Oct. 6, 2021
If you could study a subject...?
If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.
Just as students prefer studying popular careers such as medicine, engineering, business, and so on; whereas others would choose to study technical skills. In my case, I would select to study economy because I like math, it is a dream to get economic freedom, and make money easier.
First off, most students really do not like numbers, math. I do not why so far, but I am fond of math. In fact, when I was a student, I always got outstanding scores in my math lessons. I extremely enjoyed learning math because I felt relaxed and comfortable. During my high-school studies, I did not have the opportunity to study economy as a subject. If I had studied economy, probably I would have got perfect scores in my economy class as well.
Secondly, sometimes my family have had economic problems, especially in this time due to the pandemic situation. Then, for me it is important to analyze how to get economic freedom in our life. Right now, I am working as a private tutor and earning some money to help to my parents, but it is not enough to achieve this goal. As the matter of fact, studying economy is a great tool to understand how the economy works in the world.
Finally, as I mentioned before, understanding the basics of economy is an excellent tool to obtain economic freedom. So, economists can comprehend how the money flows in the world. Therefore, they can make money easily. For instance, each big companies have a specialist economist in order to control the finance of the work. In this case, they know how to get better profits, avoid wasting money, and avoid risky investment; all of these to get a safe economy in the company.
To sum up, if I may study something new, I would definitely choose economy. I feel this way because economy has many advantages, for example, economic freedom, make money easier, and I am simply lover of math.
If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose?
Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.
Just asSome students prefer studying popular careers such as medicine, engineering, business, and so on;, whereas others would choose to study technical skills.
If you got rid of "whereas", you could keep the semicolon.
In my case, I would select to study economy because I like math, i. It is amy dream to get economic freedom, and to make money more easierly.
First off, most students really do not like numbers, math.
I do not know why so far, but I am fond of math.
In fact, when I was a student, I always got outstanding scores in my math lessons.
I extremely enjoyed learning math because I felt relaxed and comfortable.
During my high- school studies, I did not have the opportunity to study economy as a subject.
If I had studied economy, probably I would have got perfect scores in my economy class as well.
Secondly, sometimes my family haves had economic problems, especially in this time due to the pandemic situation.
"Family" is considered singular in English.
Thenrefore, for me it is important to analyze how to get economic freedom in our life.
Right now, I am working as a private tutor and earning some money to help to my parents, but it is not enough to achieve this goal.
As thea matter of fact, studying economy is a great tool to understand how the economy works in the world.
Finally, as I mentioned before, understanding the basics of economy is an excellent tool to obtain economic freedom.
So, eEconomists can comprehend how the money flows in the world.
Therefore, they can make money easily.
For instance, each big companiesy haves a specialist economist in order to control the finance of the work.
In this case, they know how to get better profits, avoid wasting money, and avoid risky investment; all of these to get a safe economy in the company.
To sum up, if I may studyied something new, I would definitely choose economy.
I feel this way because economy has many advantages, for example,: economic freedom, makeing money easier, and I am simply a lover of math.
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If you could study a subject...? |
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If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Just as students prefer studying popular careers such as medicine, engineering, business, and so on; whereas others would choose to study technical skills.
If you got rid of "whereas", you could keep the semicolon. |
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In my case, I would select to study economy because I like math, it is a dream to get economic freedom, and make money easier. In my case, I would select to study economy because I like math |
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First off, most students really do not like numbers, math. First off, most students really do not like numbers |
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I do not why so far, but I am fond of math. I do not know why so far, but I am fond of math. |
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In fact, when I was a student, I always got outstanding scores in my math lessons. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I extremely enjoyed learning math because I felt relaxed and comfortable. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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During my high-school studies, I did not have the opportunity to study economy as a subject. During my high |
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If I had studied economy, probably I would have got perfect scores in my economy class as well. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Secondly, sometimes my family have had economic problems, especially in this time due to the pandemic situation. Secondly, sometimes my family ha "Family" is considered singular in English. |
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Then, for me it is important to analyze how to get economic freedom in our life. The |
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Right now, I am working as a private tutor and earning some money to help to my parents, but it is not enough to achieve this goal. Right now, I am working as a private tutor and earning some money to help |
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As the matter of fact, studying economy is a great tool to understand how the economy works in the world. As |
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Finally, as I mentioned before, understanding the basics of economy is an excellent tool to obtain economic freedom. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So, economists can comprehend how the money flows in the world.
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Therefore, they can make money easily. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For instance, each big companies have a specialist economist in order to control the finance of the work. For instance, each big compan |
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In this case, they know how to get better profits, avoid wasting money, and avoid risky investment; all of these to get a safe economy in the company. In this case, they know how to get better profits, avoid wasting money, and avoid risky investment |
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To sum up, if I may study something new, I would definitely choose economy. To sum up, if I |
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I feel this way because economy has many advantages, for example, economic freedom, make money easier, and I am simply lover of math. I feel this way because economy has many advantages |
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