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Sept. 10, 2020

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If l could live anywhere in the world, where would l choose

I think l would choose Australia to live because it is a beautiful and attractive country, there have obsessed coast and magnificent scenery, also there have a lot of animals. meanwhile, Australia has a rather good education than most countries in the world, that why every year has many oversea students came to Australia. besides, there on the business and medical sector are quite good, so l world choose Australia.

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If l could live anywhere in the world, where would l choose?

I think l would choose to live in Australia to live because it is a beautiful and attractive country, t. There have obsessed coast and magnificent scenery, also; there haveare also a lot of animals.

Not sure what you mean by "obsessed"?

meanwhile, Australia has a rather good education than most countries in the world,compared to most other countries, and that is why every year has many oversea students caome to Australia.

bBesides, there onis, their business and medical sectors are quite good, so l world choose Australia.

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I think l would choose Australia to live because it is a beautiful and attractive country, there have with an obsessed coast and magnificent scenery, also there have awhilst also having lots of animals.

Not sure what an obsessed coast means?

meanwhileAdditionally, Australia has a rather good education thancompared to most countries in the world,. For that why every year hasreason, many overseas students caome to Australia every year.

besides, there on theOther than that their business and medical sectors are quite good, so l woruld choose Australia.

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lpincus

Sept. 10, 2020

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I think l would choose Australia to live because it is a beautiful and attractive country, there have with an obsessed coast and magnificent scenery, also there have awhilst also having lots of animals.

Obsessed is the wrong word, usually used for a person not an object

If l could live anywhere in the world, where would l choose

I think l would choose to live in Australia to live because it is a beautiful and attractive country, therey have obsessed coast and magnificent scenery, also therey have a lot of animals.

meanwhile, Australia has a rather good education thancompared to most countries in the world, that is why every year has many overseas students came to Australia.

besides, theire on the business and medical sector are quite good, so l woruld choose Australia.

If l could live anywhere in the world, where would l choose


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If l could live anywhere in the world, where would l choose?

I think l would choose Australia to live because it is a beautiful and attractive country, there have obsessed coast and magnificent scenery, also there have a lot of animals.


I think l would choose to live in Australia to live because it is a beautiful and attractive country, therey have obsessed coast and magnificent scenery, also therey have a lot of animals.

I think l would choose Australia to live because it is a beautiful and attractive country, there have with an obsessed coast and magnificent scenery, also there have awhilst also having lots of animals.

Not sure what an obsessed coast means?

I think l would choose to live in Australia to live because it is a beautiful and attractive country, t. There have obsessed coast and magnificent scenery, also; there haveare also a lot of animals.

Not sure what you mean by "obsessed"?

meanwhile, Australia has a rather good education than most countries in the world, that why every year has many oversea students came to Australia.


meanwhile, Australia has a rather good education thancompared to most countries in the world, that is why every year has many overseas students came to Australia.

meanwhileAdditionally, Australia has a rather good education thancompared to most countries in the world,. For that why every year hasreason, many overseas students caome to Australia every year.

meanwhile, Australia has a rather good education than most countries in the world,compared to most other countries, and that is why every year has many oversea students caome to Australia.

besides, there on the business and medical sector are quite good, so l world choose Australia.


besides, theire on the business and medical sector are quite good, so l woruld choose Australia.

besides, there on theOther than that their business and medical sectors are quite good, so l woruld choose Australia.

bBesides, there onis, their business and medical sectors are quite good, so l world choose Australia.

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