study more. For it's, this publication is my first time.


Hola, mi nombre es Natalia Silva, soy socióloga y trabajo como funcionaria pública. Tengo más de 10 años de experiencia laboral en el sector público. Tengo 30 años de edad y vivo sola con mi gato, Edipo. En este momento, yo quisiera aprender inglés porque estoy interesada en poder viajar para estudiar más. Por esto, esta es mi primera publicación.

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My name is Natalia Silva, and I'm a sociologist and work likeas a public servant.

I have more thanover ten years of labour experience in the public areaworking as a social worker.

I have a thirteen-year-old.

I live aloneMY GUESS: I live with my son/daughter and with my cat, Edipo.

In that momentBRITISH ENGLISH: In the future, I would like to learn English because I'm interested in travelling to study moreabroad.¶
AMERICAN ENGLISH: In the future, I would like to learn English because I'm interested in traveling abroad
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For it's, this publication is my first time.This is my first time to write here.

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July 17, 2025

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I'mMe

Hi!

My name is Natalia Silva, and I'm a sociologist and work likeas a public servant.

I have more than ten years of labourwork experience in the public area.

I have a thirteen-year-old.

I live alone with my cat, Edipo.

InAt thate moment, I would like to learn English because I'm interested in travelling to study more.

For it's, this publicationThis is my first timepost.

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natasilvag

July 17, 2025

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Thanks!

Hi!

My name is Natalia Silva, and I'm a sociologist and work likeas a public servant.

I assume you mean you are a public servant.

I have more than ten years of labourwork experience in the public area.

“Work experience” is more natural, but “labor experience” is also understandable.

I have a thirteen-year-old.

I live alone with my cat, Edipo.

InAt thatis moment, I would like to learn English because I'm interested in travelling to study more.

For it's, tThis publication is my first time. more natural: This is my first entry. / This is my first post.

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natasilvag

July 17, 2025

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Thanks!

For it's, this publication is my first time.


For it's, tThis publication is my first time. more natural: This is my first entry. / This is my first post.

For it's, this publicationThis is my first timepost.

For it's, this publication is my first time.This is my first time to write here.

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I'mA Self-Introduction

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My name is Natalia Silva, and I'm a sociologist and work like a public servant.


My name is Natalia Silva, and I'm a sociologist and work likeas a public servant.

I assume you mean you are a public servant.

My name is Natalia Silva, and I'm a sociologist and work likeas a public servant.

My name is Natalia Silva, and I'm a sociologist and work likeas a public servant.

I have more than ten years of labour experience in the public area.


I have more than ten years of labourwork experience in the public area.

“Work experience” is more natural, but “labor experience” is also understandable.

I have more than ten years of labourwork experience in the public area.

I have more thanover ten years of labour experience in the public areaworking as a social worker.

I have a thirteen-year-old.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I live alone with my cat, Edipo.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I live aloneMY GUESS: I live with my son/daughter and with my cat, Edipo.

In that moment, I would like to learn English because I'm interested in travelling to study more.


InAt thatis moment, I would like to learn English because I'm interested in travelling to study more.

InAt thate moment, I would like to learn English because I'm interested in travelling to study more.

In that momentBRITISH ENGLISH: In the future, I would like to learn English because I'm interested in travelling to study moreabroad.¶
AMERICAN ENGLISH: In the future, I would like to learn English because I'm interested in traveling abroad
.

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