July 16, 2021
I'll go to sleep
I have decided to improve my English. Now, there is late in the night, I have written a couple of little English texts along the day. I jus came to know this page, already did some corrections. I hope somebody correct me, as I did with others. I have sleep difficulties, every time it is time to sleep, I try to do something else. Every day I say to myself I would not use screen past 10 pm, and every day I fail to myself. Aren't you experts in deceiving yourselves? I am that. I'll go to sleep, I expect to dream, to have English nightmares if necessary.
I'll go to sleep
I have decided to improve my English.
Now, there iIt's late in theat night now, I have written a couple of little English texts aloduring the day.
I don't know if this is exactly what you mean.
I jus came to knowt found this pagsite, and I've already didone some corrections.
"came to know" isn't very bad, but "found" is much more natural for what I think you mean. Usually "page" means a specific area of a website - so here we have the create journal page, the prompts page, the community page, and so on. Site or website if you mean the whole place.
Present perfect "I have already done" sounds much more natural than simple past "I already did", but I'm not sure exactly why!
I hope somebody corrects me, as I did with others.
I have sleep difficulties, every time it is time to sleep, I try to do something else.
Every day I say to myself I wouldill not use a screen past 10 pm, and every day I fail to myself.
"fail to myself" doesn't make much sense.
Aren't you experts in deceiving yourselves?
I am that.
Not wrong, but more natural.
I'll go to sleep, I expect to dream, to have English nightmares if necessary.
This sounds a bit strange. Necessary in what sense?
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Indeed, deceiving myself is one of my most well-honed skills :) Welcome!
July 16, 2021
Thank you for correcting me!!
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I'll go to sleep This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I have decided to improve my English. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Now, there is late in the night, I have written a couple of little English texts along the day.
I don't know if this is exactly what you mean. |
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I jus came to know this page, already did some corrections. I jus "came to know" isn't very bad, but "found" is much more natural for what I think you mean. Usually "page" means a specific area of a website - so here we have the create journal page, the prompts page, the community page, and so on. Site or website if you mean the whole place. Present perfect "I have already done" sounds much more natural than simple past "I already did", but I'm not sure exactly why! |
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I hope somebody correct me, as I did with others. I hope somebody corrects me, as I did with others. |
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I have sleep difficulties, every time it is time to sleep, I try to do something else. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Every day I say to myself I would not use screen past 10 pm, and every day I fail to myself. Every day I say to myself I w "fail to myself" doesn't make much sense. |
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Aren't you experts in deceiving yourselves? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I am that. I am Not wrong, but more natural. |
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I'll go to sleep, I expect to dream, to have English nightmares if necessary. I'll go to sleep, I expect to dream, to have English nightmares if necessary. This sounds a bit strange. Necessary in what sense? |
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