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I’ll treat my body better

Today feels like a perfect rest day. Next year, I’m going to take better care of my body — yoga, workouts, acupressure therapy (a natural healing method using finger pressure on specific points, no needles). My little electronic acupuncture device arrives today — it’s pen-shaped and easy to use. I can’t wait to try it.
I wonder what next year will be like. I would like to exercise a lot.


今日はまさに最高のオフ日和です。来年はもっと身体を大切にします— ヨガ、運動、ツボ押し療法(針なしで指でツボを押す自然療法です)
今日、小さい電子鍼が届く予定です。ーペン型で使いやすい物です。試してみるのがのとても楽しみです。
来年はどんな年になるでしょうか。私は沢山運動をしたいです。

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I agree with alexcjwei, this post sounds completely natural! Great job!

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Thank you, UmbrellaTerms! Your comment really encouraged me.

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Excellent work! Your writing is clear and well-structured throughout. Your use of dashes for explanations and your sentence variety make this very engaging to read. Keep up the great writing!

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Thank you! I'm really happy to hear that. Your feedback made me smile! :⁠-⁠)

I’ll treat my body better


Today feels like a perfect rest day.


Next year, I’m going to take better care of my body — yoga, workouts, acupressure therapy (a natural healing method using finger pressure on specific points, no needles).


My little electronic acupuncture device arrives today — it’s pen-shaped and easy to use.


I can’t wait to try it.


I wonder what next year will be like.


I would like to exercise a lot.


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