Dec. 13, 2022
If the USA was defeated by Japan in World War II, USA-led Allies would have had signed a cease-fire agreement with Japan. There would be no communism in China, the current territory of China was divided into different puppet states led by Japan. They were XIngjing, Tibet, Mongolia, Manchukuo, North of China, Southeast of China, and Southwest of China where I am living. The former three states are the minority living areas, and Manchukuo would be the most advanced state.
Both Chinese and Japanese are official languages, and only well command of Japanese can have more opportunities to be promoted if you were working for the government.
German and Japanese would become the most majorities of American want to learn.
The most powerful countries would be German-led New Europe and Japan-led New Asia.
If Japan Won the Second World War
If the USA was defeated by Japan in World War II, the USA-led Allies would have had signed a cease-fire agreement with Japan.
There would be no communism in China, and the current territory of China wasould be divided into different puppet states led by Japan.
They werould be XIingjing, Tibet, Mongolia, Manchukuo, North of China, Southeast of China, and Southwest of China where I am living.
The former three states are the minority livingthree former states would make up a minority of the inhabited areas, and Manchukuo would be the most advanced state.
Both Chinese and Japanese arwould be official languages, and only wellthose with strong command of Japanese canwould have more opportunities to be promoted if youthey were working for the government.
German and Japanese would become the most majorities oflanguages most Americans would want to learn.
The most powerful countries would be German-led New Europe and Japan-led New Asia.
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This was very well written! Since this is a hypothetical scenario, the word "would" needs to be used a lot. This is a tricky verb to wrap one's head around, but when used correctly it makes one's writing sound much more natural.
Good job!
If Japan Won the Second World War
If the USA washad been defeated by Japan in World War II, USA-led Allies would have had signed a cease-fire agreement with Japan.
More grammatically correct, which I would recommend since you’re doing a formal report
There would be no communism in China, the current territory of since after the war, China was divided into different puppet states led by Japan.
They wereas XIingjing, Tibet, Mongolia, Manchukuo, North of China, Southeast of China, and Southwest of China, which is where I am currently living.
The former three states are the minority living areaswould of been the minority, and Manchukuo would be the most advanced state.
Both Chinese and Japanese arwould now have been the official languages, and only well command of Japanese canyou would have only haved more opportunities to be promoted if you were working for the government.
German and Japanese would have become the most majorities of Americanwhat Americans would have wanted to learn.
The most powerful countries would be German-led New Europe and Japan-led New Asia.
If Japan Won the Second World War
If the USA was defeated by Japan in World War II, USA-led Allies would have had to have signed a cease-fire agreement with Japan.
This is subjunctive case again.
There would be no communism in China, because the current territory of China wasould be divided into different puppetsatellite states led by Japan.
Subjunctive
They werould be XIngjing, Tibet, Mongolia, Manchukuo, North of China, Southeast of China, and Southwest of China where I am livinglive.
Subjunctive
The former three states awould be where the minorityies living areas, ande while Manchukuo would be the most advanced state.
This is still subjunctive case since you're still hypothesizing.
I'm not sure what you mean by "minority living areas" so this is my best guess.
Both Chinese and Japanese arwould be the official languages, and only wellthose who would have command of the Japanese clanguage would have more opportunities to be promoted if you were working for the government.
Subjunctive
German and Japanese would become the most majorities ofpopular languages which Americans would want to learn.
Subjunctive again.
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If the USA was defeated by Japan in World War II, USA-led Allies would have had signed a cease-fire agreement with Japan. If the USA was defeated by Japan in World War II, USA-led Allies would have had to have signed a cease-fire agreement with Japan. This is subjunctive case again. If the USA More grammatically correct, which I would recommend since you’re doing a formal report If the USA was defeated by Japan in World War II, the USA-led Allies would have had signed a cease-fire agreement with Japan. |
There would be no communism in China, the current territory of China was divided into different puppet states led by Japan. There would be no communism in China Subjunctive There would be no communism in China There would be no communism in China, and the current territory of China w |
They were XIngjing, Tibet, Mongolia, Manchukuo, North of China, Southeast of China, and Southwest of China where I am living. They w Subjunctive They w They w |
The former three states are the minority living areas, and Manchukuo would be the most advanced state. The former three states This is still subjunctive case since you're still hypothesizing. I'm not sure what you mean by "minority living areas" so this is my best guess. The former three states The |
Both Chinese and Japanese are official languages, and only well command of Japanese can have more opportunities to be promoted if you were working for the government. Both Chinese and Japanese Subjunctive Both Chinese and Japanese Both Chinese and Japanese |
German and Japanese would become the most majorities of American want to learn. German and Japanese would become the most Subjunctive again. German and Japanese would have become German and Japanese would become the |
The most powerful countries would be German-led New Europe and Japan-led New Asia. The most powerful countries would be German-led This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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