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A Place Renowned for its Ginkgo Trees

I went to a scenic area on Saturday.

It's renowned for its ginkgo trees, which have a long history. The oldest was planted over 1500 years ago, even 100 years earlier than the famous Tang Dynasty. You can find it at the beginning of this video: https://youtu.be/KoiKUEfYeik

It was the third time I've been there.

The first time I visited there was with two friends' families many years ago. At that time, we went there specially to drink the fresh tea in the spring.

The second time was one year ago. It was just at the end of a hiking trail.

This time, I visited with a friend to see the ginkgo trees with their yellow leaves.


上周六我去了一个风景区。

它以银杏树而闻名,那些银杏树有着悠久的历史。最古老的是1500多年前种植的,甚至比著名的唐朝还要早100年。你可以在视频开头找到它:https://youtu.be/KoiKUEfYeik

这是我第三次去那里了。

我第一次去那里是很多年前和两个朋友家一起去的。那时,我们专门去那里喝春天的新茶。

第二次是在一年前。它就在一条徒步路线的尽头。

这一次,我和一个朋友一起去看银杏树的黄叶。

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A Place Renowned for its Ginkgo Trees

It's renowned for its ginkgo trees, which have a long history.

The oldest was planted over 1500 years ago, even 100 years earlier than the famous Tang Dynasty.

The first time I visited there was with two friends' families many years ago.

The second time was one year ago.

This time, I visited with a friend to see the ginkgo trees with their yellow leaves.

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Tammy

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A Place Renowned for its Ginkgo Trees

It's renowned for its ginkgo trees, which have a long history.

You can find it at the beginning of this video: https://youtu.be/KoiKUEfYeik It was the third time I've been there.

The first time I visited there was with two friends' families many years ago.

The second time was one year ago.

It was just at the end of a hiking trail.

This time, I visited with a friend to see the ginkgo trees with their yellow leaves.

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I went to a scenic area on Saturday.

The second time was one year ago.

It was just at the end of a hiking trail.

This time, I visited with a friend to see the ginkgo trees with their yellow leaves.

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Tammy

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A Place Renowned for its Ginkgo Trees

I went to a scenic area on Saturday.

It's renowned for its ginkgo trees, which have a long history.

The oldest was planted over 1500 years ago, even 100 years earlier than the famous Tang Dynasty.

You can find it at the beginning of this video: https://youtu.be/KoiKUEfYeik It was the third time I've been there.

The first time I visited there was with two friends' families many years ago.

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Tammy

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A Place Renowned for its Ginkgo Trees

I went to a scenic area on Saturday.

It's renowned for its ginkgo trees, which have a long history.

The oldest was planted over 1500 years ago, even 100 years earlier than the famous Tang Dynasty.

You can find it at the beginning of this video: https://youtu.be/KoiKUEfYeik It was the third time I've been there.

At that time, we went there specially to drink the fresh tea in the spring.

The second time was one year ago.

It was just at the end of a hiking trail.

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