Jan. 5, 2021
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Heilongjiang is one of the longest rivers in Russia and it’s 2824 kilometers long in total. It flows through Russia and Mongolia. It’s also a boundary river between Russia and China. Heilongjiang flows into Okhotsk sea. There are various fish in Heilongjiang, such as pike, salmon and so on. Heilongjiang often overflowed in earlier times, but now it has become dried up or the water level is not as high as that of before.
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Heilongjiang is one of the longest rivers in Russia and it’s 2824 kilometers long in total.
Heilongjiang is one of the longest rivers in Russia and it’s 2824 kilometers long.
It’s also a boundary rivcts as a border between Russia and China.
It’s also acts as a border between Russia and China.
Heilongjiang often overflowed in earlier times, but now it has become dried up or the water level is not as high as that ofit was before.
Heilongjiang often overflowed in earlier times, but now the water level is not as high as it was before.
When you say "dried up", it makes me think that the river water is completely gone (making it dry). It also indicates that the water has been dried up by the sun, which might not be the reason for the decrease in water level. I think it sounds more natural to say it without this part.
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Very nice and accurate ~
Jan. 6, 2021
You are right. Thank you very much.
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Heilongjiang is one of the longest rivers in Russia and it’s 2824 kilometers long in total.
Heilongjiang is one of the longest rivers in Russia and it’s 2824 kilometers long |
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It flows through Russia and Mongolia. |
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It’s also a boundary river between Russia and China.
It’s also a |
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Heilongjiang flows into Okhotsk sea. |
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There are various fish in Heilongjiang, such as pike, salmon and so on. |
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Heilongjiang often overflowed in earlier times, but now it has become dried up or the water level is not as high as that of before.
Heilongjiang often overflowed in earlier times, but now When you say "dried up", it makes me think that the river water is completely gone (making it dry). It also indicates that the water has been dried up by the sun, which might not be the reason for the decrease in water level. I think it sounds more natural to say it without this part. |
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