Sept. 6, 2020
If l could have a animal as a pet, what is my choose
l think l will choose the dog as that has three advantages, one of the advantages is that l feel the dog is so cute and very loyal never will leave me. and then, when l go out the dog can protect my home don't be robbed if have robber. but anyway, the dog must be a big dog. The last advantage is the dog is our best friend and a good listener, so l will choose the dog.
If l could have an animal as a pet, what is mywould I choose?
You might already know this, but here's a reminder just in case: when a word starts with a vowel, you use "an". For all other words that don't start with vowels you would use "a". An exception would be "one". Since it sounds like it starts with the letter "w", we usually say "a" in front of "one". So for example, we'd say "a one point lead" instead of "an one point lead". Also, while using "an" is okay in this sentence, I think saying "If I could have any animal as a pet" would sound a bit better. But both work
l think l willould choose thea dog as thait has three advantages, o. One of the advantages is that l feel thea dog is so cute and very loyal, so it never will leave me.
and tThen, when l go out the dog can protect my home dso I won't be robbed if have robber.
but aAnyway, the dog must be a big dog.
You could also say "The dog must be a big dog, though."
The last advantage is theat a dog is our best friend and a good listener, so l willould choose thea dog.
When talking about dogs, we usually say they're "man's best friend" in English, but saying "our best friend" is also okay I think. It has the same meaning and I don't think it sounds weird.
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This is well written! I hope you can have a dog someday!
If l could have an animal as a pet, what iswould be my chooseice?
Other ways you could say this:
"What I would choose if I could have any animal as a pet"
"If I could have any animal as a pet, what would I choose?"
l think l willould choose thea dog as that has three advantages, o. One of the advantages is that l feel theat dog iss are so cute and very loyal so my pet would never will leave me.
Since this is a hypothetical situation, you should use "would" instead of "will." If you are certain that something is going to happen, then you can use "will."
and tThen, when l go out, the dog can protect my home don't be robbed if havefrom robbers.
bBut anyway, the dog must be a big dog.
The last advantage is theat dog is ours are man's best friend and a good listeners, so l willould choose thea dog.
"Man's best friend" is the expression you're looking for here
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When talking about characteristics of dogs in general, we tend to use the plural. Good job! I like dogs too.
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If l could have a animal as a pet, what is my choose If l could have an animal as a pet, what Other ways you could say this: "What I would choose if I could have any animal as a pet" "If I could have any animal as a pet, what would I choose?" If l could have an animal as a pet, what You might already know this, but here's a reminder just in case: when a word starts with a vowel, you use "an". For all other words that don't start with vowels you would use "a". An exception would be "one". Since it sounds like it starts with the letter "w", we usually say "a" in front of "one". So for example, we'd say "a one point lead" instead of "an one point lead". Also, while using "an" is okay in this sentence, I think saying "If I could have any animal as a pet" would sound a bit better. But both work |
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l think l will choose the dog as that has three advantages, one of the advantages is that l feel the dog is so cute and very loyal never will leave me. l think l w Since this is a hypothetical situation, you should use "would" instead of "will." If you are certain that something is going to happen, then you can use "will." l think l w |
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and then, when l go out the dog can protect my home don't be robbed if have robber.
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but anyway, the dog must be a big dog.
You could also say "The dog must be a big dog, though." |
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The last advantage is the dog is our best friend and a good listener, so l will choose the dog. The last advantage is th "Man's best friend" is the expression you're looking for here The last advantage is th When talking about dogs, we usually say they're "man's best friend" in English, but saying "our best friend" is also okay I think. It has the same meaning and I don't think it sounds weird. |
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