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March 9, 2025

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If You Could Fly, Where Would You Go?

If I could fly, I would like to fly high above Tokyo and express myself to the sunlight. The sight would be very different from what I see now, and I can feel the whole world.

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If You Could Fly, Where Would You Go?

If I could fly, I would like to fly high above Tokyo and expressose myself to the sunlight.

I think you meant "expose" not "express." "Express myself" means something like sing, or dance, or say your feelings out loud.

The sight would be very different from what I see now, and I can feel the whole world.

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A beautiful dream. Thank you for sharing it. いい夢ですね。書いていただきありがとうございます。

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TOMO_o

March 10, 2025

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Thank you for the correction.

If You Could Fly, Where Would You Go?

If I could fly, I would like to fly high above Tokyo and expressose myself to the sunlight.

I think what you meant was expose yourself, instead of express

The sightview would be very different from what I see now, and I canould feel the whole world.

I think sight works fine, but view sounds more natural for this case in specific. Also "could" is more appropriate here, because you are talking about a possibility.

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TOMO_o

March 10, 2025

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Thank you for the careful correction.

If I could fly, I would like to fly high above Tokyo and expressose (?) myself to the sunlight.

Not quite sure what you mean by express here.

The sight would be very different from what I see now, and I canould feel the whole world.

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TOMO_o

March 10, 2025

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Thank you for the correction.

If You Could Fly, Where Would You Go?

If I could fly, I would like to fly high above Tokyo and (express)? myself to the sunlight.

I'm not exactly sure what you mean here, but you cannot "express yourself" to the sunlight. Perhaps you mean "expose"?

The sightview would be very different from what I see now, and I can fould seel the whole world.

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When I was a child, I often had dreams where I was flying. It was wonderful!!

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TOMO_o

March 10, 2025

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Thank you for the careful correction.

If You Could Fly, Where Would You Go?

If I could fly, I would like to fly high above Tokyo and expressose myself to the sunlight.

The sight would be very different from what I see now, and I can fould seel the whole world.

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TOMO_o

March 10, 2025

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Thank you for the correction.

If You Could Fly, Where Would You Go?


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If I could fly, I would like to fly high above Tokyo and express myself to the sunlight.


If I could fly, I would like to fly high above Tokyo and expressose myself to the sunlight.

If I could fly, I would like to fly high above Tokyo and (express)? myself to the sunlight.

I'm not exactly sure what you mean here, but you cannot "express yourself" to the sunlight. Perhaps you mean "expose"?

If I could fly, I would like to fly high above Tokyo and expressose (?) myself to the sunlight.

Not quite sure what you mean by express here.

If I could fly, I would like to fly high above Tokyo and expressose myself to the sunlight.

I think what you meant was expose yourself, instead of express

If I could fly, I would like to fly high above Tokyo and expressose myself to the sunlight.

I think you meant "expose" not "express." "Express myself" means something like sing, or dance, or say your feelings out loud.

The sight would be very different from what I see now, and I can feel the whole world.


The sight would be very different from what I see now, and I can fould seel the whole world.

The sightview would be very different from what I see now, and I can fould seel the whole world.

The sight would be very different from what I see now, and I canould feel the whole world.

The sightview would be very different from what I see now, and I canould feel the whole world.

I think sight works fine, but view sounds more natural for this case in specific. Also "could" is more appropriate here, because you are talking about a possibility.

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