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Tammy

July 9, 2024

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If you come to Shanghai (2)

The second one I recommend is cycling along the rivers.

There are two famous rivers in Shanghai, Huangpu Jiang and Suzhou He. Many people like to visit the confluence of the two rivers, so you can make this spot your destination and choose anywhere near your hotel as the starting point.

Along any of the two rivers, you can see historical and under-construction buildings, people who are local or visiting here, and views that are typical in season.

Don't worry about the bicycle. I'm sure you have WeChat Pay or Alipay on your smartphone when you're in China. You can use any of them to scan a shared bicycle for a little fee. The newest type of shared bicycles are very comfortable and easy to ride.

If you can't ride a bicycle, there are cruises along the rivers. You can make a reservation in advance.


我推荐的第二个是沿河骑自行车。

上海有两条有名的河流,黄浦江和苏州河。很多人都喜欢去两江汇合处游玩,所以你可以把这个地方作为你的目的地,选择酒店附近的任何地方作为起点。

沿着两条河中的任何一条,你都可以看到历史悠久的和在建的建筑,当地人或游客,以及典型的季节景观。

别担心自行车。我相信当你在中国的时候,你的智能手机上有微信支付或支付宝。你可以用它们中的任何一个扫描共享单车,支付一点费用即可。最新型的共享单车非常舒适,骑起来很方便。

如果你不会骑自行车,沿河有游船。您可以提前预订。

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If you come to Shanghai (2)

The second one I recommend is cycling along the rivers.

There are two famous rivers in Shanghai, the Huangpu Jiang and the Suzhou He.

Many people like to visit the confluence of the two rivers, so you can make this spot your destination and choose anywhere near place around your hotel as the starting point.

Along any of the two rivers, you can see historical and under-construction buildings, people who arebuildings or buildings that are still under-construction, locals or visiting heretourists, and views that are typical inof the season.

Don't worry about the bicycle.

I'm sure you will have WeChat Pay or Alipay on your smartphone when you're in China.

Can anyone just register? Don't you need an ID or bank account?

You can use any of them to scan the QR code for a shared bicycle for a littlesmall fee.

The newest type of shared bicycles are very comfortable and easy to ride.

If you can't ride a bicycle, there are cruises along the rivers.

You can make a reservation in advance.

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My friend was going to take me on a cruise around Huangpu Jiang but unfortunately she had to work overtime that day and it was too late by the time she finished.

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Tammy

July 10, 2024

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Oh, what a pity!

You need a bank account for WeChat Pay and Alipay. After all, you have to pay with them.

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shorter

July 11, 2024

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Yeah hahaha sorry, I meant Chinese bank account/ID

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Tammy

July 12, 2024

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A foreign bank account is ok too.

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shorter

July 12, 2024

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Good to know! Thanks!

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Tammy

July 12, 2024

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Happy to help.

The second onething I recommend is cycling along the rivers.

There are two famous rivers in Shanghai,: Huangpu Jiang and Suzhou He.

Many people like to visit the confluencejunction of the two rivers, so you can make this spot your destination and choose anywhere near your hotel as the starting point.

I think 'confluence' is a little too fancy for conversation.

Along anyeither of the two rivers, you can see historical and under-construction buildings, people who are local or visiting here, and views that are typical inof the season.

'Either' is used for groups of two. 'Any' implies a group of three or more.

Don't worry about the bicycle.

I'm sure you have WeChat Pay or Alipay on your smartphone when you're in China.

You can use any of them to scan a shared bicycle for a little fee.

The newest type of shared bicycles are very comfortable and easy to ride.

If you can't ride a bicycle, there are cruises along the rivers.

You can make a reservation in advance.

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Sounds lovely!

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Tammy

July 10, 2024

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Thank you! Now I learned the word "junction"!

The second oneactivity I recommend is cycling along the rivers.

Your original wasn't wrong, but this sounds a little nicer.

There are two famous rivers in Shanghai, Huangpu Jiang and Suzhou He.

Many people like to visit the confluence of the two rivers, so you can make this spot your destination and choose anywhere near your hotel as the starting point.

Along any of the two rivers, you can see historical, new and under-construction buildings, people who are local or visiting hereboth locals and tourists, and views that are typical infor any season.

Again - nothing in your original was wrong, this is just more how I would write it.

Don't worry about the bicycle.

I'm sure you have WeChat Pay or Alipay on your smartphone when you're in China.

You can use any of them to scan a shared bicycle for a little fee.

The newest type of shared bicycles are very comfortable and easy to ride.

If you can't ride a bicycle, there are cruises along the rivers.

You can make a reservation in advance.

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But you missed the most important part of Shanghai - 生煎包 from 小杨生煎 :P (Your piece was very really well written!)

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Tammy

July 10, 2024

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Haha, I just haven't written about it yet.

Thank you and long time no see!

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If you come to Shanghai (2)

The second one I recommend is cycling along the rivers.

There are two famous rivers in Shanghai, Huangpu Jiang and Suzhou He.

Many people like to visit the confluence of the two rivers, so you can make this spot your destination and choose anywhere near your hotel as the starting point.

Along any of the two rivers, you can see historical and under-construction buildings, people who are local or visiting here, and views that are typical in season.

Don't worry about the bicycle.

I'm sure you have WeChat Pay or Alipay on your smartphone when you're in China.

You can use any of them to scan a shared bicycle for a little fee.

The newest type of shared bicycles are very comfortable and easy to ride.

If you can't ride a bicycle, there are cruises along the rivers.

You can make a reservation in advance.

Feedback

Perfect!

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Tammy

July 10, 2024

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Thank you!

Have a nice day!

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Your original wasn't wrong, but this sounds a little nicer.

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There are two famous rivers in Shanghai,: Huangpu Jiang and Suzhou He.

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Many people like to visit the confluence of the two rivers, so you can make this spot your destination and choose anywhere near your hotel as the starting point.


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Many people like to visit the confluencejunction of the two rivers, so you can make this spot your destination and choose anywhere near your hotel as the starting point.

I think 'confluence' is a little too fancy for conversation.

Many people like to visit the confluence of the two rivers, so you can make this spot your destination and choose anywhere near place around your hotel as the starting point.

Along any of the two rivers, you can see historical and under-construction buildings, people who are local or visiting here, and views that are typical in season.


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Along any of the two rivers, you can see historical, new and under-construction buildings, people who are local or visiting hereboth locals and tourists, and views that are typical infor any season.

Again - nothing in your original was wrong, this is just more how I would write it.

Along anyeither of the two rivers, you can see historical and under-construction buildings, people who are local or visiting here, and views that are typical inof the season.

'Either' is used for groups of two. 'Any' implies a group of three or more.

Along any of the two rivers, you can see historical and under-construction buildings, people who arebuildings or buildings that are still under-construction, locals or visiting heretourists, and views that are typical inof the season.

Don't worry about the bicycle.


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I'm sure you have WeChat Pay or Alipay on your smartphone when you're in China.


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I'm sure you will have WeChat Pay or Alipay on your smartphone when you're in China.

Can anyone just register? Don't you need an ID or bank account?

You can use any of them to scan a shared bicycle for a little fee.


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You can use any of them to scan the QR code for a shared bicycle for a littlesmall fee.

The newest type of shared bicycles are very comfortable and easy to ride.


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If you can't ride a bicycle, there are cruises along the rivers.


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You can make a reservation in advance.


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