May 27, 2020
if someone gave me $100 million, what would I do with it?
Well, after kissing her or him. I will travel to China to learn Chinese...
iIf someone gave me $100 million, what would I do with it?
Capital letters at the start of sentences.
Since - in the passage - you don't say what you would do *with the money* but instead say what you would do generally, you should remove the "with it" of the money.
Well, after kissing her or him.,
I willould travel to China to learn Chinese...
(From your title) "If somone gave" is a conditional statement, so you should use "would" here too since it' sconditional. If your title sais "If somes *gives* me...", then you should use "I will travel..." here. Hope that makes sense.
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Well done, and good luck with finding $100 million :D
Well, after kissgiving ther or him.m a big kiss,
I willould travel to China to learn Chinese...
May 27, 2020
thank you xD
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if someone gave me $100 million, what would I do with it?
Capital letters at the start of sentences. Since - in the passage - you don't say what you would do *with the money* but instead say what you would do generally, you should remove the "with it" of the money. |
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Well, after kissing her or him. Well, after Well, after kissing her or him |
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I will travel to China to learn Chinese... I w I w (From your title) "If somone gave" is a conditional statement, so you should use "would" here too since it' sconditional. If your title sais "If somes *gives* me...", then you should use "I will travel..." here. Hope that makes sense. |
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