cChoose ning a Name Choosing a Name

(1) I reworded the title so that it sounds more natural. (2) Typically, all words in a title are capitalised.

cChoose name Choose name

cChoose a name Choose a name

Today，i, I have a new name，i am. The name I choose name for onemyself， is Lris., Today, I have a new name. The name I chose for myself is Lris,

(1) The pronoun "I" is always capitalised. (2) I think the writing will flow better if this sentence is split into two. I would also suggest merging the second half with the next sentence, so I replaced the period at the end with a comma.

Today，i have, I got a new name，i am. I choose a name for onemyself，, Lris. Today, I got a new name. I chose a name for myself, Lris.

Today，i, I have a new name，i am, I have choosen a name for onemyself，, Lris. Today, I have a new name, I have chosen a name for myself, Lris.

English uses the single width comma "," not a double width comma.

Today，iI have a new name，i am which I choose name for onemyself，. It’s Lris. Today，I have a new name which I chose for myself. It’s Lris.

Beacbecause my Chinese name one ishas the character "Hhong（" (rainbow）") inside (it). because my Chinese name has the character "hong" (rainbow) inside (it).

As mentioned earlier, I'd suggest merging this sentence with the one above. Therefore, I uncapitalised "because".

Beacause my Chinese name one is "Hong（rainbow）" inside" . Because my Chinese name is "Hong" .

Beacause my Chinese name cone istains the character for "Hong（ (rainbow）" inside )". Because my Chinese name contains the character for "Hong (rainbow)".

Beacuse my Chinese name one is "Hong（rainbow）" inside . Beacuse my Chinese name is "Hong（rainbow）" inside .

But iI don't known, does my new name ，does it sound strange? But I don't know, does my new name sound strange?

But iI don't known about my new name, ，does it sound strange? But I don't know about my new name, does it sound strange?

But iI don't known about my new name, ，does it sound strange? But I don't know about my new name, does it sound strange?

Since you mentioned in a previous post you mentioned wanting to pick an English name, but Lris doesn't read as an English name (and actually is more challenging for English speakers than Hong) to pronounce, as we don't really have the "lr" combination in English. Perhaps you were looking up Iris? That is a more common name, but note it starts with an I not an L. It can be confusing because the capital I looks like the lowercase l.

But iI don't’t kown my new name ，does it sound strange? But I don’t kown my new name，does it sound strange?