Dec. 19, 2020
If you had all the money in the world to invest in (part 1)
If you had all the money in the world to invest in a business, what would you do? Part 1
I’m a teacher , and I always have thought that getting rid of textbooks would be good for humankind :-). I’m thinking about the ‘traditional’ textbook, naturally. I would like to create a publishing company for change the traditional textbook.
For many years I have seen hundreds of textbooks forgotten by students who hardly use them.
The problem is always the same. The publishing company asks one or two teachers to write a textbook for an entire subject. But usually you have good material for one or two subjects, the rest is usually quite bad. The result is that each teacher uses a small part of the book and forgets about the rest.
In many cases he photocopies 'illegally' :-) parts of other books to complete his class material.
The case is particularly serious in regions like mine, where the government pays for all the books. So more and more books with little use are accumulating in schools and we all end up paying for them with our taxes.
What can we do to change that?
If you had all the money in the world to invest in (part 1)
If you had all the money in the world to invest in a business, what would you do?
Part 1
I’m a a teacher , , and I always have thought that getting rid of textbooks would be good for humankindeveryone. :-).
"Everyone" sounds more natural than "humankind." You could also put "children" or "students" if you want to be more detailed with your subject.
I’m thinking about the ‘traditional’ textbook, naturally.
I would like to create a publishing company forto change the traditional textbook.
For many years I have seen hundreds of textbooks forgotten by students who hardly use them.
The problem is always the same.
The publishing company asks one or two teachers to write a textbook for an entire subject.
But usually you have good material for one or two subjects, the rest is usually quite bad.
The result is that each teacher uses a small part of the book and forgets about the rest.
In many cases he photocopies 'illegally' :-), they illegally photocopy parts of other books to complete histheir class material.
Rearranged the sentence to make it sound more natural. Also corrected tenses.
The case is particularly serious in regions like mine, where the government pays for all the books.
So more and more books with little use are accumulating in schools and we all end up paying for them with our taxes.
What can we do to change that?
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Your writing overall is very good! I really like this idea by the way. My university does something like this and allows teacher to gather all their material and make "digital textbooks" that only hold information that they want for their class. It saves money and I don't need a physical textbook! Good luck in your career!
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I’m a teacher , and I always have thought that getting rid of textbooks would be good for humankind :-). I’m "Everyone" sounds more natural than "humankind." You could also put "children" or "students" if you want to be more detailed with your subject. |
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I’m thinking about the ‘traditional’ textbook, naturally. I’m thinking about the |
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I would like to create a publishing company for change the traditional textbook. I would like to create a publishing company |
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For many years I have seen hundreds of textbooks forgotten by students who hardly use them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The problem is always the same. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The publishing company asks one or two teachers to write a textbook for an entire subject. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But usually you have good material for one or two subjects, the rest is usually quite bad. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The result is that each teacher uses a small part of the book and forgets about the rest. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In many cases he photocopies 'illegally' :-) parts of other books to complete his class material. In many cases Rearranged the sentence to make it sound more natural. Also corrected tenses. |
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The case is particularly serious in regions like mine, where the government pays for all the books. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So more and more books with little use are accumulating in schools and we all end up paying for them with our taxes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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What can we do to change that? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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