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April 1, 2025

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If You Were Reincarnated, Who Would Like to Come Back As?

If I were reincarnated, I would like to come back as an astronaut. A space is filled with mysterious things and I can also experience that I have never met before. But I will miss a ground.

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If You Were Reincarnated, Who Would You Like tTo Come Back As?

If I were reincarnated, I would like to come back as an astronaut.

A sSpace is filled with mysterious things, and I can alsohave experiences that I have never methad before.

But I will miss a groundthe Earth.

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Keep up the good work!

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TOMO_o

April 2, 2025

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Thank you very much for the careful correction.

If You Were Reincarnated, Who Would You Like to Come Back As?

A sSpace is filled with mysterious things and. I can also experience twhat I have never met before.

But I will miss athe ground.

I think it makes more sense to write "But I will miss Earth."

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Good job!

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TOMO_o

April 2, 2025

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Thank you for the careful correction.

If You Were Reincarnated, Who Would Like to Come Back As?

If I were reincarnated, I would like to come back as an astronaut.

A sSpace is filled with mysterious things and I canould also have experiences that I ha've never methad before.

I'm not 100% that my correction is aligned with what you meant, but I made an attempt :-)

But I will miss athe ground.

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Good job overall, just one sentence that wasn't clear to me.

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TOMO_o

April 2, 2025

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Thank you for the careful correction.

A space is filled with mysterious things. and I can also experience thatings I have never metencountered before.

But I will miss a groundbeing back on earth.

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In America there's an astronaut cadet famous because he was literally in the Navy SEALs (super selective and profoundly intense), earned multiple military honors, then got degrees in mathematics and then a freaking MD from Harvard, finished a residency at Mass General in emergency medicine, then was like, whats next for me? Maybe I also want to be an astronaut. Next week he is going to the International Space Station for his first space flight.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jonny_Kim

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TOMO_o

April 2, 2025

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Thank you very much for the careful correction.

If You Were Reincarnated, Who Would Like to Come Back As?


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If You Were Reincarnated, Who Would You Like to Come Back As?

If You Were Reincarnated, Who Would You Like tTo Come Back As?

If I were reincarnated, I would like to come back as an astronaut.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If I were reincarnated, I would like to come back as an astronaut.

A space is filled with mysterious things and I can also experience that I have never met before.


A space is filled with mysterious things. and I can also experience thatings I have never metencountered before.

A sSpace is filled with mysterious things and I canould also have experiences that I ha've never methad before.

I'm not 100% that my correction is aligned with what you meant, but I made an attempt :-)

A sSpace is filled with mysterious things and. I can also experience twhat I have never met before.

A sSpace is filled with mysterious things, and I can alsohave experiences that I have never methad before.

But I will miss a ground.


But I will miss a groundbeing back on earth.

But I will miss athe ground.

But I will miss athe ground.

I think it makes more sense to write "But I will miss Earth."

But I will miss a groundthe Earth.

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